Nightswallow (Book) - 1/30/2009 4:51:13 PM
Congratulations, Bronwen. I am very impressed. Love, continued success and best wishes,
Regis
The Patient (Short Story) - 3/6/2009 7:25:31 AM
I like a good horror story. And this doesn't dissapoint. Nicely done!
Mark
The Patient (Short Story) - 3/2/2009 3:04:42 PM
very good and very scary. it seems the woman was skitzophrenic. very good
The Patient (Short Story) - 3/1/2009 4:49:00 AM
A very interesting concept, and it was pulled off well in the writing. Good job.
The Patient (Short Story) - 2/27/2009 6:19:07 PM
very scary!
The Patient (Short Story) - 2/27/2009 11:19:32 AM
Chilling! YIKES!! I hope I never need to have eye surgery! GEEZ!! Well done!
The Patient (Short Story) - 2/27/2009 10:15:30 AM
You are a gifted writer, Bronwen. This is a most "effective" tale of horror. I could relate to the first part right away since I have had several eye operations. I did not know where you were headed with the story as you grabbed my attention and held it throughout. Well done. Love and peace to you,
Regis
The Children of Nibel (Short Story) - 2/10/2009 6:58:07 PM
I must say you have captured the haunting dream element very nicely. This story, at least some of it, reminds me of R.H. Barlow's "The Root Gatherers".
Babysitting (Short Story) - 2/5/2009 5:46:37 AM
WOW!Great writing! you are very descriptive I actually felt I was there.Your dreams blur with reality. Welcome to Authorsden!
The Children of Nibel (Short Story) - 2/3/2009 10:50:12 AM
If I may "say" so, you are a very good writer, Bronwen. I was drawn into your story right from the start and my attention was riveted until the end. Well done! Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Babysitting (Short Story) - 1/30/2009 10:47:54 AM
Wow! That gave me shivers, Bronwen. Doesn't say much for using pills of any kind; particularly anti-depressants in this case. Well done. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Free Fringe for All? (Article) - 2/16/2009 11:54:15 AM
Interesting account, Bronwen. I hope you are happy today. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Our Oceans in Danger (Climate Change) (Article) - 2/4/2009 7:31:08 PM
Bronwen,
You are right; it's good to hear this from the young ones. Your generation may yet alter the destructive course that ours have fallen into. Please keep writing about this matter. May God Bless and guide you.
Sincerely,
Regino
Reading as an art form? (Article) - 2/4/2009 12:43:52 PM
A fine analysis of why you write. Again, welcome to AD. :)
Janet xoxoxo
Reading as an art form? (Article) - 2/2/2009 7:19:09 PM
That is a fine explanation, Bronwen. I think you "speak" for many who love to read. I also think your reasons for writing are noble. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
What We Write is Love? (Article) - 2/2/2009 12:11:07 PM
In my humble estimation, you make a lot of sense in this article, Bronwen. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Frank Gardner on his ordeal (Article) - 1/30/2009 4:49:40 PM
I did not know about this. My words cannot do justice to this event. Thank you, Bronwen. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Nightmares and Dark Corners (Article) - 1/30/2009 4:47:55 PM
I embrace my dark side, and accept it - surely that's the most constructive thing I can possibly do. Everyone has a dark side, whether it shows up in dreams, desires, fantasy, reality... the list is endless. And if you don't accept that its there, it can perhaps manifest itself in other - less productive - ways.
You certainly do make a lot of sense, Bronwen. I have been inspired by dreams. I would probably classify the type of "dream" that you describe here more as a "nightmare." Nonetheless, the fact that you get inspiration from such experiences is a wonderful thing. Thank you for sharing. Love, peace, and best wishes,
Regis
Our Oceans in Danger (Climate Change) (Article) - 1/30/2009 4:45:02 PM
This is a most apt and timely write, Bronwen. I completely agree with your point of view. Thank you. Love, success, and best wishes,
Regis
Tips on how to Survive When the Zombies Come (Article) - 1/30/2009 4:43:22 PM
I am not sure how to take this, Bronwen. If you are serious; this is very chilling. Thank you for the advice though. And thank you for sharing your imaginative and creative "you." Love and best wishes,
Regis
Never (Poetry) - 12/2/2009 12:30:58 PM
Sounds like my ex and I. I'll always love him, just can't live with him or he with me. It's been since 1981 and we still have wounds and love that has been re-arranged in our hearts so that we can bear it. I am happily married now (8yrs) but there's nothing like the one! Thanks sweetheart. xx
Never (Poetry) - 2/16/2009 4:39:22 PM
Your last line sums it all.
A mediocre at best relationship. A nagging feeling that you may not have had enough usually leads to a mistake.
I like the view from a young perspective. Mayhaps when we have more experience, we become more cynical.
Walt
Angels of Gold (Poetry) - 2/10/2009 10:00:52 AM
A thought provoking and intriguing write...
Cryssa
Outlet (Poetry) - 2/10/2009 9:56:57 AM
Sounds like a place I have been lately...several of my last few poems reflect that same restlessness.
Welcome to AD! I enjoy your poetry.
Cryssa
Never (Poetry) - 2/10/2009 6:18:05 AM
Magnificent and beautiful poem.I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
Never (Poetry) - 2/10/2009 4:48:45 AM
BEAUTIFUL, VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Never (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 8:57:43 PM
there is such deep sorrow--perhaps longing in this--well written
Never (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 1:04:19 PM
So well expressed and deep in thought....
Be always safe,
Karen
Story (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 11:39:38 AM
Truly you are a poet my lady friend. In admiration with love and best wishes,
Regis
Angels of Gold (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 11:38:24 AM
This opens the passage to a fountain of thought, Bronwen. Wonderful poetry. Love and hugs and best wishes,
Regis
Never (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 11:36:42 AM
You are so young to have such "old" memories but they are timeless and you express them exquisitely via your verses here, Bronwen. Truly I can relate. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Never (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 9:02:27 AM
This be a thoughtful write, thoughtful for you and thought-provoking for me...Ed
Story (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 7:24:09 AM
Too many pieces have been written never to be a full part...though this short piece is a story within itself...Ed & Rufuz [w00f]
Story (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 6:51:12 AM
Bronwen,
"But stories come and stories go,
Through the earth as water flows"
These are very beautiful lines.
Sincerely,
Regino
Story (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 4:53:11 AM
beautiful! your writing is very touching
Outlet (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 3:13:41 AM
I am glad that you let out all of your anger,fustrations and feelings in this poem in terms of trying to find happiness.I enjoy reading your poetry and hopefully I will read more poems from you in the near future,take care
Edwin
The Patient (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 3:10:38 AM
A well written poem,take care
Edwin
Angels of Gold (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 3:08:43 AM
A beautiful and well written poem,Great work all around :-),take care
Edwin
The Patient (Poetry) - 2/8/2009 8:05:03 PM
well expressed-the fear of even elective surgery is very real
Angels of Gold (Poetry) - 2/8/2009 8:01:27 PM
this is deep and beautiful--very nice
Outlet (Poetry) - 2/8/2009 9:29:00 AM
Welcome! And I enjoyed the depth of emotions in this wonderful poem. So many times we all share a measure of time in our own "personal hell."
Brilliantly executed and well versed!
Mark
The Patient (Poetry) - 2/6/2009 3:11:49 PM
The anxiety and panic comes through beautifully. I can't imagine this type of procedure. When I recently went through my back surgery, I was eager to do it. I wanted the pain to stop. I wasn't scared at all. Okay, maybe scared of all those docs seeing me in my altogether.... lol. Great job on the tone in this poem:)
Sheila
Outlet (Poetry) - 2/6/2009 3:06:15 PM
Bronwen,
Welcome to AD! Sometimes I think that artists feel emotions deeper than others do. This sadness you describe seems all-consuming. I like how there's a general attitude toward not wanting to feel this way; a search for that silver lining. I like the way you leave it, too. Yes, time performs miracles. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Outlet (Poetry) - 2/5/2009 8:48:21 AM
Welcome to AD Ms.Phoenix (you not living in Tucson, are you?) :-)
"Outlet" has sadness connotations with sparks of hope, thoughts taken to the surface for a solitude that the heart don't want to feel.
Well done Missy!
Georg
Outlet (Poetry) - 2/5/2009 12:26:05 AM
Indeed, there is pain in which we all dwell that is uniquely our own and I can't help believing that someday we will understand that it's all for the betterment of our souls. I can relate to this.
Great write,
Pierre
Outlet (Poetry) - 2/4/2009 3:50:52 PM
Made sense and well penned. Welcome to AD
Blessings, J'nia
Outlet (Poetry) - 2/4/2009 2:13:51 PM
Thank you Regis for mentioning this Poets name so as I could have my husband read to me her work. First, let me say her work indeed touches the soul and reflects a brilliant talent for writing poetry. I salute you Bronwen Winter Phoenix for a beautiful gift. Soar with that pen in your hand. I look forward to hearing your work again...
The Patient (Poetry) - 2/4/2009 1:48:02 PM
...did the laser surgery work as I am interested in it too, but it scares me...beyond that you have made me MORE scared, thanks, LOL, Ed
Outlet (Poetry) - 2/4/2009 12:42:28 PM
Very good poem, vivid. I read your bio and a lot of my older poems are from dreams too. It's the dark stuff. Welcome to AD, You're right at home here.
Janet xoxoxo
The Patient (Poetry) - 1/30/2009 10:41:01 AM
You have recreated and shared the "experience" very effectively via your verses, Bronwen. Having had four eye operations, I can relate to what you have expressed. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Outlet (Poetry) - 1/30/2009 10:38:27 AM
Your verses entered my soul and they echo there, Bronwen. I love your poem. I can relate. Thank you for sharing this offering. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
