Whispers in the Wind (Book) - 5/29/2017 12:48:04 PM
This poetry collection inspired me to write my own: Effloresce. Nature is a powerful protagonist and antagonist in any creative venture. Thank you so much for the opportunity to be apart of this unforgettable anthology.
Voices of the World - a poetry anthology (Book) - 5/29/2017 12:45:21 PM
This one is an exciting collection. I am so happy to be apart of it! Thank you for the opportunity to express myself creatively with other worldwide poets!
Voices of the World - a poetry anthology (Book) - 5/24/2017 11:26:05 AM
Thank you for all the hard work you put into "Voices of the World", Lena. I was honored to be among all the talented writers/authors featured in the book as well as yourself.
Love and Dreams,
Karen
Whispers in the Wind (Book) - 3/11/2017 2:53:20 PM
Thank you Lena for all your hard work you put into making this anthology come to fruition!
It is another wonderful work of mental art that paints vivid pictures in our minds.
Thank you for using my treasures so others see my heart.
Blessings and favor as you continue sharing your expertise around the world!
Teresa
Whispers in the Wind (Book) - 2/26/2017 11:51:35 AM
I am very pleased to be part of this anthology; thank you for having provided the opportunity, Lena. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Whispers in the Wind (Book) - 2/21/2017 5:20:35 AM
Thanks, Lena for including me in this anthology. May you have great success with it as people learn what poets here are writing their hearts into.
Ron
Diary of a Crush (Book) - 2/5/2017 2:36:52 AM
A poem that renders your heart to the pain of lost love.
An Unforgettable Journey (Book) - 1/10/2015 10:32:14 AM
Congratulations on your new book, Lena. I hope that it will bring you much success. Love and best wishes,
Regis
The Secret Life of Ashley Miles (Book) - 4/1/2014 2:45:52 PM
Congratulations, Lena! I hope many will enjoy your first novel. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
A Crimson Tide (Book) - 12/11/2012 6:17:30 PM
I'm so excited to read this new book by a wonderful writer. Well done Lena!
A Crimson Tide (Book) - 12/10/2012 8:44:10 PM
Congratulations Lena, NYC girl spectaculaire! I am looking forward to reading you... ...again. Love, hugs, and happiness to you,
xo Regis
Pieces of Me (Book) - 6/8/2010 9:53:45 PM
I just noticed that your book was the one featured so I clicked on it. Congratulations again, Lena. "Pieces of Me" is definitely the best of the three books that I have seen. I've only read a few poems. I am taking my time to enjoy and "feel" what is expressed. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis
Treasure (Book) - 2/24/2010 2:06:01 PM
Yeah Lena! Congratulations to you and I wish you much continued success. I am cheering for you. Love and best wishes,
xo Regis
Her Protection From the Hurt (Short Story) - 11/8/2013 9:17:08 AM
This is so beautiful, and means a lot to me as so many people close to me need a boost- and to see how special they are.
Thanks for sharing.
John
Her Protection From the Hurt (Short Story) - 11/8/2013 8:23:18 AM
Thank you for sharing your story, Lena; your character seems like a fine person. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Cyberspace His Home (Short Story) - 8/3/2013 4:03:32 AM
I think that perhaps, for those who are treated as different to the norm, it is a safe escapism for the most part. After all, the internet cannot harm you physically or invade your private space uninvited.
Love these little micro-expressions of yours, Lena. Always interesting to read.
Rx
Broken Promises (Short Story) - 8/3/2013 3:58:54 AM
More and more we find individuals like these. It is for us to be aware of our own value and learn to cherish ourselves. That way we do not need people like these.
Rx
You Didn't Want Me (Short Story) - 8/3/2013 3:55:14 AM
Another unpleasant quirk of humanity found in those that do wrong, yet manage to blame everyone else.
Rx
You Never Meant What You Said (Short Story) - 8/3/2013 3:53:17 AM
Sadly, men can be very cruel and for many of them, their thought are mostly governed by their 'parts'. The exception to that rule is a rare find,
Rx
You Didn't Want Me (Short Story) - 8/2/2013 3:55:39 PM
Again, his loss. He obviously didn't deserve such. Great girl as you.
Broken Promises (Short Story) - 8/2/2013 3:54:07 PM
I'm sorry you've had this happen, unfortunately I can relate. Know I am always here for you, you have a sister in me.
You Never Meant What You Said (Short Story) - 8/2/2013 3:53:03 PM
That's horrible that happened, I'm so sorry for you. I do think though you got the lucky escape, he may have still ended it even if you did anything or just used you for that by the sounds of him. His loss.
Cyberspace His Home (Short Story) - 8/2/2013 3:51:25 PM
I can completely relate to this. Once I had a social life but now my social life is mainly online.
Broken Promises (Short Story) - 8/2/2013 1:55:37 PM
I know that feeling (and circumstance) now. Again, this is a sad and yet universal and timeless theme it would seem in this life/world. Thank you for sharing, Lena. Love and peace,
Regis
Cyberspace His Home (Short Story) - 8/2/2013 1:53:00 PM
I think that is the case for many "loners" and people who feel unaccepted. It is sad in a way but, at least, they have a way out via cyberspace. Thank you, Lena. Love and best wishes,
Regis
You Never Meant What You Said (Short Story) - 8/2/2013 1:51:36 PM
I guess some guys are like that... ...apparently, a lot. Sad. Thank you for sharing, Lena. Love and peace,
Regis
You Didn't Want Me (Short Story) - 8/2/2013 1:50:23 PM
It is hard to figure out some people. I am greatly disillusioned these days and I cannot seem to shake it. Your story makes me think of my situation in a way. Thank you for sharing, Lena. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Down Into the Unknown (Short Story) - 7/21/2013 7:21:12 AM
I like what you share from the image given to you. This is very imaginative. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Lake Ontario (Moments That Made Me Feel Alive) (Short Story) - 7/21/2013 7:19:47 AM
Reads like living a dream; I love the positive and optimistic tone. Thank you for sharing, Lena. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Roar of the Blender (Short Story) - 7/21/2013 7:15:40 AM
It is true that noises (sounds) as do smells and sights etc. can awaken deep emotions within us. Nicely done, Lena. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Things Left Undone (Short Story) - 7/21/2013 7:13:32 AM
I do like your interpretation (inspiration) of the photo and the phrase. Your words evoke thoughts and emotions.
