Don't Worry, Daddys Coming! - Chapter 1 (Book) - 9/10/2008 6:48:49 AM
This narrative is brilliant! As a single parent and always having that fear of losing my child, I felt every emotion as it was explained. I truly felt the heartache and anger. It brought tears to my eyes at times because it was so descriptive that I felt like I was witnessing the entire event. Very intriguing and brilliant!
Love & The Cookbook - Chapter One (Book) - 7/24/2008 4:43:45 PM
There is nothing better than the merging of food and sex- I find that the line between them is often vague! Spectacular idea.
Love & The Cookbook - Chapter One (Book) - 7/22/2008 9:18:55 PM
Great concept...I think the idea behind this makes alot of sense. The key to a man's heart is his stomach...but maybe what is in his stomach is an indication of the type of man he is. Plus, I have found that some of my closest and most intimate moments were cooking with and/or for my boyfriend. I commend the effort and wish you all the best. God Bless
Love & The Cookbook - Chapter One (Book) - 7/21/2008 11:31:25 AM
Chapter One set the tone for the rest of the book. Great work.Look forward to reading the next chapter.
Love & The Cookbook - Chapter One (Book) - 7/21/2008 9:22:34 AM
I really enjoyed your first chapter, I felt like I was reading about someone I had dated in the past! I look forward to reading the rest of the book.
Don't Worry, Daddys Coming! - Chapter 1 (Book) - 7/11/2008 8:57:39 AM
This is one of the most moving things I have ever read in my life. It comes straight from the heart, and tells the narrative so clearly I felt as if I was actually there seeing through his eyes. I would dearly love to know the outcome.
My Life (Poetry) - 9/26/2008 7:51:42 PM
Good poetry.
Just check out the format. Sometimes the way the article is organized is different from the way it was conceptualized.
Your Eyes (Poetry) - 7/9/2008 9:50:25 PM
Welcome to the Den. Absolutely stunning piece you pen dear man. I could feel the intense connection, the stunning absence and the desperate longings........"Lost Youth" so very familiar to me. Well Done! Deborah
