Gratefulness (Article) - 8/10/2002 9:24:27 AM
amen!! i am indeed grateful for those who have blessed and enriched me and made me happy!! what a beautiful quote, marcel!! loved this!! love, karen lynn in texas.
Gratefulness (Article) - 8/9/2002 7:48:38 PM
how beautiful and appropriate! Thanks for the reminder!
My Loss of Her Lingers (Poetry) - 2/16/2021 6:31:28 AM
Such a big loss when our mama leaves. She'll always watch over you until you meet again. A well penned and honest poem.
My Loss of Her Lingers (Poetry) - 1/21/2021 9:32:10 AM
I believe through this long poem you are trying to shed the sadness and guilt you feel over how you lost your mother, too soon. I hope it helped. There comes a time when we will stop grieving and move on.
My mother died on February 17 last year. It was a blessing, she was suffering so much at 95 with several ailments. I have had a great deal of difficulty traveling the thousand miles to where she was. The last time I was there was 2011. But up until about two years ago, she would call me every Monday at 4 PM and we would talk on her TTY. I recall her giggling at everything I said like a schoolgirl she was so happy talking to me. Fortunately, my sister lived nearby and took care of her right up until the end.
Ron
My Loss of Her Lingers (Poetry) - 1/3/2021 6:59:31 AM
such a loss never truly ends, it just becomes more bareable
My Loss of Her Lingers (Poetry) - 1/1/2021 12:02:16 PM
Beautiful sentiments in this poem! Your mom is watching over you and she will no doubt be your guardian angel. The last two lines of the poem were EXCELLENT!
Sandie
“WHEN MOM WENT TO HEAVEN” (Poetry) - 12/10/2020 9:54:12 AM
It's too soon for you to have fully grieved. But everything dies. I'm preparing for some death now so when it happens, I will grieve less because I've done all I can do in this life to transition that person into that new state of being.
There will come a time when you must break from the pain of your mother's loss and make your way on your own, hopefully helping others the way your mother did.
Ron
My Mom is dying (Poetry) - 9/7/2020 8:40:31 AM
ISN'T IT GOOD TO KNOW THAT GOD'S PLANS...NEVER CHANGE? THE KNOWLEDGE THAT HE ALLOWS WHATEVER HAPPENS IN OUR LIVES IS AN AWESOME MOUNTAIN OF STRENGTH TO HOLD ON TO. I PRAY THAT YOU ABSORB ALL YOU NEED TO GO THROUGH WHAT HE HAS ALREADY PREPARED YOU FOR, KNOWING GOD NEVER GIVES ONE MORE THAN WE ARE ABLE TO BARE. I DON'T KNOW WHY YOU CAN'T GET TO YOUR MOM PHYSICALLY BUT CERTAINLY IN YOUR SPIRIT...YOU ARE THERE! I AM A FIRM BELIEVER THAT, NO MATTER HOW IT LOOKS, ONE SHOULD NEVER STOP PRAYING FOR A SITUATION. OF COURSE, GOD'S WILL...WILL ALWAYS BE DONE. BUT WE STILL PRAY, FOR WHO KNOWS WHAT HE WILL DO? MIRACLES DO STILL HAPPEN. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH TO YOU...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
My Mom is dying (Poetry) - 9/3/2020 11:01:22 AM
I cannot criticize you because I have not walked in your shoes. I was never codependent and thanked both my parents for allowing me to be independent and self empowering from at least 10 years on. I was always my mother's favorite and she doted on me whenever I visited after flying off to one of my adventures or living in one of the five places I lived in thousands of miles from her. That distance made our relationship distant, but not a great impediment, because we quite often visited each other, either I traveled there or my parents traveled here.
I think your primary lament is caused by the coronavirus and your inability to see your mother in person. My physical disability, her aging ailments, and the great distance between us caused us to see each other much less after the turn-of-the-century. With great effort and two caregivers, I managed to see her in 2011. She had suffered three mini strokes and was getting hard of hearing and had aphasia, affecting her speech and her writing… Jumbling the words. When I left, she cried, "I will never see you again." I promised myself I would, but not verbally to her.
