No title yet-work in progress (Short Story) - 9/5/2002 9:37:39 PM
Great job! theres really not much more to say, but i cant wait for chapter 2.
No title yet-work in progress (Short Story) - 8/3/2002 3:50:29 PM
April, what a wonderful start for your book. I found myself doing all the things I teach my students to do as they read. I was anticipating and predicting what would happen next. I'm hooked!
I read it a second time through my professional lens as an educator and have some suggestions for you which I will offer if asked, but I'd prefer to do that in an email.Keep writing! I'm anxious for chapter 2.
No title yet-work in progress (Short Story) - 7/12/2002 7:58:05 PM
A good story well told. When do we see chapter 2?
No title yet-work in progress (Short Story) - 7/11/2002 9:05:56 PM
splendid work be sure to run spell check I too look forward to reading more
No title yet-work in progress (Short Story) - 7/10/2002 10:08:29 PM
A wonderful start...Can't wait to read more!
Victoria Taylor Murray
"The Lambert Series"
Why is he here? (Poetry) - 9/24/2004 7:42:13 PM
love encompasses all ...
Why is he here? (Poetry) - 9/24/2004 5:32:08 PM
This is so sweet
ahhhhhh the doubts that shadow every relationship.....it seems they only shadow the WONDERFUL ones....the onces we cannot believe we are part of lol.......The bad ones......don't get analyzed.........they are lived thru lol...........
good for you.......and this is a wonderful write........
pax.........A
Destyni (Poetry) - 9/9/2002 1:01:48 PM
destyni would be so proud of you to read this beautiful tribute!! super job!!!!
Destyni (Poetry) - 9/5/2002 9:34:33 PM
great poem about the little cutie :-) Thanks for sharing her with me <smiles happily>
Destyni (Poetry) - 7/29/2002 12:10:24 PM
you don't love me...lol
Destyni (Poetry) - 7/19/2002 5:12:26 PM
a wonderful tribute toy your daughter
Destyni (Poetry) - 7/18/2002 8:55:58 PM
joyous... not bad for a first attempt...
Destyni (Poetry) - 7/18/2002 4:07:58 PM
very nice like a symphyni
Destyni (Poetry) - 7/18/2002 2:16:53 PM
I know how you feel.. <smile> Destyni is blessed to have such love.. Great write
Love and Light
dreamweaver
