You (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 9:22:24 PM
Nice to read these words they spark many inner thoughts and feelings
You (Poetry) - 9/22/2010 11:55:03 PM
Very true, and well written, Valerie
You (Poetry) - 9/22/2010 2:58:54 PM
Your words solicit vivid images without a Facebook reveal.
Ron
You (Poetry) - 9/22/2010 12:24:02 PM
A very interesting way to find one's self visable and invisable to all the natural surroundings. This flows with grace...
Be always safe,
Karen
You (Poetry) - 9/22/2010 5:52:53 AM
Valerie, I can so relate to your poem..Sometimes I feel invisible and sometimes that is a good thing to be.
Nice poem.
Ciao
Ragno Donna
Epiphany (Poetry) - 6/22/2009 6:43:33 PM
There is no time like now.
Ron
Epiphany (Poetry) - 6/16/2009 10:33:01 PM
I am up for this! Thanks for the reminder. Carin'
No More Words (Poetry) - 6/16/2009 2:11:50 PM
I agree that we are faced with great challenges while much of our youth fail to learn the essentials of survival. On AD it is to say a kind word or nothing at all, while writers here stalk and insult one another in the name of their art... their belief.
Like the good citizens of Iran who will stand for no more lies from false leaders, we are obligated to write the truth as we see it.
Thank you for your poison pen. It is very tasteful.
Ron
No More Words (Poetry) - 6/15/2009 3:45:53 AM
Very well written indeed sweet lady..enjoyed very much...stay safe and well..Hugss
Journey to the Garden (Poetry) - 6/15/2009 2:30:04 AM
This is very nice.Beautifully written.I like it
Those People (Poetry) - 6/15/2009 2:28:06 AM
This is very good :-)
EDWIN
Have We Met? (Poetry) - 6/15/2009 2:26:52 AM
I enjoy reading your poetry and your woroks.You are a talented poet and I am looking forward to reading the next poem.You I heard someone on television by the name of Dr.Mike Murdoch says that a person doesn't decide who they are,they discover who they are.take care of yourself.I look forward to reading the next poem
EDWIN
A Trip (Poetry) - 6/15/2009 2:24:17 AM
Great poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN
No More Words (Poetry) - 6/15/2009 2:21:36 AM
A well written poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN
A Trip (Poetry) - 6/10/2009 4:04:06 PM
My dreams have rough edges that can scare me. Beautifully poetic.
Ron
Have We Met? (Poetry) - 8/31/2008 4:30:19 PM
Intense introspection - I like this. -- Jeff
Those People (Poetry) - 8/31/2008 4:19:15 PM
It's a weird world we live in. Love the direct honesty in your words.
I wrote about 'Them.' Surely not 'US.'
Ron
Have We Met? (Poetry) - 8/31/2008 4:13:09 PM
A clear cutting away of barriers to the real 'me.' Bravo! Finely writ.
Ron
Have We Met? (Poetry) - 8/31/2008 3:36:14 PM
Wow!! This is awesome and makes one look deeper. Thank you for writing. Warmth to you.
Those People (Poetry) - 8/28/2008 10:42:17 AM
a true to life write valerie
I know I reside in one of those so called gated community
and I hate to even start a conversation with them
They want to know your whole life story within a short conversation
than you become a subject of their future conversations,
in the community Pools they Gather in small circles inthe water all looking at each other, I refer to them as circle jerks "oh! look honey there are only 3 circle jerks today...... welcome to the Dem
and remember I am not one of them
Love & peace be with you
William
Those People (Poetry) - 8/23/2008 7:46:55 AM
Valerie,
Excellent poem that makes a statement. There is so much shallowness in some people...you almost have to feel sorry for them.
Mary
Those People (Poetry) - 8/23/2008 7:14:34 AM
thankfully those plastic people will have a chance to be molded over...
thoughtfully written ...
Journey to the Garden (Poetry) - 8/12/2008 12:33:04 PM
Wow! You capture of moment, a common experience, expressed in many forms of art, such as "Fiddler on the Roof"'s "Sunrise, Sunset" - only in the 21st century. And the garden metaphor is timeless.
Fluff (Poetry) - 7/3/2008 6:22:36 PM
Fluff? Sounds like you are very deep in thought trying to sort a few things out....
Be always safe,
Karen
Her Bed Song (Poetry) - 6/28/2008 3:47:21 PM
Death is a beautiful relief to a welcomed end.Sad but true at the same time.Thanks for sharing that message with the world
Edwin
A Change of Luck (Poetry) - 6/28/2008 3:44:10 PM
Nice poem.Keep up the good work
Edwin
A Change of Luck (Poetry) - 6/27/2008 9:07:23 PM
You paint a wonderful picture depicting the times of late, very clear and precise....
Be always safe,
Karen
A Change of Luck (Poetry) - 6/27/2008 2:08:30 AM
Valerie,
These days we're lucky if we have that .99 cents left for the meal. (lol) Very down to earth writing. I'm not much into lottery tickets but I do know that $ 7.77 for three lbs. of pork chops is a good deal. I'm also happy I'm in walking didtance to my church. I guess when you actually think about it just having enough air to breathe makes us lucky. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
A Treadmill (Poetry) - 6/27/2008 2:00:13 AM
Val,
It's so important for our lives to have substance. A life without meaning is definitely not worth living. I love your word usage. I was, I am, I will be; If these are only words than they mean nothing. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Her Bed Song (Poetry) - 6/27/2008 1:53:06 AM
Val,
Very sad write with many memories but so much truth in the verses. Keeping one's dignity is so important. Welcome to Authors Den. Peace, Love and God's Blessings Always, Paul.