When she became completely deaf and assisted living constraints and physical problems with her typing hands grew, I tried to get back there on two trips that I planned but failed to get the necessary caregivers to drive and care for me on the way. Fortunately, after dad died in 2005 after a long, four month fight with infection after surgery, that mom oversaw exclusively and suffered much doing, she soldiered on alone. At 95 with increasing painful ailments, she finally died on February 14, 2020, just before the pandemic struck. Fortunately, two, my sister stepped in and took care of her and her affairs from 2011 until her death. I owe my sister, her only daughter, a lot for doing so much for her, especially when mom got very bad near-death. The whole family looked to her death as a blessing and we did not grieve, but celebrated her release from all that pain.
Ron
My Mom is dying (Poetry) - 9/2/2020 10:53:34 AM
Your words have drained me of emotions. My mom died when I was five, and I never got to say goodbye. Then my brother and best friend died when I was seven, and I never got to say goodbye. Now I never use that word. It was stolen from me. Twice burnt, and today I am strong as steel. And I write about a love I only met for a moment. I am not a lover, just a seeker. And that's half the battle.
My Mom is dying (Poetry) - 9/2/2020 8:43:21 AM
"I don't care anymore what anyone thinks or says about me!" A powerfully pivotal moment. When I reached this point in my life, some decades ago, I started to understand my humanness, and my creative strengths, far better than I ever had before. I lost my gifted mother in 1998. She was one of the three most influential women in my life. I learned, in her passing, that every one that grieves deeply for another must find their own way. Praying, and seeking the Most High God for wisdom and succor, is the wisest thing you can do. Thank you for sharing. Your honest unfeigned openness was very moving. I can affirm, from personal loss, that those we love never truly go away, they walk beside us every day, unseen, unheard, but always near, still loved, still missed, and very dear. Love and Light to you and yours... rlc
My Mom is dying (Poetry) - 9/2/2020 8:26:39 AM
We are living through difficult times, enduring things we never thought we would have to endure. Seeing one's mother, saying goodbye surely one of them. You mention at the beginning that you have written many things but now are having trouble writing this. It is such a heart-felt, enduring peace that I am sure many will benefit from, because, no doubt, there are very many people in the same situation as you are. Thank you for posting this love, sad piece of writing.
I started Living Today (Poetry) - 9/19/2010 1:46:34 AM
Great poem, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Can't see the Forest for the Trees (Poetry) - 9/16/2010 5:05:06 AM
This is a very powerful message..I am hoping and praying that he does see the Forest for the trees..You must flee, my dear, it sounds like you are in an abusive relationship..No one has the right to make another feel like that.
I left, at age 49 and I am so happy to be free and myself once again!! Run, please run to your light and be free from him...
Warm hugs and much peace, love and light,
Amber
Re-Frame Your Life (Poetry) - 6/19/2010 12:48:23 AM
The past is no longer us...that is why we all must continue to grow. Though I must admit it is good to reflect now and then, I always look forward to tomorrow. Excellent work.
Re-Frame Your Life (Poetry) - 6/17/2010 3:29:06 AM
Framing makes all the difference! Nice poem surrounding the art of you.
Peace,
Dayvid
Re-Frame Your Life (Poetry) - 6/17/2010 3:20:00 AM
A very well-framed poem too ~
Blessings,
Christine
Rain and Open Doors to Light (Poetry) - 8/14/2009 2:32:46 AM
This so touching and beautifuly written. Thank you so much.
With Love,
Cindy
Over and Over Again (Poetry) - 6/29/2009 7:10:18 PM
My little sister,told it how it really was,and i'm sure many people
have walked in our place.I am very proud,of what Holly Lee has expressed.
I Love You
Rick
Impress Yourself (Poetry) - 6/1/2009 5:02:06 PM
would be a boring world ... then again ...
