Moloka'i Boy (Short Story) - 8/21/2009 7:25:16 AM
Good story, Kirby; well done! :)
The Hanging Tree (Short Story) - 6/19/2002 2:56:38 PM
Excellent--think this could get published in a university review!
Opening Day At the Races (Article) - 9/21/2022 8:37:50 AM
I suppose this piece could be considered Gonzo Journalism. Why? The insertion of the narrator/writer as the main character.
Before the City (Poetry) - 6/12/2002 9:34:08 AM
Spooky . . great potential when it shifts toward a positive note.
Before the City (Poetry) - 6/11/2002 11:16:51 PM
Excellent imagery. Great write!!
Before the City (Poetry) - 6/11/2002 10:54:20 PM
Thought provoking, intense, and somewhat haunting.
~Jen
Before the City (Poetry) - 6/11/2002 10:41:12 PM
Rewind and play... great line. I really like this one.
Observations from Oceanside (Poetry) - 6/11/2002 5:59:25 AM
love the conversational way you have written this piece, and how you pull it all together in the last line or two. paints pictures in mind . . .and then scribbles them all out at the end (absolute power)
Observations from Oceanside (Poetry) - 6/10/2002 11:49:39 AM
Offshore, a gray destroyer
treads water. It seems
as harmless as
a bathtub toy. ....that says it all...awesome write
