An Accident of Love (Short Story) - 11/6/2003 11:01:16 PM
I love the way you intermingled an underlying serious message with an unusual brand of humor. This story definitely does not seem like that of a first timer.
Micheal James Marshall
An Accident of Love (Short Story) - 11/6/2003 10:36:00 PM
Nia, thanks for sharing this piece. I absolutely love the delivery, not to mention the overall message of the story. Truly a great piece I would have to agree with Dennis it doesn't seem like its your first short romantic piece.
James Reynolds
An Accident of Love (Short Story) - 11/6/2003 8:55:45 PM
Great story! Wonderful imagery and an extraordinary amount of humor. Definitely wonderfully written! First attempt at a short romance piece, really? Great Job, Nia.
Dennis
An Accident of Love (Short Story) - 11/3/2003 8:06:37 PM
Nia, this is truly an incredible piece of work. The story is very captivating through its unusal humor. Excellent work BG!
Josh
Only the Body (Poetry) - 3/8/2010 4:53:29 AM
"between my strength arms is not for he. only between my thighs his place to be" wow amen to that sister
A Virgin Unveiled (Poetry) - 3/8/2010 4:47:23 AM
must say dats wonderful but never live with
(what if) for life won;t de fun live with ther moment
At My Breast (Poetry) - 3/8/2010 4:44:25 AM
wow if i could think of that i belive i wiil be some else
Love in the First Degree (Poetry) - 3/21/2005 5:27:06 PM
eyes blind, heartlead
how he said the things my mind wanted to hear
penertrating deep my eyes weep
why, how could you do this
to me
blindness caught slipping
feelins' deep here
real here............
Love in the First Degree (Poetry) - 3/18/2005 12:04:26 PM
they say the first cut is the deepest. Go for a tender guy next time! Real poem! k
Love in the First Degree (Poetry) - 3/18/2005 9:46:57 AM
10 inch knife? whoa...this is painful and real and captured beautifully the pain that passion can bring
Death of A Virgin (Poetry) - 11/6/2004 3:45:06 AM
When we say goodbye to that special part of us, it is rather like a death, and hope is all we have from that time on, that our flower plucked will be kept well watered and alive.
Profound and soul stirring Nia
Adding you to my library ty
Ch'erie
Woman Unseen( Easy Lay II ) (Poetry) - 11/9/2003 5:41:39 AM
excellent... men cannot think that way if you do not allow them to...
Woman Unseen( Easy Lay II ) (Poetry) - 11/6/2003 10:55:01 PM
Nia, please know some men appreciate a challenge. This piece is definitely wonderfully written. You have a tremendous amount of talent.
Micheal J. Marshall
Woman Unseen( Easy Lay II ) (Poetry) - 11/6/2003 10:43:30 PM
Nia, truly a profound piece! Definitely deep! The word choice and the delivery are simply amazing. Keep up the good work!
James Reynolds
At My Breast (Poetry) - 11/6/2003 9:02:24 PM
Unbelievable work! Simply incredible! This is definitely the work of a true poet. Wow! Nia, you definitely have a talent beyond belief. This piece is so beautiful and touching, your word choice is extraordinary as well as your lyrical style. Thanks for sharing!
Dennis
At My Breast (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 6:06:46 PM
A lovely and touching lament for maternity lost. You hit the spot with this one Nia
At My Breast (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 6:47:42 AM
good lob
At My Breast (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 4:08:22 AM
deep and powerful write....enjoyed much!!!
At My Breast (Poetry) - 9/9/2003 11:06:38 PM
Nia,
Oh this one touches so deeply and it
is so painful when it happens.
Thank you fo sharing this one... Excellent write
PJ
Mechanisms of A Man (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 11:19:07 AM
Nia, very good, you are right, the line needs to end. Bill Murray
Mechanisms of A Man (Poetry) - 8/17/2003 6:33:53 PM
Well written piece!
tony:)
Female 2 Me (Poetry) - 8/17/2003 2:06:55 PM
Nia, it doesn't sound easy for you, and I know it innocent. This poem is honest and being honest is very good. Truth helps us all, if we listen. Bill Murray
Female 2 Me (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 10:17:49 PM
Very insightful. Also could be an inspiration to some.
Excellent writing.
Kudos!
tony:)
Female 2 Me (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 10:10:01 PM
I loved this write of urs!!