Impress Yourself (Poetry) - 5/28/2009 11:08:18 PM
Very moving and exceptionally spiritual...
Be always safe,
Karen
Impress Yourself (Poetry) - 5/28/2009 12:52:58 PM
It would indeed be a very hum-drum world if we were all alike. Very wise words.
Mary
A Purpose Unmeasured (Poetry) - 11/12/2008 5:43:31 AM
Bravo. Exactly.
Thank you, ~Donna.
A Purpose Unmeasured (Poetry) - 11/12/2008 12:54:43 AM
This is such a beautifully written poem.Kids are indeed very precious human beings that want to be loved by their own parents.I can see by the way you write this poem that you have a ton of love for your son and he is lucky to have a mother who has a beautiful heart,a beautiful soul,and a beautiful spirit.Kids do indeed keep their parents on their toes and showed them what truly is important in the lives that we live and the world that surrounds us..take care
Edwin
A Purpose Unmeasured (Poetry) - 11/11/2008 8:55:28 PM
Beautifully expression of your love as a mother. He is keep you on your toes but such delights of the heart nobody can take away. cherish each moment.
Sharon
A Purpose Unmeasured (Poetry) - 11/11/2008 6:16:46 PM
Thank you for sharing, the love for your Son is evident in these beautiful lines
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Altered (Poetry) - 9/29/2008 5:12:06 PM
A heartful writing.
CarolHawks
What I Do (Poetry) - 2/1/2007 11:58:42 PM
a heartwarming write, thank you for sharing
What I Do (Poetry) - 12/19/2006 5:15:39 PM
A powerful piece of your faith and a beautiful testimoney of the reasons for us to go on and the season.
Thank you for this powerful poem.
peace, Joselyn
What I Do (Poetry) - 12/19/2006 10:54:58 AM
The gift of a child is indeed precious and comes from Our Lord. Take care of that child as if it were your own life. God will reward you. I can tell you as a grandfather I dote on my little Nicholas. Victor
Over and Over Again (Poetry) - 7/19/2006 12:17:57 PM
Angel
You should completely ignore the barbs and stings of other vicious people...
It's all Immaterial..
Believe in yourself Implicitly..
Peter
Lullaby (Poetry) - 5/25/2006 7:09:14 PM
What a cute baby! I this poem, it's sweet
Lullaby (Poetry) - 5/23/2006 8:27:37 PM
Cute and adorable picture! Wonderful poem!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Lullaby (Poetry) - 5/23/2006 4:31:46 PM
When we pray for anything with honesty and sincerity before God. he always answers our prayers...
Peter
Lullaby (Poetry) - 5/23/2006 3:18:30 PM
beautiful wishes, prayers, and dreams for this little soul...very sweet
Toxic (Poetry) - 7/3/2005 8:02:27 AM
Very honest and introspective write tha touches the heart
Have faith in yourself and God !
Peter
Toxic (Poetry) - 1/3/2005 2:01:17 PM
Well the best way to know your pain is that you share it. That is the first step one of the next things I want to write about.
Toxic (Poetry) - 1/3/2005 12:42:45 PM
This began and ended beautifully.
Try Try Again (Poetry) - 12/20/2004 10:57:15 AM
So sad and well penned.
Try Try Again (Poetry) - 12/16/2004 10:44:42 AM
A sad pen indeed Angel. It is hard to open the eyes of others when they sew them shut with conceal or doubting threads. You stand tall and do what your heart tells you.
Try Try Again (Poetry) - 12/16/2004 10:32:31 AM
A touching write, I hope everything turns out ok
Peace
Try Try Again (Poetry) - 12/16/2004 10:27:52 AM
All we can do is try... until we can no longer try. Intensely emotional write. -- Jeff
Try Try Again (Poetry) - 12/16/2004 9:39:39 AM
Sometimes it is never enough for those who have the talent to handle these situations. Evidently you are special or they wouldn't call on you. I agree with Sue, one more try might do it! I wish you all the best,my prayers go with you...