Lake Ontario (Moments That Made Me Feel Alive) (Short Story) - 7/16/2013 7:03:22 AM
Another little burst of story telling that gives a lot.
Note: My eyes[,] still tried[tired] from the night[,] haven't fully adjusted to the surroundings[.] [Y]et.....
Note: would the birds be singing lullabies if you have just got out of bed? ...maybe 'melodies'?
Like this too :o)
Review update:
This delivers a wonderful moment of serenity. Beautifully enhanced from the original text.
NOTE: Where was I ...and what was I doing here?
It isn't a good idea to start a sentence with 'and' - The use of the three dots gives you a longer pause than a comma, without breaking the sentence - Not entirely correct grammatically, but all writers use a little poetic licence.
Nice job! :o)
Roar of the Blender (Short Story) - 7/16/2013 12:45:23 AM
This is fabulous! The mood of the fight upstairs becomes very real, as does the reaction of the unfortunate witness.
Down Into the Unknown (Short Story) - 7/16/2013 12:42:55 AM
A poignant experience for a child. You portray this very well. There is the great potential for a paintng of this and all the details are there ...again in the one paragraph.
Typo: Would I climb the latter[ladder] of success
Very nicely done.
Things Left Undone (Short Story) - 7/16/2013 12:39:15 AM
Love the concept of this. You have managed to incorporate a lot of great imagery into one paragraph.
Couple of small points i the heading...
Thing[s] will never be the same. What was once[,] will never be again.
Great writing! :o)
A Stop Sign Is All That I See (Article) - 11/8/2013 8:26:32 AM
Interesting perspective, Lena; you make some good points. Ron really has stated it well. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis
A Stop Sign Is All That I See (Article) - 11/7/2013 10:22:20 AM
An interesting question, but one filled with doubt and retreat rather than moving forward. We all face stop signs in our life. I've come across a few myself. Stopped briefly, took a look around and proceeded carefully, knowing that I was making the right choices, much better than those that threw up stop signs. As a result I'm quite happy with my situation and also quite ready to face the final stop sign, my pending death. No one escapes that stop sign.
Ron
What can be done to improve book sales? (Article) - 6/9/2012 5:03:05 PM
My thoughts on what can be done to improve book sales is, generally, who you know and how much money can be put into PR. Sure, it's nice to do book readings and book signings but, really, unless you have a book on a pressing subject and unless, somehow, you can get a newspaper or a radio station or television to do "a piece" on you and/or your book, other than those that may wander in, how else do you reach enough people to make a living... To be able to make a living from your writing? Of course there's always Facebook and all of those "friends". Of course if you can afford a "Facebook" Ad, that will reach 5.4 million people, then, yeah, you may make enough money to pay for your ad and maybe a bit more, but enough to quit your day job? In the long run, I think not. Also, I do believe that the days of paper books are on the way out and, actually, Ebooks will and are the only way to go. Sorry not to be more or even a bit optimistic, but I truly believe that now, with print copy books it is only "the bottom line"that counts and other than those authors that are known and followed, I do not see how anyone can make a sustained living as an author today.
Mark Lichterman
What can be done to improve book sales? (Article) - 11/30/2010 3:14:09 PM
I agree Lena. Authors are not competing against each other when sharing strategies and such.
Promoting your book in every possible way and making sure you "brand" your name is what I've been told and read through research. Some times I do wonder, what if some how there was a way to go outside that "box" and find a way to do something so unusual.........hhmmmmm
Lisa Davis Budzinski
Interesting & Informative Articles... (Article) - 7/12/2010 1:46:21 PM
Having read many (perhaps all) of Lena's hubs, I can attest to the fact that they are interesting and very informative. Thanks, Lena. Keep up the great work. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
What can be done to improve book sales? (Article) - 4/30/2010 10:40:12 AM
I think that is a fair request, Lena. As you know, I am not at all familiar with the publishing "scene" having had only a few of my writings published in anthologies and magazines and such and never having "published" a book as yet. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Lost In The World Of A Talented Soul (Article) - 9/29/2009 10:11:35 AM
The intended recipient of such a tribute is fortunate indeed, Lena. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis
Prose: Tranquility (Article) - 9/29/2009 10:09:32 AM
You have recreated and shared the ambiance of the moment very effectively, Lena. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Prose: Tranquility (Article) - 6/9/2008 10:59:58 AM
Made my colorful tranquility by a new poem to Tom about a yellow butterfly. His cigarette smoke left with him too. Like the words to this and the toughts behind. Glad you posted it. **********
Prose: Tranquility (Article) - 6/9/2008 10:54:28 AM
With subtle strokes of poetic color you captured your subject and brought it to tease all of the reader's senses. Sights, sounds and smells come alive in this captivating write. Well done.
Fee
Poem: Together yet Alone (Poetry) - 12/3/2020 7:34:27 AM
Very poignant and heartfelt. Pulls at my heartstrings on behalf of the two! Much enjoyed. Your rhyming pulled me along as well as the sentiment. It felt like an extra nice Hallmark card read. Sweet and touching.
Poem: Together yet Alone (Poetry) - 1/14/2018 1:41:01 PM
It's hard to find someone who fulfills you inside and takes away the gaping hole of loneliness.
Poem: Together yet Alone (Poetry) - 11/9/2017 4:27:29 PM
You describe it to a "T"! I know!
Love ya!
Jane
Poem: Together yet Alone (Poetry) - 11/7/2017 9:34:40 AM
There's pain, pleading and hope, with the daring hope in which the poem culminates coming across as its most powerful part. There's loneliness in every togetherness. How to understand it, how to overcome it - hope and daring are indeed always an important part of the answer to these questions.