Female 2 Me (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 9:52:18 PM
Youm go girl excellent write.
PJ
A Virgin Unveiled (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 6:49:37 PM
Very powerful piece, Nia. :)
A Virgin Unveiled (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 6:21:31 PM
The best way to get over one, is to find another. [and you will never make that mistake again] smiles...well done.
A Virgin Unveiled (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 4:41:29 PM
Nicely written well done...now away with all those reminders as Allain has said! :O)
~Nikki~
A Virgin Unveiled (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 1:24:01 AM
There are many of us who would not abuse.
Well written piece.
Kudos!
tony:)
A Virgin Unveiled (Poetry) - 8/15/2003 10:45:01 PM
Well get rid of everything that reminds you of him. The first step is wanting.
Other than that you have a well written poem here.
Cheers
Allain
Deceptive Sheets (Poetry) - 8/4/2003 12:26:18 PM
How this does hit home for some. Great insight.
~Jackie~
Deceptive Sheets (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 6:21:39 PM
Oooooooh! Cold. I like! :) Very well done.
Thanks,
Emilie
Deceptive Sheets (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 1:33:59 AM
I detect a lot of anger there, which I'm sure is your intent.
Only the Body (Poetry) - 6/10/2003 5:04:59 PM
A phenomenal write, thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Only the Body (Poetry) - 5/19/2003 6:45:13 AM
Like this one Nia. A few of us know the value of a whole woman.
Only the Body (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 7:41:43 AM
I hear you loud and clear on this one, Excellent rant!
Reindeer
Only the Body (Poetry) - 5/17/2003 8:19:13 PM
some men make love to a woman's body, some men make love to the essence of her soul...
Only the Body (Poetry) - 5/17/2003 5:47:33 PM
You GO girl! -Bear
Only the Body (Poetry) - 5/17/2003 5:10:54 PM
They aren't men.
Nice rant.
Only the Body (Poetry) - 5/17/2003 4:13:29 PM
Well expressed. If only men could see more than external beauty. I'm reminded of a poem W. B. Yeats:
For Anne Gregory
by William Butler Yeats
'Never shall a young man,
Thrown into despair
By those great honey-coloured
Ramparts at your ear,
Love you for yourself alone
And not your yellow hair.'
'But I can get a hair-dye
And set such colour there,
Brown, or black, or carrot,
That young men in despair
May love me for myself alone
And not my yellow hair.'
'I heard an old religious man
But yesternight declare
That he had found a text to prove
That only God, my dear,
Could love you for yourself alone
And not your yellow hair.'
Only the Body (Poetry) - 5/17/2003 2:56:14 PM
Hit the nail on the head.
Only the Body (Poetry) - 5/17/2003 2:41:15 PM
it is sad how some men see women..very sickening, isn't it? good rant! :( (((HUGS)))
Lyrical Lies (Poetry) - 5/16/2003 11:02:43 PM
a wonderful write
Enjoyed reading
William
Lyrical Lies (Poetry) - 5/16/2003 6:55:30 PM
Love is not forever.
Well done.
Lyrical Lies (Poetry) - 5/16/2003 6:38:19 PM
Words of a true woman! Men should be bound by their word, like women are! Thank you...
-Bear
Lyrical Lies (Poetry) - 5/16/2003 6:26:59 PM
beautifully written verses of loving thoughts~
Masculinity's Chains (Poetry) - 5/16/2003 6:04:09 PM
Nia, this truly is defining..... thank you! -Bear
Masculinity's Chains (Poetry) - 5/14/2003 4:31:55 AM
This is wonderful work! Explains what is so often femininely longed for and masculinely impossible!
Masculinity's Chains (Poetry) - 5/13/2003 5:42:17 PM
Wonderful write! *applaus*
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Pretty Girl Blues (Poetry) - 1/22/2003 9:45:45 AM
THAT POEM IS VERY BREATH TAKING. I DON'T KNOW WORDS TO DESCRIBE IT
Untitled ( Life's Purpose ) (Poetry) - 1/21/2003 8:25:31 AM
I loved reading your poetry.Thank you for sharing it with me. This is a beautiful work. Your worth is what you make it.