Try Try Again (Poetry) - 12/16/2004 9:13:21 AM
my daughter could have written this about me years ago and her love and that of her sister and brother eventually saw me thru it but i cringe at the years and Christmases lost to my addictions. my heart goes out to you and the years you have spent wishing things were different. maybe one more try will work...i was in my thirties before i straightened up but i have been sober and straight for 20 years now. it can happen
remember when (Poetry) - 9/21/2004 8:10:00 AM
me too.
For Thou Art Mine? (Poetry) - 6/5/2004 8:44:52 AM
This one touches deeply it is beautiful!!!!!!!
For Thou Art Mine? (Poetry) - 6/3/2004 2:07:38 AM
Beautiful write, my kinda language too. Very special.
TY
CH'erie
For Thou Art Mine? (Poetry) - 6/2/2004 10:03:17 PM
Beautifully written.
I have been blessed, much the same as you, and wonder what I could have possibly done to deserve such happiness.
I think it best to not ask the gods to explain themselves when it comes to love.
-James
Craving (Poetry) - 5/28/2004 8:36:27 PM
I have felt this... so very true
Craving (Poetry) - 5/27/2004 6:12:43 AM
A long time since I have read anything from you, good to see you back.
In the Courtyard (Poetry) - 5/26/2004 8:42:32 PM
beautiful..Floreann
The Bigger Picture (Poetry) - 5/6/2004 7:46:43 AM
Beautiful write i have missed you Angel
The Bigger Picture (Poetry) - 5/4/2004 4:21:15 PM
i like this beautiful write, angels near! wonderful stuff!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
it's been a while since i last read anything from you; glad you are back! i have missed your writings!
The Bigger Picture (Poetry) - 5/4/2004 11:51:25 AM
I think those last five lines will stay with me for a very long time.
Thank you,
James
blue skies at night (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 1:27:16 PM
you have a glorious way with words .
My Someday (Poetry) - 9/3/2003 3:00:45 PM
This is just fantastic and it shows the emotions of love in technicolor splendor.
Amor
My Someday (Poetry) - 9/3/2003 6:14:12 AM
...hoping my "someday" is just around the corner.
-James
My Someday (Poetry) - 9/2/2003 11:38:49 AM
very beautiful..Floreann
halos bring sunshine and tears bring rain (Poetry) - 8/26/2003 5:38:56 AM
With God in your life all things are possible. With your vision, all things are possible. Beautiful poem. I know your Angel is looking down on you with much love and protection.
halos bring sunshine and tears bring rain (Poetry) - 8/15/2003 9:59:47 PM
I can tell your home will always have glowing memories no matter what! Touching poem...beautiful picture ~WW~
This Old House (Poetry) - 8/8/2003 3:58:04 AM
One last look, then turn off the lights.
I had a little ritual for saying goodbye to a house. Glad to see I'm not alone.
-James
Rose Irene Hall Blagrave Mickan 1911-2000 (Poetry) - 8/8/2003 3:53:01 AM
Beautifully done.
Eulogies can be difficult to write and nearly impossible to deliver. My best friend died last spring and I was given the task. It was the hardest thing I've ever done. (I have it posted on my board)
You did a wonderful job here.
-James
My Little Sister, An Angel on Earth (Poetry) - 7/20/2003 3:52:28 PM
hi holly, this is carrie. i loved the poem you wrote about me. it was very touching. i love you. thanks!
This Old House (Poetry) - 7/20/2003 3:45:55 PM
very nice. i loved it. you are very creative!
catching raindrops (Poetry) - 6/12/2003 9:03:31 AM
You had me going back to a place where I use to go as a child, "catching raindrops". Good write.
This Old House (Poetry) - 6/1/2003 6:56:06 AM
Your poem made me just a little sad. So many memories, but thank God we can store them in our hearts forever.