Poem: Together yet Alone (Poetry) - 11/3/2017 9:26:48 AM
I can relate to the theme and the emotions expressed in your verses here, Lena. Love and best wishes,
Régis
Poem: Off to the Woods I Go (Poetry) - 7/25/2016 4:44:52 AM
Your enjoyment is evident in every line. No wonder you always come out a winner ...
Poem: Off to the Woods I Go (Poetry) - 7/19/2016 7:07:07 AM
Descriptive and made me feel as though I was walking with you.
Always,
Deborah
Poem: Incomplete (Poetry) - 7/17/2016 10:48:01 AM
I try to soar...
Always,
Deborah
Poem: Off to the Woods I Go (Poetry) - 7/17/2016 7:35:22 AM
As a rhymer your mushrooms certainly were a winner, can't wait to have them fried for dinner! It made me think of those desperate souls often lost in the woods, scrounging for something to eat to survive. And then there is the side that you paint in this poem of how tranquil and beautiful the woods can be while we're out gathering its bounty. A sharp contrast.
Ron
Poem: Off to the Woods I Go (Poetry) - 7/16/2016 5:21:17 PM
Lena~
Cool breeze and radiant rays, scent of the pines.
Marveling at what gently flows around you.
Mushrooms simmer for a delightful feast. Ahhhhh!
Lady Mary Ann
Poem: Off to the Woods I Go (Poetry) - 7/16/2016 10:57:11 AM
Getting into nature and enjoying the view, smells and stopping every now and then to give your basket for a nature's treat in the later on.
Poem: Off to the Woods I Go (Poetry) - 7/16/2016 10:05:26 AM
I feel right at home reading this lovely write overflowing with imagery that I can nearly hear and smell! I hope you enjoyed your mushroom feast!!
Love ya!
Jane
Poem: Incomplete (Poetry) - 7/16/2016 7:30:02 AM
Lena~
And whenever you're falling you'll too soar above.
Lovely write.
Lady Mary Ann
Poem: Incomplete (Poetry) - 7/14/2016 6:48:42 AM
Could also be titled, Unrequited. Yes, love certainly has its ups and downs, and perhaps because we are all different can never be quite the same whether one is a couple or not.
Ron
Poem: Incomplete (Poetry) - 7/13/2016 4:30:46 PM
I am sure many can relate to the theme expressed through your verses, Lena. Some people just don't know how to love. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: Incomplete (Poetry) - 7/13/2016 1:17:21 PM
Ah! Unrequited love is a hard thing to experience for sure. You give your all hoping the other feels the same way but feel alone when you're with him...............I have known this feeling. It's painful and will turn a heart to stone. You have touched the heart with this one. It's a keeper!
Love ya!
Jane
Poem: Through the Looking Glass (Poetry) - 6/14/2016 6:50:54 PM
6-14-2016
Sometimes We You Don't Know How
Lucky You Are ,i.e .Simply Turn Around
Walk Away Never Look Back!!
Kool Write On!
TRASK...
Poem: Through the Looking Glass (Poetry) - 6/13/2016 1:51:59 PM
As the song says..."Love Hurts"....
Your words are pained but beautiful...
Diana...
Poem: Through the Looking Glass (Poetry) - 6/12/2016 5:12:52 AM
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! ''You are the melody inside my heart''---- I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Poem: Through the Looking Glass (Poetry) - 6/12/2016 12:39:47 AM
A lovely poem, but...I would have felt a little more emotion with a bit more crying, flailing or clenching of teeth.
Poem: Through the Looking Glass (Poetry) - 6/11/2016 4:41:43 PM
Lena~
Passionate the melody and the heartbreak of sorrow!
Well written Lena!
Lady Mary Ann
Poem: Through the Looking Glass (Poetry) - 6/11/2016 10:52:47 AM
I do understand and I feel both ecstasy and pain. Great write!
Love ya!
Jane
Poem: Through the Looking Glass (Poetry) - 6/11/2016 9:07:15 AM
Most moving and meaningful to me since I can relate to these verses that are replete with feelings and symbolism. Thank you for sharing, Lena. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: Through the Looking Glass (Poetry) - 6/11/2016 8:17:23 AM
Lots of loss and pain expressed in this attempt at love.
Ron
Poem: The Strangest Dream (Poetry) - 5/5/2016 10:21:14 AM
Dreams can also come true!
Always,
Deborah
Poem: The Strangest Dream (Poetry) - 5/1/2016 11:33:43 AM
Nice and funny,
the kiss did the trick,
not the toes and not the nose!
Thanks for sharing, Lena!
Poem: The Strangest Dream (Poetry) - 4/29/2016 8:48:15 AM
You had me laughing to your lilting lines. You certainly know what it takes to wake your honey up.
Ron
Poem: The Strangest Dream (Poetry) - 4/28/2016 3:13:16 PM
Lena~
Dreamscapes are so fun. Changing ever to a moment in
bizarre happenings. Great writing.
Lady Mary Ann
Poem: The Strangest Dream (Poetry) - 4/28/2016 12:14:57 PM
That is quite delightful, Lena; dreams can be weird, that's for sure. I've had a few these past couple of nights. Sometimes, I don't remember my dreams for quite a few days... ...and then, they come back. I think you forgot a "d" in verse ten.
Regis
Poem: The Strangest Dream (Poetry) - 4/28/2016 12:14:06 PM
Such a sweet poem. Such a wild dream!!!
Love ya!
Jane
Poem: The Worries At Night (Poetry) - 1/11/2016 7:02:34 AM
A sad view of living with a self-centered man. You portray the picture clearly, rousing much sympathy for her. The last verse is compelling...seems there's nothing to be done because her heart is always faithful.
Connie
Poem: The Worries At Night (Poetry) - 11/5/2015 12:01:34 PM
I know these worries and anger very well and can empathize with you.
Love ya!
