Mommmeeeee! (Poetry) - 1/28/2009 8:53:46 PM
Wonderful poem.
Inspirational words!
I also see Jesus when I go to the sea.
Amen
Mommmeeeee! (Poetry) - 1/26/2009 10:03:41 PM
"Mommmeeeee!" is such a powerful poem that builds and builds till at the end, if you have a heart, you cry because of the sheer joy!
I was in the Navy, and this poem reminded me of all that I enjoyed about being out to sea. You have written in such a fresh manner here,Jo, that I am literally tickled. "the stars are liquid diamonds in the sea" is one of my fav lines. Absolutely superb writing in my opinion. Keep writing please Jo.
a fellow human and poet ~Zach
This Passing Sprite (Poetry) - 7/6/2008 6:44:32 PM
A very moving piece of poetry!
Bravo!
John Michael
Mommmeeeee! (Poetry) - 7/1/2008 7:23:25 PM
Nice world cruise with all the scenic sights and bird, fish, coral and all the other descriptions in his write. I was with you all the way through it and it ends in a devine way.
This Passing Sprite (Poetry) - 7/1/2008 7:20:49 PM
So true a write and the truth does win out in the end. It is a sad story, but a good write.
This Passing Sprite (Poetry) - 6/29/2008 5:07:33 PM
Hi Jo, I read your poem,"This Passing Sprite". Loved it, though it is a sad story. Too many birds get trapped in plastic or in pieces of netting. Some get stuck in oil. Good work . Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den"
Mommmeeeee! (Poetry) - 6/8/2008 2:51:45 PM
This is great! A heartwarming tale you tell in this poem. I was envisioning it all, blessings, Michelle
Mommmeeeee! (Poetry) - 6/4/2008 12:14:23 PM
Nice turn of events, only to realize your passion for life at sea and all the freedomes that come with it, well written...
Be always safe,
Karen