Very well done little one.
Betty L.
This Old House (Poetry) - 5/13/2003 9:02:05 AM
sweet memories in your words , thank you for sharing them in your beautiful way
This Old House (Poetry) - 5/12/2003 6:49:36 PM
Angelnear <
so nice to see a post again
this was beautiful and this verses stayed in my soul
"farewell old house we called our home now little boxes are packed in our souls shall forever remain our memories to be told..."
Peggy
This Old House (Poetry) - 5/12/2003 1:52:28 PM
Beautiful...lovely pic too.
This Old House (Poetry) - 5/12/2003 11:17:42 AM
Very expressive. I really like, "now little boxes are packed in our souls shall forever remain our memories to be told..." Good job on this.
- J -
This Old House (Poetry) - 5/12/2003 9:21:59 AM
This is so very bitter sweet. The feeling is heart breaking. Good job here in expression of emotions as well! Teresa
My Little Sister, An Angel on Earth (Poetry) - 5/4/2003 10:26:39 AM
What a lucky girl to be blessed with the wonderful big sister you are to her.
B
The kaboose (Poetry) - 2/25/2003 10:02:47 PM
very nice, I can see that train coming now.
The kaboose (Poetry) - 2/15/2003 1:17:39 PM
aww its grand to see the purpose behind the most ordinary things in life....you have a unique view...treasure it
The change in a leaf (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 11:24:38 AM
I like your words .........you are insightful .
If only he knew (Poetry) - 2/3/2003 11:10:18 PM
This was good I enjoyed the write
The kaboose (Poetry) - 2/2/2003 2:46:40 PM
very nice poem! may i suggest in the second verse omitting the "i recall"...
The kaboose (Poetry) - 2/2/2003 10:13:34 AM
You reminded me fondly of my youth ...I rode the train several times with my uncle in the kaboose...and oh what memories your poem brought...that you
The kaboose (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 10:52:13 PM
The purpose.. is to move on in a new direction... you just have to have faith..
The kaboose (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 10:33:54 PM
Love the last stanza... excellent write.
The kaboose (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 10:32:53 PM
Very nice write, Angles.
unspoken impressions (Poetry) - 1/8/2003 8:27:24 PM
I actually enjoyed this poem...
unspoken impressions (Poetry) - 1/7/2003 11:09:55 AM
I really enjoyed this one . You see what
many do not ...... that's what makes you wonderful .
unspoken impressions (Poetry) - 1/7/2003 7:31:29 AM
wonderful write about the small things that are priceless in our everyday world
unspoken impressions (Poetry) - 1/6/2003 8:40:35 PM
Angel,
What can I say that everyone has not! You write with Clarity!!!
This is a very true, and moving piece. We leave impressions where ever we go, especially on the heart!
Hugs,
Maria
unspoken impressions (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 10:32:53 AM
Angel there is much profound truth with a valid ring to this write! It is always amazing to me that these little things of which you speak are often by most taken for granted!
Excellant Piece!
~Nikki~
unspoken impressions (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 10:08:04 AM
Little things make a lot of difference. Deb
unspoken impressions (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 8:42:38 AM
Angel I love this. Its the little things that count. Floria
unspoken impressions (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 4:29:14 AM
The heart is impressionable! Great Write!
unspoken impressions (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 1:32:49 AM
Wonderful, insightful write...especially love the ending--"the little things I note
make impressions
on my heart"
unspoken impressions (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 8:21:57 PM
Angel,
so much truth and flow to this and I often too wonder of these issues in your write. 'make impressions on the heart."
these are the things that we see. and we remember.
Excellent piece.
Peggy
Bound to change (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 1:22:35 PM
Good luck! Persevere, your life will be much the better without that cloud of smoke hanging around you.
Bound to change (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 1:11:52 PM
Bravo! You can do it...