Jane
Poem: The Worries At Night (Poetry) - 11/5/2015 10:06:40 AM
Well, I know that someone has seemed to have vanished from my life so I can relate. It is worrisome for sure. I can relate to this. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: Memories Of You (Poetry) - 10/3/2015 8:07:00 AM
The person you speak of in poem, I assume had a great impact
on your life and your acknowledgement gives this person
validation...
Always,
Deborah
Poem: This Nightmare (Poetry) - 10/2/2015 12:48:11 PM
You call it a nightmare because of fear or losing
something, someone or possibly yourself? Sounds
like you are in the process of sorting it out...Enjoyed
Lena.
Always,
Deborah
Poem: Memories Of You (Poetry) - 10/2/2015 8:32:49 AM
Yes, let us never forget to appreciate the sacrifices others have made for people around them.
Love ya!
Jane
Poem: This Nightmare (Poetry) - 10/2/2015 8:29:53 AM
Fight it! Do NOT give in to it. I feel and understand what you are putting across.
Love ya!
Jane
Poem: This Nightmare (Poetry) - 10/2/2015 6:23:26 AM
This nightmare is not happening at night. It is obvious that you wish to change things and I hope that you will find a way soon out of the nightmare you are in.
Ron
Poem: This Nightmare (Poetry) - 10/2/2015 2:35:18 AM
a sorrowful write, much pain felt
Poem: A Visit To Your Underground Lair (Poetry) - 8/24/2015 10:14:19 PM
Exulting words, comforting words, we each handle death of loved ones differently, take time to grieve differently and lastly, believe we will see oour loved ones again in Heaven.
Poem: A Visit To Your Underground Lair (Poetry) - 8/5/2015 6:58:58 AM
A bit morbid. We can't retrieve the dead or be with them. While I will visit graves of loved ones, I have no desire to join them. But I can see were someone might be so dependent on someone (codependent?) In life, that they want to be with them in death, as well.
Ron
Poem: A Visit To Your Underground Lair (Poetry) - 8/4/2015 3:12:25 PM
Very nicely done. Love brings out the very best in us. Eh, the worst too. But this is the best.
Poem: A Visit To Your Underground Lair (Poetry) - 8/4/2015 10:42:54 AM
The imagery within your verses awakens thought and emotion; very effectively expressed, Lena. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: Your Hazel Eyes (Poetry) - 8/4/2015 8:09:03 AM
Such a lovely poem you wrote!! Kudos!
Love ya!
Jane
Poem: Your Hazel Eyes (Poetry) - 8/4/2015 7:39:06 AM
It is a lovely poem, Lena. Thank you for sharing it. No one including me has ever been able to tell the color of my eyes. Maybe it is because they do not "work" together. I do not know. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: My Tears (Poetry) - 8/2/2015 7:44:19 AM
For what it's worth, your poem also gets a big "thumbs up" from me.
Poem: Oceans (Poetry) - 8/1/2015 5:43:27 AM
Bravo!
Poem: My Tears (Poetry) - 7/30/2015 11:23:31 AM
"...To Cleansed the soul from the binding hurt"
Wonderful are your tears, Lena!
Thanks for sharing!
Poem: My Tears (Poetry) - 7/29/2015 1:23:23 PM
"And soak the feathered pillow of tomorrow"
Wonderful imagery within these words.
Thanks
Chris
Poem: My Tears (Poetry) - 7/29/2015 6:19:05 AM
Congratulations on your award. I don't know if it was for this poem or not.
Crying is an honest emotion and certainly does have some therapeutic value for overcoming fear or loss. While we tend to want to "hold back" the tears consciously, the unconscious often takes over and seems to provide relief from great sorrow. When we are very young, we tend to cry when we're angry. For most of us, that goes away with maturity. But we still cry. Even the most denier will cry. It's only a matter of what triggers it.
Ron
Poem: My Tears (Poetry) - 7/28/2015 2:41:52 PM
Oh, do I agree with Regis!
Love ya!
Jane
Poem: My Tears (Poetry) - 7/28/2015 12:00:22 PM
I too believe that tears are most therapeutic. I ought to know. They are also very symbolic and indicative of sensitivity and much more. Love and best wishes to you, Lena.
Regis
Poem: My Tears (Poetry) - 7/28/2015 9:32:35 AM
I tend to agree with you that tears, along with the trauma inside you which brings the tears on, will definitely cleanse you and has a tendency of allowing you to emerge as a different person, having leaned a valuable lesson.
Poem: My Tears (Poetry) - 7/28/2015 9:10:54 AM
Tears clense the pain away.. Lovely poem
Poem: Your Words (Poetry) - 7/22/2015 8:29:33 AM
Yes, words can hurt,
and so, one should always think
before one speak!
Poem: Your Words (Poetry) - 7/13/2015 5:44:19 PM
Lena,
All my life words have always hurt me more than physical. My parents could spank me for doing wrong and I'd never cry but if they scolded me my heart would break. That goes for everyone in my life, even now as an adult. Yes, words can hurt.
Love and blessings,
Linda
Poem: Your Words (Poetry) - 7/13/2015 6:31:36 AM
There is conflict in this poem between true love and hurtful remarks. The latter cuts into the former.
Ron
Poem: Your Words (Poetry) - 7/12/2015 12:50:02 PM
I have already commented elsewhere on this poem so you know how I feel. Suffice it to say that I can completely related and understand. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: Your Words (Poetry) - 7/12/2015 12:40:01 PM
I understand.
Love ya~!
Jane
Poem: Your Words (Poetry) - 7/12/2015 12:38:53 PM
Sounds like you have trouble even though that love "Is strong and real."
Poem: You Made Me Rot (Poetry) - 6/2/2015 11:05:49 AM
Don't let anyone measure your worth. Face the storm and walk, girl. I really do understand.
Love ya!
Jane
Poem: You Made Me Rot (Poetry) - 5/28/2015 5:47:20 PM
5-28-2015:
Now You Should Just Turn Walk Away
And Do Not Never Look Back!
TRASK...
