Christmas Shopping Can be Deadly (Short Story) - 4/21/2003 11:29:58 AM
I liked the story, the characters were believable and the story was interesting. However it needs help on the flow and clarity. It should be a bit longer but it was still good.
A Country Appointment (Short Story) - 3/11/2002 1:12:43 PM
Great write...keep up the good work because riters always write
Ash, the Crippled Baby Dragon (Short Story) - 8/24/2001 4:06:36 AM
The story was fast-paced and intricate with a childlike sense of wonder. Immersion into the draconian point of view will make this a serious hit for dragon lovers. The dragons are definitely the heroes of this and the crippled gray dragon a true hero in himself. - Robert A. Sloan, author of Raven Dance