Bound to change (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 12:57:54 PM
this seems very important to you.
and i believe the things we want the most for the right reasons , are given to us.
your words are inspiring.
without you? (Poetry) - 1/1/2003 4:42:19 PM
That was cool. I love the way you used the unorthodox structure.
without you? (Poetry) - 12/21/2002 1:15:58 PM
Many Beautiful Butterflies!! Excellent write!
without you? (Poetry) - 12/20/2002 6:22:59 PM
Very good,,,I like the way you done this,,Lisa
without you? (Poetry) - 12/20/2002 1:07:09 PM
I loved this it touched me
Happy Holidays.
Peg
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 12/19/2002 10:42:44 AM
Very beautiful. Angels
Thanks for reading and commenting my poetry.
Love from India - Joel -
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 12/19/2002 8:57:23 AM
Great find and wonderful writing. Loved the picture.
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 12/18/2002 4:49:19 AM
Amazing Grace, how sweet the poem and pic to match!!!!
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 12/18/2002 12:25:21 AM
Loved the picture and glad you are found. I guess I am still lost and am paying the price. Bill Murray
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 8:44:56 PM
How lovely, both the poem and the pic! ;O)
Nikki
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 6:58:55 PM
Enjoyed your poem
Finding oneself is sometimes hard..
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 5:42:06 PM
Angel Near,
This is so beautiful so good!!!
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 1:05:57 PM
Priceless! Words & photo...
Misguided Angel (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 12:58:39 PM
even angels need help sometimes! beautifully written! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 11:44:42 AM
Fantastic picture and write. Thank you for sharing and have a happy holiday season.
Amor
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 11:34:56 AM
beautiful write, and an adorable picture! so cute this is! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) thanks for your sweet review; it is most appreciated! :)
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 11:31:49 AM
I just love this picture,always hold the hand of friendship,,everybody needs a friend,,Lisa
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 10:53:31 AM
Very nice write, I love the picture!
Jack
Lost and Found (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 10:45:44 AM
Don't lose yourself ever again.
Christmas this year (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 11:42:24 AM
i loved this
i feel the lost of my grandfather on christmas for his bday was christmas eve
so its hard to handle both emotions
time shall heal all...as long as the holiday is there we will tied to those we have lost.
Christmas this year (Poetry) - 12/14/2002 1:57:22 AM
You do carry on her traditions as she is forever a part of you . I am grateful for that in so many ways .
Christmas this year (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 9:25:53 PM
Thank you for this precious reminder. Wishing you Happy Holidays. She's watching.
Janet xoxoxoxo
Christmas this year (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 5:22:52 PM
>tears < a heartwrenching write! thanks for sharing! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :(
Christmas this year (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 2:14:43 PM
but she is still with you when it counts...beautifully written
Christmas this year (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 12:25:46 PM
Thank you for the thoughts
wise words and inspiring write
Christmas this year (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 9:05:46 AM
>sniff <
A well-written reminder of the mortality we sometimes tend to forget exists in our lives...grief so beautifully expressed...
Christmas this year (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 9:05:33 AM
Very eloquently put. Something for all of us to think about-nice writing.
Rapture names Serenity (Poetry) - 12/8/2002 8:54:16 PM
Beautiful piece. The ending was superb.
Rapture names Serenity (Poetry) - 12/8/2002 3:12:27 PM
this is great i loved it
beautiful!
Rapture names Serenity (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 7:19:06 AM
Very soft and pretty write. enjoyed it alot. Thanx for your review of my work. Drkman
Rapture names Serenity (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 10:52:06 AM
This is wonderful my friend. Excellent imagery.
Thanks for reading my work and commenting :) :)
Love from India - Joel -
Rapture names Serenity (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 10:42:21 AM
Rapture, so desired by many, yet only known by the few. Bill Murray
Rapture names Serenity (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 9:31:38 AM
This is beautiful and so softely spoken. Great write.
Rapture names Serenity (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 8:39:45 AM
Such a beautiful write...
Thanks for sharing it.