Poem: You Made Me Rot (Poetry) - 5/27/2015 8:08:59 AM
The bitterness is almost palpable. Time to leave that memory behind and move on into the open and "shine under the sun."
Ron
Poem: You Made Me Rot (Poetry) - 5/25/2015 8:33:38 AM
How cruel and you are a gorgeous bouquet without him!
Always,
Deborah
Poem: You Made Me Rot (Poetry) - 5/24/2015 4:10:11 PM
This is a sad story, Lena. I hope you have recovered from the pain that it caused.
Connie
Poem: You Made Me Rot (Poetry) - 5/24/2015 12:38:22 PM
I can relate to the theme that is expressed through your verses, Lena. I also appreciate the metaphorical and symbolic qualities of this poem. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Poem: I Shouldn't Be Here (Poetry) - 1/22/2014 2:52:49 PM
I can relate to this all too well.
Not much choice but to hang around.
There are such blessings I embrace- but most seem in spite of being here.
John
Poem: Catching the Bouquet Doesn't Mean Marriage (Poetry) - 11/12/2013 12:45:11 PM
Traditions meaningless captured, but
love can come when you least expect it..don't
ever give up for the right one to land at your feet
Lady Vivian
Poem: Same Guy, Another Rejection (Poetry) - 11/12/2013 12:38:52 PM
Beauty of Love in
your verse, but
not of Love
gone awry
Lady Vivian
Poem: Same Guy, Another Rejection (Poetry) - 11/8/2013 8:34:07 AM
Emotionally compelling and honestly stated, Lena. Did you mean "grant" hall or "grand" hall? Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: Catching the Bouquet Doesn't Mean Marriage (Poetry) - 11/7/2013 1:03:15 AM
The guys that glance briefly then look the other way may think you are out of their league. Spot something they are buying and ask if it's the better brand or something like that. They won't all fall at your feet but it's a good time to smile and one of them might be Mr Right, you never know.
Poem: Same Guy, Another Rejection (Poetry) - 11/7/2013 12:58:14 AM
This man is not worth YOUR time Lena. He is a peacock who thinks far too highly of himself, which means he will never think highly enough of anyone else.
If you focus on him, you will miss your greatest opportunity as all the nice guys will pass unnoticed.
Poem: Catching the Bouquet Doesn't Mean Marriage (Poetry) - 11/5/2013 8:43:00 AM
Yes, I wonder who invented always rituals. The idea that a "diamond is forever," is the biggest scam of all, perpetrated by DeBeers, the Dutch company that has a lock on the diamond market and controls prices.
A supermarket is a good place to meet someone. Just walk up to an eligible guy and start asking him about some product or something, and quickly find out whether he is single or not before you move further. Guys don't mind if the woman takes a first step.
Ron
Poem: Catching the Bouquet Doesn't Mean Marriage (Poetry) - 11/4/2013 2:59:50 PM
For some reason that tradition always did bother me, a lot.
This so well captures the feelings I'm sure so many people face over such things. Little stings that keep on stinging.
A real heart breaker.
But that means a real heart, and that's a prize when folks know what is good for them.
John
Poem: I Shouldn't Be Here (Poetry) - 8/6/2013 12:53:03 AM
In case you need to change your courses peacefully and the people would really be your friends. bustling work!
Fakhre
Poem: What is a Poem? (Poetry) - 8/5/2013 5:03:56 PM
Well Penned
a poem is expression of the soul
Love & Peace be with you
William
Poem: I Shouldn't Be Here (Poetry) - 7/25/2013 9:00:07 PM
This tells me you are capable of placing yourself outside of your comfort zone to feel what it feels like to be an outsider from the inside. I shouldn't be here says a lot more in those unedited lines which tell more truths than something you had to work over and over. This rings of the ability to create and do so profoundly. Excellent work, Lena.
Poem: I Shouldn't Be Here (Poetry) - 7/24/2013 7:56:25 AM
A thought-provoking piece, Lena. I certainly can relate to what you have expressed through your verses and I am sure many others can as well. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: I Shouldn't Be Here (Poetry) - 7/19/2013 8:38:22 AM
Lena, I and all of us have felt we did not belong. People being of
different classes, schooling, etc. I have felt intimidated, alienated, shy...I'm sure you get the picture. Enjoyed.
Always,
Deborah
Poem: I Shouldn't Be Here (Poetry) - 7/17/2013 9:24:38 PM
Constructive to be your thoughts,
being of vision, Lena
Lady Vivian
Poem: I Shouldn't Be Here (Poetry) - 7/16/2013 7:56:35 AM
It's understandable for someone to be alienated when they are thrown into a totally new environment that they are unable to communicate effectively in. It's another thing for someone who is growing up in an environment and feels alien in it. I have a hard time identifying with that kind of alienation, although there are some things about the culture that I grew up in, that I despise.
Very psychological and instructive poem.
Ron
Poem: I Shouldn't Be Here (Poetry) - 7/16/2013 6:56:44 AM
I think those of us, who differ from 'the norm' often feel this way. Your words bring this feeling alive perfectly.
Poem: I Shouldn't Be Here (Poetry) - 7/15/2013 2:03:12 PM
Definite depth to this. It's one if those things you could go mad if you thought about it too much. Interesting thoughts you brought up though.
Poem: Embraced By The Darkness (Poetry) - 7/9/2013 11:59:51 AM
As you know, I am very much "in tune" with these feelings that you share via your verses here, Lena. I must have missed this before although that seems unlikely. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Song: Keep On Running (Poetry) - 7/5/2013 3:06:34 PM
I can't wait to hear it with music! The lyrics are strong but with rolling repeats, easy to follow!
Poem: Limericks Treat 2 (Poetry) - 7/5/2013 2:58:37 PM
Enjoyed your fun limericks, Lena! A departure from your usual style... we all need a little fun now and then!
Poem: More Than My Heart Can Take (Poetry) - 7/2/2013 6:05:37 AM
Know this feeling only too well as it's a very recent event for me. You express it exactly as it is and I can only sympathise. The only way to quell such sorrow is by way of distance ...as many miles as possible.
