Unstoppable love (Short Story) - 4/18/2009 6:16:50 AM
Masimba,
Very romantic story. Although faculty and teacher relationships are usually frowned upon, true love transcends all society's rules. Excellent write.
Mar
Crocodile tears (Poetry) - 9/2/2009 3:54:18 AM
Thank You for this excellent write
Now he must pay at judgment day
Peace be with you
William
I am not fake (Poetry) - 9/2/2009 3:48:40 AM
an excellent poetic warning to the danger of society
Peace be with you
William
I am not fake (Poetry) - 11/28/2008 8:13:30 PM
A warning that should be heeded, hope people still listen, thanks for this.
I am not fake (Poetry) - 11/28/2008 9:32:52 AM
A very powerful poem that should make all who read it aware of the danger. Thank you for sharing. You have a happy sounding name;-)
Eileen
We are all meant to be in this world. (Poetry) - 11/27/2008 9:11:09 PM
Good points, Masimba, if only we could all share the beauty of the world and each other in peace.
We are all meant to be in this world. (Poetry) - 11/27/2008 6:18:50 AM
Masimba,
Excellent poetry. If only we could all co-exist in peace and harmony.
Many blessings,
~Linda
Take the baton from me (Poetry) - 11/25/2008 5:49:02 AM
Such words of wisdom from a loving father. And hopefully your son will pass the baton to his son..and so on.
Mary
Crocodile tears (Poetry) - 11/24/2008 5:44:10 AM
What a tragedy. I don't know if this is true or not, but it's a well written story.
Mary
Crocodile tears (Poetry) - 11/24/2008 2:58:38 AM
A terrible and tragic tone.A well written poem.I am glad he is in jail.take care
Edwin
Arrogance (Poetry) - 11/23/2008 4:28:19 PM
This could be read again and again, there is much wisdom here to take in.
Arrogance (Poetry) - 11/23/2008 12:22:24 PM
A very interesting write Masimba
amen to your poetic statement
"Like pride, arrogance does not put Food in one's table"
Enjoyed your excellent posting "Arrogance"
Peace be with you
William
Arrogance (Poetry) - 11/21/2008 6:38:02 PM
This is a very uplifting and refreshing attitude. Thank you for sharing!
But what do you do when...
"The world has people who know better than you" however keep that knowledge to themselves, it seems to give them power.
"Welcome, to the world of team work.Welcome, to the world of two is company.Welcome, to the planet of co-operation." It takes at least two to be a team, company and co-operation, this only works when all are willing to be that team.
Of course I am talking about a very dis- functional work place, that has developed in this culture over a long period of time, of what I can only describe as hatred, and noone is willing to do anything about it.
What about??????????
Arrogance (Poetry) - 11/21/2008 7:41:19 AM
You have dozens of choice proverbs in your poem that very much apply to me. I see needing to go back a reread this poem from time to time lest I forget. Thanks for sharing your wisdom.
I will stand by you (Poetry) - 11/21/2008 4:21:23 AM
Beautiful poem you have written.take care
Edwin
Why me? (Poetry) - 11/21/2008 4:20:01 AM
Very well written and sad poem,take care
Edwin
Heaven (Poetry) - 11/21/2008 4:12:24 AM
This is a very good poem,everyone wants to know what is heaven really like up there,interesing and thought provoking poem,take care.I've enjoy reading your poetry and keep up the good work
Edwin
Arrogance (Poetry) - 11/21/2008 4:09:14 AM
This is an excellent and informative poem you have written.This poem relates to my dad a lot.People need to get rid of their "arro-ignorance" and just be able to listen and become a better human being,take care
Edwin
We can now call her a Journalist (Poetry) - 11/20/2008 5:30:39 AM
Very interesting write. Journalism is a noble profession.
Mary
Why me? (Poetry) - 11/19/2008 5:35:42 AM
What a heartbreaking poem. Being widowed and pregnant and 19, I can't imagine. My daughter was widowed at 20, she was not with child, but that didn't make it any easier.
mary
I will stand by you (Poetry) - 11/17/2008 3:24:19 PM
This is what marriage is supposed to be, I could reread this again and again.
I will stand by you (Poetry) - 11/17/2008 11:37:22 AM
Masimba,
It is nice to find true love and to hold it dear to one's heart. Your writing reflects your voice very well.
~Donna.
Respecting women (Poetry) - 11/9/2008 8:30:43 AM
Very true statements. However, everyone deserves respect.
Mary
Respecting women (Poetry) - 11/9/2008 7:24:32 AM
You couldn't have said it better. I had been trying so hard to say what you say, but each time, people flew in rage about what I have posted and cried "Freedom of Speech" as if it implies to them only.
English is not my first language, so perhaps sometimes I don't put my feelings and the points of view right across to others as I should have so some people would OFTEN missed my point but just to get mad at me for posting what I had posted, when infact they didn't even read the main purpose and point of views from my post; but only to cry in rage at me for posting what I had posted, and I didn't really need all that misunderstanding and rage towards me as if they have every right to be mad at me, and I don't have rights as a woman to speak for women!!!
You took the words right out of my mouth, and I DO RESPECT YOU for the clarity you have presented this.
Well-said and BRAVA!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
