Don't think what it seems to be - Video Clip (Poetry) - 5/3/2003 2:27:50 AM
This is very good
"Don't think what it seems to be
Cuase it's just not what it is
Don't think what it seems to be
It's just not what it seems to be"
Peg
Escape from this world (Poetry) - 4/10/2003 4:52:13 PM
Thank you for your kind comment. Pass the word around too please!
Escape from this world (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 8:54:46 PM
Ah, another song writer! Well done. Not having heard the music, I imagine it is a bit bluesy. Well done, Chris.
Love conquers all (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 8:19:54 PM
Good writing.
Reverse the verses. I feel it wil be more powerful if the first verse was said last.
The wording and imagery is great.
Escape from this world (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 8:16:38 PM
Like much of my stuff, this is not a poem, it's a song.
I want to hear this.
Love conquers all (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 9:07:40 PM
Thank you, thank you for your kind comments. You are all wonderful!
Love conquers all (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 6:48:11 PM
I agree with Peggy...welcome and excellent write. ~Trish~