Your ability with the English language is to be commended. If only I could grasp french as firmly.
Poem: A Dream Or Not? (Poetry) - 7/1/2013 10:32:54 AM
Love the stark imagery here. very dramatic mental scenery comes with your rich word selections.
Potent writing power!
Rx
Note: The original is not underneath as suggested t the top of this page.
Song: Keep On Running (Poetry) - 6/25/2013 7:38:13 PM
A very nice poetic love song!
May you have much peace, love and abundant blessings,
John Michael Domino
Song: Keep On Running (Poetry) - 6/25/2013 11:59:46 AM
I hope you can put a link to this where it is put to melody. It seems to have all the right ingredients to draw the listener in.
Ron
Song: Keep On Running (Poetry) - 6/25/2013 11:25:28 AM
Love has no warnings when it wraps its arms around your heart and then breaks it. If we could only know in advance but then who knows.
George
Song: Keep On Running (Poetry) - 6/25/2013 11:05:32 AM
Along the pathway..always to
remember love as a state of mind
for appreciating your song, Lena
Lady Vivian
Song: Keep On Running (Poetry) - 6/25/2013 10:11:53 AM
Ain't love grand? I can relate to the theme expressed in this song. Thank you for sharing it, Lena. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Song: Keep On Running (Poetry) - 6/25/2013 9:59:23 AM
wow nice song, I can defintely relate.
Song: Keep On Running (Poetry) - 6/25/2013 9:24:24 AM
I like the flow in this song.This is deep.One can understand what you are going through.
Song: Keep On Running (Poetry) - 6/25/2013 8:36:39 AM
i can understand this the down, down is so hurtful
budd
Poem: Nothing Matters (Poetry) - 5/28/2013 10:53:00 AM
Enjoyed this piece, it is strange I am working on a poem in a similar poetic frame of mind.
Poem: Treasure Part II - Luc & Belle (Poetry) - 4/29/2013 11:13:11 AM
As you know, I have read this before. I do admire that you wrote in rhyming verse. As you also know, this is not a theme of which I am fond. However, that is not to mean that many others would not enjoy reading about and perhaps get involved in the tale that you spin. There are some verses in which the rhythm does not quite "work" but it does not take away from the story, just the flow of the verses. Thank you for sharing, Lena.
Song: Together Forever (Poetry) - 3/21/2013 4:51:57 AM
Well Lena I am sorry for you that things didn't work out for you but as talented in Poetry as you seem to be. I am sure the right guy will knock on the door of your heart some day--as for the other guy that's not part of your life,that is his loss--loved your poem
Song: Together Forever (Poetry) - 2/25/2013 11:54:29 AM
I left a comment on this yesterday and pointed out a couple of typos. I don't see my review.
Song: Together Forever (Poetry) - 2/25/2013 7:42:10 AM
Makes a wonderful statement about lasting love in any song. Unfortunately, so many relationships start out this way but end up differently after the song was written.
I'm thinking of Phil Collins song, In the Air Tonight, where he sings, “ I was there and I saw what you did, saw it with my own two eyes…”
Ron
Song: Together Forever (Poetry) - 2/24/2013 10:23:36 AM
Powerful love poem and it's a shame it didn't have a happy ending for you.
Poem: Embraced By The Darkness (Poetry) - 2/14/2013 9:03:15 AM
That is one Valentine that you have to drop in the wastebasket and move on.
Ron
Poem: Limericks Treat 2 (Poetry) - 2/13/2013 11:13:37 AM
Well. For someone who told me many times that you did not understand limericks, you seem to have caught the limerick bug. I have some suggestions that I will attempt to share on FB. Thanks for the smiles, Lena. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Poem: Treasure (Poetry) - 1/11/2013 12:17:23 PM
OOOO, YESSS! So romantic. Fin found his treasure, for certain sure. As we all do, if we wait for the right mate. :)
A fable well-told.
Poem: Treasure (Poetry) - 1/11/2013 12:03:59 PM
This epic poem is indeed a treasure. I look forward to reading more.
Ron
Poem: Treasure (Poetry) - 1/11/2013 10:20:38 AM
Magical and enchanting and evoking another time and place ¢¾; of course, I am fortunate to have enjoyed the entire tale since I purchased your book. Thank you for sharing this, Lena. Love and best wishes to you,
xo Regis
Poem: Heart Filled with Arias (Poetry) - 1/9/2013 1:11:08 PM
Tender and beautiful tribute to your grandparents. I understand him! I have a singing hesrt, too, and like Pavarotti and Puccini. Only Mussorgsky's Boris Godunov can match those two. Best wishes, ken
Poem: Limericks Treat (Poetry) - 1/9/2013 2:10:37 AM
Hilarious and playful. Put a smile on my face this morning!
Poem: Limericks Treat (Poetry) - 1/8/2013 4:04:45 PM
I very much enjoyed these Lena, please write more soon!!
Poem: Limericks Treat (Poetry) - 1/7/2013 2:28:30 PM
hey such a collection of these thank you
budd
Poem: Limericks Treat (Poetry) - 1/7/2013 11:37:07 AM
As you know, I love limericks. I enjoyed these, Lena. Of course, I would like to "tinker" with them but they are your limericks, not mine. Thank you for sharing.
I know a lady from New York,
Who has made a boat out of cork;
She's on her way here,
And what I most fear,
Is that she's going to put me to work.
Love and best wishes to you, Lena;
xo Regis
Song: Letter (Poetry) - 12/13/2012 12:10:07 PM
Sad song, Lena. It reminds me of the Beatles' "No Reply." Thank you for sharing. I know you did not write to me because I would have replied. ☺ ¢¾ Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: What is a Poem? (Poetry) - 12/10/2012 8:54:50 PM
Yes! Thank you for giving me (the reader) a description of yourself. Love and best wishes to you, Lena ☺¢¾,
Regis
Song: Rapture Paradise (Poetry) - 9/18/2012 8:54:42 AM
This is odd because I am sure I've read this when you first posted it and I know I wrote a comment. In any case, I'm glad to read it again. Your lyrics share a special experience that appeals to the soul and the senses. Thank you, Lena. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: It's Time For You To Learn How To Drive (Poetry) - 7/8/2012 8:52:27 PM
Never an easy way to say goodbye, and yet this delicate poem exudes experience and compassion... with faith a tie that seems severed is really knotted closer and tighter than ever before... and I don't mean mere memories... a fact your poem so poignantly portrays... thank you so much for this loving portrait of a dear loved one's passing...
