Serenade to Song Garden (Poetry) - 11/18/2012 9:07:57 AM
Unpardon me but I relent it boldly;
For it is far ahead, if I can be sure of it,
And far it is, that my hallucination be valid,
And hallucination it is, as it should be,
And however, unlike itself, mysterious, unknown, and untested,
So it be foreseen in my tireless search.
The Wishing Well (Poetry) - 12/11/2008 9:58:25 PM
James,
Outstanding story! Ironically, I have a neighbor name Willie Jones. Enjoyed this immensely!
Blessings,
~Linda
Serenade to Song Garden (Poetry) - 12/11/2008 9:06:24 PM
Beautiful poem, you have a new fan :)
The Wishing Well (Poetry) - 12/11/2008 9:05:02 PM
You really created a world here, something rarely seen so richly done in poems, made me think of Byron and Baudelaire a bit, and it really keeps the reader pulled in. Great stuff.
The Wishing Well (Poetry) - 12/9/2008 10:21:27 AM
James,
I was mesmerized all through this! Such a sad piece, but it seems you never knew what would happen next. An interesting, well told tale.
Mary
