illusion (Book) - 12/22/2008 12:05:38 PM
I guess when you're first starting out it's all about passion and talent, and you have both! I enjoyed this and kept thinking that Hannah might have two realities, one where she's mad and the other where she has a harried existence and a wonderful marriage. But you'll find your way, I'm sure.
A Work In Progress (Article) - 12/22/2008 2:56:01 PM
It's good to ask ourselves the eternal questions, and also to realize that there are no firm answers. It's all subjective, even the idea of perfection is subjective and can hold various meanings according to disposition, race, environment, etc. But keep up the good work, I really think you're onto something.
The Wanderer (Poetry) - 3/1/2009 2:30:05 AM
Excellent poem,very well written,take care
Edwin
The Curse of Man/ Procrastinator (Poetry) - 12/22/2008 2:58:22 AM
I enjoy reading these poems.They are well written.Just like you,I absolutely love writing poems and recently songs.Take good care of yourself :-)
Edwin
I Am Not Ready (Poetry) - 12/22/2008 2:55:22 AM
This is a very good poem.I enjoy reading it and I like your style.There is indeed nothing wrong with trying new things in your writing.That's what makes poetry unique :-)take care of yourself and continue to write poems like this.I've enjoyed reading them
Edwin
I Must (Poetry) - 12/22/2008 2:51:57 AM
An excellent poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin