Revolution (Poetry) - 12/21/2013 5:06:19 AM
So true and so perfectly penned.
Revolution (Poetry) - 12/8/2013 9:03:46 AM
The origins of revolution are percolating right now and your beautiful, poetic words strike at the heart of the matter.
Ron
I never thought you'd leave (Poetry) - 5/19/2013 11:31:47 AM
Hi Jim!
This is so heartfelt. It pulled at every heartstring with every word. You write it real, Jim. :D
In Spirit,
Bear
I never thought you'd leave (Poetry) - 5/19/2013 9:29:02 AM
Our biggest regrets in life are not found in what we do but in
what we put off and never did. Great line: "While I was living in the moment, the moment passed me by." Powerful write, Jim.
I never thought you'd leave (Poetry) - 5/19/2013 6:15:52 AM
Jim,
Wow! This really hit home. I am so sorry for your loss. I'm always expressing to people to DO IT NOW. I even have a poem of that title. Oh, the moments lost can never be recaptured. Thank you so much for sharing this.
Many blessings,
+Linda
I never thought you'd leave (Poetry) - 5/18/2013 12:03:50 PM
Beautifully written and expressed. However, so sad. I hope you're just writing about the experience and have not experienced it.
Ron
I never thought you'd leave (Poetry) - 5/18/2013 5:04:19 AM
Lesson is always learned the hard way but love can come around again and don't make the same mistake twice. Great poem for men who take their gals for granted.
G
I see you (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 3:39:52 AM
NICE!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
I see you (Poetry) - 10/19/2009 4:14:00 AM
Hi Jim, I had just read a poem by Thomas Hardy called Moments of Vision. He wrote it on the same level that you wrote this. The mirror only has one face, really, doesn't it? Thank you for sharing this....
In Spirit,
Bear
I see you (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 9:17:59 PM
Now this certainly is an enlightenment...
Be always safe,
Karen
Don't sleep (Poetry) - 8/4/2009 3:27:37 AM
Excellent and well written poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN
Don't sleep (Poetry) - 8/3/2009 8:10:39 PM
This is a pep talk that should be recorded so people can hear it again and again- and the rhyme and beat are perfect.
Women (Poetry) - 8/1/2009 5:44:58 PM
Oh my ...this is beautiful writing ...enjoyed very much...stay safe and well...Hugss
Don't sleep (Poetry) - 8/1/2009 4:43:39 PM
...I WILL BOTH LAY ME DOWN IN PEACE AND SLEEP...FOR THE LORD ONLY MAKETH ME DWELL IN SAFETY. GOOD WEST FULL OF GOOD IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Women (Poetry) - 7/9/2009 4:42:34 AM
Excellent and well written piece.take care
EDWIN
Women (Poetry) - 7/8/2009 11:10:58 AM
Hi J, This is a fine tribute to my gender. However, what may be perceived as my wings are really fly-swatters, and seem to be very efficient for what they were put there for. Thank you for sharing this...
In Spirit,
Bear
Women (Poetry) - 7/8/2009 4:41:33 AM
Very beautiful, J.
Women (Poetry) - 7/7/2009 10:52:14 PM
Sounds like your brown nosing for someone, LOL! As only God knows a womans mind, but admit to it, not even He will...Ed
Women (Poetry) - 7/7/2009 9:29:13 PM
What a beautiful, loving piece.....
Be always safe,
Karen
Phoenix (Poetry) - 1/12/2009 6:09:39 AM
Tremendously powerful writing!
An uprising of mind, body and SPIRIT!!
Love the presentation of the wonderful words.
Peace (Poetry) - 1/12/2009 3:15:48 AM
Great poem you have written.Silence and quietness are an ears' best friend.I enjoy reading your work,take care
Edwin
Musiclove (Poetry) - 1/12/2009 3:13:56 AM
This is evry good.I love listening to music.I remember when musician Seal said that great leaders can talk to people through the mainstream,but music can get into your bloodstream.take care
Edwin
Phoenix (Poetry) - 1/12/2009 3:10:23 AM
This is an excellent poem,I enjoy reading it.take care
Edwin
Phoenix (Poetry) - 1/11/2009 9:54:00 PM
Welcome to our AUTHORSDEN family!!
May your poetry Rise like the Phoenix...time and time again!!
Tinka
Peace (Poetry) - 1/11/2009 6:13:59 AM
Jimmy,
Your words, the calmer the heart, the deeper the root!
Written from a passion for peace and understanding! Very DEEP thoughts.
Musiclove (Poetry) - 1/9/2009 12:46:23 AM
Hi Jimmy
I live music too. Trouble is, I often can't go to sleep at night because of a tune whizzing round in my brain. Cheers! Liz
Musiclove (Poetry) - 1/8/2009 6:37:26 PM
Jimmy,
I love music! Especially gospel! Enjoyed your poem!
Many blessings,
~Linda
Musiclove (Poetry) - 1/8/2009 6:18:58 PM
Music touches the listener deep in their soul!
You fine writing captures the movements of the music.
Musiclove (Poetry) - 1/8/2009 4:09:28 PM
Jimmy, you've expressed the sound of music in a beautiful way. Loving music too, I have often felt these same feelings with each note. This write brings visions and sounds of musical notes drifting through the air and into the heart. Loved it!
Disarming charm (Poetry) - 1/5/2009 7:48:46 PM
Your pen drips with passions of the heart....
Be always safe,
Karen
I want (Poetry) - 1/5/2009 5:15:19 PM
Immersed in your own innervisions.
Your style is captivating and the words are very loving!
Disarming charm (Poetry) - 1/5/2009 5:12:47 PM
Such a loving write full of warm descriptions of love.