Thank you, Lena.
Roger
Poem: It's Time For You To Learn How To Drive (Poetry) - 6/24/2012 1:20:20 PM
They are right. This is intense but I don't understand what happened. I must be stupid. It's about death. I hate death. So I don't get it. Love and best wishes to you, Lena...
Regis
Poem: It's Time For You To Learn How To Drive (Poetry) - 6/23/2012 11:41:39 AM
Wow! That was an intense. Death can be. I like the idea of a premonition. Reminds me of when my aunt put her husband in a veterans' home. They never had a car, but she learned how at 55, bought a car and started driving.
Ron
Poem: The Pond (Poetry) - 6/7/2012 6:21:13 PM
Enchantingly, hauntingly told, this is full of visions and illusion and solution. I like that you gave the woman and man names and dialogue, good detail about the ring, and that there was physical action which brought the writing to life. You made this a visual treat. Thanks ~~ Diana
Song: Underneath (Poetry) - 6/7/2012 7:07:18 AM
an enlightening poetic psychological assessment on the internal nature of the individual and how the world reacts to what it cannot see ...
Song: Underneath (Poetry) - 6/6/2012 9:40:40 PM
Lovely song, Lena! I could feel different tones of music that would suit this piece, wish I knew how to combine them.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Song: Underneath (Poetry) - 6/6/2012 9:31:35 AM
This is a very revealing poem/song that tells a lot about the author.
Ron
Poem: The Pond (Poetry) - 6/5/2012 3:39:39 PM
really sad moment..i even can't imagine how hurt her feeling!!
Song: Underneath (Poetry) - 6/5/2012 1:53:29 PM
The theme expressed through your verses here is sadly a universal and timeless one in this world/life. I can relate to what you have expressed. I have written along the same lines and one poem that is of a similar theme that I have posted here at AD is entitled, "Keep Smiling." Thank you, Lena. Love and best wishes,
Regis ☺
Poem: The Pond (Poetry) - 6/5/2012 12:13:10 PM
A tragedy reminiscent of the several lovers leaps found around the country were supposedly, a grieving other half jumped to join a lost love in death.
Ron
Poem: The Pond (Poetry) - 6/5/2012 9:35:21 AM
Thank you for sharing this bittersweetly, sad romantic tale, Lena. I love the idea of the portal. A couple of typos: In the second verse of the third stanza, I think you mean "bear." In the third verse of the fourth stanza, I think you meant to write "standing." Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Poem: The Pain of Yesterday (Poetry) - 6/5/2012 4:49:24 AM
the pain of yesterday...gone...for you both. fine work. thanks
asa
Poem: The Pain of Yesterday (Poetry) - 6/1/2012 10:43:08 AM
If one must suffer, I would wish for death as you describe. My partner and I often discuss this subject, but never come to a satisfactory conclusion.
It appears your pain is over–that is good.
Ron
Poem: The Pain of Yesterday (Poetry) - 5/30/2012 3:38:03 PM
My sympathy is extended to you, Lena. I suppose it is true that passing from this place and time can often be a relief... ...and a new beginning. I think you meant to write "ceased" in the eighth verse. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: Heart Filled with Arias (Poetry) - 4/16/2012 8:47:44 AM
A loving and meaningful and expressive write, Lena. True love never fades and "lost love" gives rise to hurt that time never really heals; at least, that's my take on it. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: More Than My Heart Can Take (Poetry) - 4/9/2012 12:16:01 AM
There is no way to stop feeling for someone in any easy way. The hurt is greater sometimes than what we can bear but we must move on with our lives as soon as we realize they were not worth our time. You wrote of this quite well, Lena. I also see that English was not your natural language but it is commendable how well you write it.
Poem: More Than My Heart Can Take (Poetry) - 4/3/2012 11:54:11 AM
This is very powerful meaningfully and emotionally. I wish I could fix it. I think you deserve better. It is fine for people to say that we should not let another "mean so much" but it just happens. I've been there and done that. I just wish you goodness and healing, Lena. ☻¢¾
Poem: More Than My Heart Can Take (Poetry) - 3/31/2012 2:17:14 PM
Lena
I think we have to come to the conclusion rapidly that no one person should ever hold such sway over our heart.
It is not good or healthy for us.
Peter
Poem: More Than My Heart Can Take (Poetry) - 3/31/2012 7:45:49 AM
Your heartache pulses throughout your verses. A memorable write.
Connie
Song: Lullaby For The Broken Hearted (Poetry) - 12/15/2011 3:22:46 PM
Nicely done, Lena. Your song is there to encourage those who are hurting; I know. I have been there. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Poem: Without You (Poetry) - 9/5/2011 9:04:32 PM
Great ending, so intense, passionate, love it.
Poem: Without You (Poetry) - 9/4/2011 6:50:37 AM
emotions expressed coherently ...
Poem: Without You (Poetry) - 9/3/2011 8:50:54 AM
A very moving and meaningful and expressive write, Lena. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Poem: A Night of Memories (Poetry) - 8/15/2011 10:09:19 AM
A lovely tale of love found, Lena; it reminds me of a fairy tale with a fine ending. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Song: Never Over (Poetry) - 8/7/2011 9:36:21 PM
Yes, I think we have all felt this deeply at one time or another. I bet it sounds even better sung aloud.
Song: Never Over (Poetry) - 8/6/2011 8:21:42 PM
Well. I cannot disagree with what you have shared via your lyrics, Lena. I've experienced that pain. Right now I'm fortunate it seems. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Song: Loves Her To Death (Poetry) - 7/7/2011 8:24:11 PM
Very darkly romantic, haunting in its bittersweet song.
Song: Loves Her To Death (Poetry) - 7/7/2011 8:06:53 PM
A compelling song, Lena; and I love good endings so I love the way this story ends. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Song: It's Too Late (What's Done Is Done) (Poetry) - 6/27/2011 10:31:18 AM
Harsh, stark and sadly, all too real too often, Lena. It is clear that your lyrics were powerfully inspired. Very well done! Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Song: Through A Child's Eyes (Poetry) - 3/24/2011 10:51:56 AM
Just because they aren’t twenty-one years old yet
Doesn’t mean there’s nothing wise inside their head
They can teach us things we never knew existed
I find your song most meaningful, Lena. I can attest to the fact that a lot can be learned from children and youth; a lot of adults have forgotten too quickly how to be more like them. That is why I am not insulted when people say that I never "grew up." A very fine song; thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Poem: Your Letters From The Sea (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 5:05:00 PM
Great usage of words, not one word wasted.
I hope the dark night is over for you.
Kewl to hear the word Skiff.
Song: For A Time (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 1:53:54 PM
I'll post a poem my grandfather wrote- that I read at my Dad's funeral. I'll post in blogs. I miss them both always- Dad and Grandpa.
Beautiful tribute.
John
Song: For A Time (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 1:30:53 PM
A lovely, loving, and meaningful song and tribute for your grandpa, Lena. I am sorry for your loss; some things are not erased by time passing. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: The Snow Cycle (Poetry) - 1/22/2011 7:03:15 PM
A true study "en blanc" - I see you've been observing snow's cycle for sometime. And it is true about "city snows" - so beautiful but so soon turn ugly. It does quiet the city world for a time though...nice work!
Poem: The Snow Cycle (Poetry) - 1/22/2011 9:26:53 AM
Excellent images bring out this view of the Snow Cycle.
Poem: The Snow Cycle (Poetry) - 1/21/2011 12:13:58 PM
Your thoughts about snow are so "in sync" with mine, Lena. I find the contrast between the purity and the beauty of snow and the dirty sand and salt of man very effective, meaningful, and symbolic. Please send snow my way. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Song: Angel (Poetry) - 1/10/2011 5:08:30 AM
I really like this poem and the way you started off with your feelings of being their alone. Then joining up with them and becoming one guarding all in the end. I love these kind of poems. I am a lush. Excellent!!
Song: Going Under (The Weather) (Poetry) - 1/3/2011 8:48:48 PM
Sweet love song, Lena; or song about love. It sure "works" for me. I think it says a lot about some guys... ...not me, of course. :) Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Song: (Sometimes) Words Are A Weapon (Poetry) - 12/21/2010 3:54:25 PM
Would that our own confident, positive self-image were all-sufficient, and that no-one could steal our self-esteem unless we granted them permission, but alas not all are as independent-minded. Thus, your poem strikes a chord in most people, but not all. I did enjoy seeing your way with words. At once so disparaging and disarming. Thank you for sharing, Lena.
Song: (Sometimes) Words Are A Weapon (Poetry) - 12/12/2010 7:23:31 PM
I have been there...thank you for putting it all into words...God Bless you...you are beautiful and you are loved Sue
Song: (Sometimes) Words Are A Weapon (Poetry) - 12/12/2010 11:01:07 AM
Your lyrics are most apt and timely in this age of bullying of all forms, Lena. I can imagine a rapper artist doing this song; and I'm sure it could be adapted to other genres as well. I am also amazed at how your theme coincides with the central idea of my latest poem which is born of personal experience and which I know you have read since you left such a detailed and meaningful review of it. Thank you for sharing, Lena. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Poem: Sick and Tired (Poetry) - 12/1/2010 6:36:04 AM
Lena,
Loved your rhyme and verses. I also do rhyme and it isn't always easy but this poem is exceptional. I felt your pain in this write.
Blessings,
~Linda
Poem: Sick and Tired (Poetry) - 11/30/2010 4:15:32 PM
"I wanna near others"
I don't quite understand the above verse. Is there a word missing? In any case, it does not diminish the anguish expressed powerfully and poignantly in your verses, Lena. I dislike conflict immensely. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Poem: Emotional Battle (Poetry) - 11/30/2010 4:12:18 PM
Where I'll be swimming in bliss
I think perhaps you might be inadvertently referring to heaven, Lena. Your theme as expressed via your verses is a universal and timeless one. I am sure many can relate. I know I can. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Poem: Memories (Poetry) - 11/10/2010 2:59:25 PM
Love, never goes out of style. Very well done.
Song: Perfect Stranger (Poetry) - 10/9/2010 3:57:24 AM
wow--I love this poem-- " Perfect Stranger "--Perfect Poem
Poem: Memories (Poetry) - 9/20/2010 3:54:30 AM
A very evocative poem, Lena
Poem: Memories (Poetry) - 9/19/2010 5:53:33 PM
Powerfully symbolic, Lena. Love and memories, and memories of love; such themes are timeless in this world/life and thus your readers (including me) are drawn into your verses. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Song: Promises, Promises (Poetry) - 8/14/2010 6:31:03 AM
Lena, this is a HIT...how I can relate to this song..yes promises are broken..I promise you though, I do keep mine!..that has always been me..great song
Chrissie
Song: Promises, Promises (Poetry) - 8/12/2010 4:06:13 PM
Great lyrics and I'm sure there's music to go with it. A gal type Country Western.
george
Song: Promises, Promises (Poetry) - 8/12/2010 3:51:38 PM
I like the brutal truth of this one, how you are not afraid to say what is on your mind. Promises aren't always kept and vows of love aren't always life long...well done Lena.
fee
Song: Promises, Promises (Poetry) - 8/12/2010 1:05:58 PM
A sad song in a way but a very real and seemingly timeless theme in this world/life. Thanks for sharing, Lena. Love and best wishes,
Regis
