Tommy's Day (Short Story) - 1/22/2009 11:47:08 AM
I think this is a fine children's story, Pamela. It reminded me of the imagination that runs unfettered when in childhood. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Tommy's Day (Short Story) - 1/9/2009 1:27:48 PM
This is a good length for a children's short story, but a leaf talking didn't quite work for me. Perhaps if it had been a bug or butterfly it would have been more believable? Just a suggestion. I like the concept though
Butterfly (Poetry) - 2/6/2009 5:47:22 PM
Hope is always welcome in my life and love reading about it. Great write. Liz
Amen (Poetry) - 1/22/2009 11:43:21 AM
A most uplifting offering, Pamela. Thank you! Love and blessings to you,
Regis
Change (Poetry) - 1/22/2009 11:42:32 AM
Let us plant seeds of greatness and merit for all concerned
so tomorrow is better than the days prior to our knowledge.
Wise sentiments, Pamela. This is a fine gift for your daughter. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,
Regis
Butterfly (Poetry) - 1/22/2009 11:41:22 AM
Substance to reflect upon, Pamela. I love the "hope-filled" tone of this write. Thank you for sharing it. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Adam and Eve (Poetry) - 1/9/2009 6:11:00 PM
Excellent. Liz
Awakening (Poetry) - 1/5/2009 6:31:05 PM
And a most beautiful awakening it is......
Be always safe,
Karen