Trixie :)
Rapture names Serenity (Poetry) - 12/5/2002 6:30:35 PM
Excellent usage of imagery through this fantastic write. Thank you also for the kind comments on my work.
Amor
Misguided Angel (Poetry) - 12/5/2002 10:56:17 AM
Angels need guidance also! ;-)
Rapture names Serenity (Poetry) - 12/5/2002 10:47:36 AM
"Serenity" is indeed raptureous! Awesome piece! I wanted to say Thanks for your kind review also and Terlingua has a poem in it most definately. ;-) Peace-CJ
Free (Poetry) - 12/4/2002 6:09:32 AM
free from the fear of loss
or
nothing left to lose
great verse
Free (Poetry) - 11/27/2002 7:31:07 AM
uplifting words...very nicely done!
Free (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 1:02:12 PM
Its good to be free
However I do charge a nominal fee
Great Healthy write
Magic (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 10:10:12 AM
i believe in magic, i do! well written!
Magic (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 10:06:38 AM
I believe in magic and all things in between! Whatever touches my heart is magic! This little short short is magic as are you too. Bill
Magic (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 9:46:13 AM
i believe in magic .
you can't touch it .... oh but it's there
Fortune Teller (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 9:42:31 AM
very pretty , smile makers are nice ..... i hope your future is filled with happiness .
Fortune Teller (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 9:24:01 AM
very nicely done!
Faith (Poetry) - 11/18/2002 6:14:54 PM
Lovely and inspiring!!
Faith (Poetry) - 11/18/2002 2:28:38 PM
Great write. Faith is how people get by. And dr. pepper... Yeah i get by on faith and dr. pepper... mmmmm..
Faith (Poetry) - 11/18/2002 1:12:33 PM
faith is how we get by in this world! awesome write! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
If only he knew (Poetry) - 11/17/2002 10:09:28 PM
I believe only he knows , look into his eyes .
If only he knew (Poetry) - 11/15/2002 3:23:20 PM
Beautifully written...
Closer (Poetry) - 11/15/2002 4:40:31 AM
That is what we're all looking for, isn't it?Well said!!!
I belong (Poetry) - 11/15/2002 4:21:59 AM
Wonderful words describing finding HOME!! You have arrived!
Perception vs. Reality (Poetry) - 11/15/2002 4:14:07 AM
Very good! I understand this so well!!
If only he knew (Poetry) - 11/15/2002 4:03:27 AM
Very beautiful!! If only we all realized what we truly are!
If only he knew (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 11:53:30 AM
beautiful wistful words
If only he knew (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 11:25:10 AM
Excellent write..Very pretty..
Be blessed,
Betty
If only he knew (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 10:43:28 AM
He would know my friend he would. A lovely longing write.
Love from India - Joel -
I belong (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 10:20:03 AM
I loved this to me I read destiny
but there are other ways to take it i am sure
Great write
Nightmare of losing you (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 10:18:34 AM
You write about loss very well
I hope soon you can be found
Hope (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 10:16:40 AM
Open yourself up to the possibilities
Scary isn't it
Perception vs. Reality (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 10:15:09 AM
What is reality anyway
it is what our senses perceive
and even then I can not define it
Loved this one there is more here than meet the eye
If only he knew (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 9:36:34 AM
lovely write and i am sure he knows
Perception vs. Reality (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 12:37:06 PM
Excellent! Very insightful - once again
Perception vs. Reality (Poetry) - 11/11/2002 11:21:26 PM
If I could look thorough your minds eye
what would I see? A chariot, an eternal flame, rain, Paris, or war, pestilence and death. All would depend on when I looked through it. Bill
Perception vs. Reality (Poetry) - 11/11/2002 6:54:44 PM
Reality is sometimes so confusing. Stand firm and it will work out. Great write.
The Voice
Perception vs. Reality (Poetry) - 11/11/2002 5:44:21 PM
Wonderful!!!......makes my mind think this does.....And that's a very good thing indeed.
Ty, Dani :)