Untitled ( Life's Purpose ) (Poetry) - 1/10/2003 1:43:09 AM
I agree with Robert, your worth is what you make yourself be. bill murray
Demise Of A Woman (Poetry) - 12/8/2002 6:15:08 AM
Wow, what an intriguing write, thanks for sharing this piece with us.
Ashawarrior, http://www.authorsden.com/ashawarrior
Of A Woman (Poetry) - 12/5/2002 9:44:26 AM
Powerful write. A true image of a woman.
Thanks for sharing.
Afrika M.A.Abney
Of A Woman (Poetry) - 11/29/2002 12:38:43 AM
To be strongwilled you have become strongminded first. Nice write!
Cheers,
Tim
Lady (Poetry) - 11/29/2002 12:26:42 AM
True, but as long as you're fine & in tune with yourself, thats' all that matters, right? U can't look good 4 everyone, some like the inside just as much as the outside.
Born Unborn (Poetry) - 11/29/2002 12:24:21 AM
Magnificent, u intrigue me more & more. Unborn we are, but born 2 show that we are strong & can do just as good as the next....elevated is the mind, isn't it?
What You Do To Me (Poetry) - 11/29/2002 12:21:24 AM
I'm in awe!!! Funny, thats what love does 2 me.
Easy Lay (Poetry) - 11/29/2002 12:19:34 AM
Beautiful!!! Some don't understand, but I do.
Hope this isn't funny 2 u of a man feeling the same. Love is beautiful!!! Not being an easy lay is the character of u.
Untitled ( Guidance, Please ) (Poetry) - 11/29/2002 12:15:40 AM
Damn, I intrigued by a new. I totally understand & feel the same. where are u???
Of A Woman (Poetry) - 11/29/2002 12:13:42 AM
Deep, I dig this,but of a woman is the counterpart... man. Of a woman strong is the love & passion that takes 2 heart 2 keep man from losing his way, if true.
Of A Woman (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 4:59:22 PM
very nice
Of A Woman (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 4:58:00 PM
I like it. There are deeper, more dire conflicts, but a woman knows this one.
Demise Of A Woman (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 2:55:20 PM
Nia, this is a great piece of work. I think this piece has great imagery and it clearly demonstrates the pain many women have gone through. Great work, nice piece for all women!
Demise Of A Woman (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 2:51:14 PM
Nia, great work. It really made me think about the abuses that many women have suffered on the account of men.
Demise Of A Woman (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 2:19:47 PM
Very expressive, quite intriguing. I lovee the imagery of this piece.
Demise Of A Woman (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 1:50:32 PM
Excellent work, wonderful piece!
Demise Of A Woman (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 6:42:31 AM
the subject matter is moving
but the rhyme spoils it
Demise Of A Woman (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 4:30:17 AM
Given me insite as to the better half.
Demise Of A Woman (Poetry) - 11/27/2002 6:08:43 PM
That's a familiar feeling. I can relate to this poem very well.
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Demise Of A Woman (Poetry) - 11/27/2002 5:12:26 PM
*shudders* graphic portrayal...it must stop. be their voice, and let me stand beside you, in support of all women...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Untitled ( Guidance, Please ) (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 7:23:46 AM
Keep seeking and you shall find. Ask and you shall receive. Good write!!!
Pretty Girl Blues (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 2:50:51 AM
Wonderful write.
Afrika M.A.Abney
Untitled ( Guidance, Please ) (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 2:49:35 AM
Have faith, be at peace, stay humbled and blessed. No all men are not the same, at least not my men. Lovely write.
Afrika M.A.Abney
Pretty Girl Blues (Poetry) - 11/7/2002 12:42:47 AM
Look forward to more of these
Lady (Poetry) - 10/17/2002 5:41:23 AM
Excellent write.Have a question for you please contact me. Thanks
Afrika
Born Unborn (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 3:16:46 PM
Excellent write. Thank you for sharing.
Afrika M.A.Abney
Born Unborn (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 2:39:48 PM
Nia,
Very powerful voice for the unborn.
You might see my page for,"The Soul of the Aborted." I believe that artistic expresion of cumulative voices serves to awaken humanity to a higher conciousness--both of those here having babies, and those choosing the journey to be born with God. Blessings, Vicky
Born Unborn (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 1:08:42 PM
excellent, well written cry of the unborn. we should all listen...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Born Unborn (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 12:51:45 PM
I guess I don't know what it's about, a little foggy, but good word choice.
In His Eyes (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 12:33:44 PM
:( well written .... j
In His Eyes (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 12:33:05 PM
i enjoyed this one.. Very well done.
Peg
Easy Lay (Poetry) - 9/14/2002 6:44:30 AM
Nice write.
Afrika
Easy Lay (Poetry) - 9/12/2002 10:18:34 AM
there is so much media hype about SEX. look at the commercials during football, for crying out loud!!! I agree with your sentiments stated here, but the pressure in our society for quantity not quality unfortanately dominates the majority. it is ridiculous. you stated your case well.
thank you
josie
Easy Lay (Poetry) - 9/12/2002 7:58:43 AM
Excellent! All too often, honor is sacrificed for an illusion of being loved.
Easy Lay (Poetry) - 9/12/2002 1:30:56 AM
Excellent!
Lady (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 11:20:13 PM
THAT IS SO TRUE AND IT HAPPENS EVERYDAY AND IT JUST GOS TO SHOW YOU THAT YOU SHOULD NEVER UNDERESTIMATE YOURSELF "NIA ROSE" REMBER THAT NAME I SURE WILL I WISH YOU LUCK AND HAPPINESS THROUGHOUT EVERYTHING YOU DO I FEEL AS IF YOU ARE MY SISTER YOU ARE SOMETHING SPECIAL DONT LET ANYONE TELL YOU OTHERWISE YOU GO GIRL BABY, BABY ,YEAH!!!
Lady (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 11:13:44 PM
Hey NIa another 10, great poem ijust hope i find a girl like that
What You Do To Me (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 11:12:37 PM
ANOTER GREAT ACCOMPLISHMENT FOR NIA ROSE I AM SO SPEAHLESS YOU KNOW WHAT I SEE IN TKIS YOUNG LADY IS THAT SHE DOES "HIM" AND STRIKES BACK WITH ANOTHER SHE IS UNSTOPABLE AND DONT HATE "MITZI JACKSON".
Him (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 11:08:48 PM
hey great poem i feel sorry cause im a guy and i just hope girls dont think im like that
What You Do To Me (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 11:00:22 PM
best poem ever you go girl.
Him (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 10:56:32 PM
This poem is so true it takes you through so many steps and it really speaks for itsself it is so beautiful i was touched it was like a like a flashback for me A PERFECT 10 NO 100 TO INFINITY NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE BEYOND WORDS YALL BETTER PAY ATENTION NOW A CHERESH THE TIME YOU HEARD THIS POET CAUSE I CAN GARENTE YOU SHE IS GOING PLACES.
What You Do To Me (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 4:53:41 PM
short...sweet....nice flow
What You Do To Me (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 1:11:51 PM
Excellent write. This really flows.
What You Do To Me (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 9:14:19 AM
Excellent write...
What You Do To Me (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 5:20:54 AM
Loved this.. WElcome to the Den <smile>
What You Do To Me (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 4:24:32 AM
Good flow and rhythm. Like this one!
Him (Poetry) - 8/29/2002 11:00:49 AM
Wow! this is great imagery and how true!!!
Lady (Poetry) - 8/29/2002 10:54:57 AM
Beautiful poem. Nicely worde and so sweet to read. Great Work. Keep writting!!!
Lady (Poetry) - 8/29/2002 10:51:21 AM
looks can be deceiving, your right it's the self-love that rules the day and makes you shine. good work
josie
Lady (Poetry) - 8/28/2002 6:58:42 PM
You know.. one day when I was about 35 I sat down with my sister for a serious talk.. And was so amazed to find that all the times I was envying her.. she was wishing she was me. Funny how life is sometimes.. Wonderful poem, excellent message. Welcome to the Den..
Him (Poetry) - 8/24/2002 8:11:36 PM
Oh, don't remind me, this is often so true. Thanks for sharing.
Him (Poetry) - 8/24/2002 5:44:25 PM
A good lesson learnt!!!!! Great message!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Him (Poetry) - 8/24/2002 5:26:07 PM
Oh my!!!!been there to.. Maggie
Him (Poetry) - 8/24/2002 4:04:15 PM
Short and says a lot about many relationships. Well said.
Him (Poetry) - 8/24/2002 3:45:23 PM
Yes....that is the norm..
Iloved this simple but very truthful write.
~smile~
Peg
