Cupideros' Triumvirate and Philosophy (Short Story) - 10/14/2016 5:11:07 AM
That's okay Ron. With your hearing impairment listening can be difficult. Also if you had listened, the play (not a short story) is about 1.5 hours long. I uploaded it twice by mistake.
But your better off Ron buying the book with the play and other great short stories inside here:
http://www.lulu.com/shop/cupideros/the-great-opera/paperback/product-4207921.html
Cupideros
Cupideros' Triumvirate and Philosophy (Short Story) - 9/29/2016 6:45:06 AM
I checked on your YouTube presentation. Unfortunately, my hearing impairment did not allow me to listen to the computerized reading of your play. The play also appears to be nearly 3 hours long. A lot to listen to when I was expecting to read a short story in a few minutes.
Ron
Beachside Bookshop (Short Story) - 12/10/2014 8:14:05 AM
I use the word, bitch, in my writing, but I found that it might turn off a woman reading the story in the beginning. As I read on, the use of the word became less of an issue. I also found that the psychologizing of Surf in the beginning got to be a little repetitive and boring.
The rest of the story was right out of a pipe dream about how beautiful people connect and are intelligent, too. As though one can find true love at a strip club, especially of you have a lot of dough and are former athlete that is still in shape for marathon sex. The sex is well written and straight out of a porno routine. The competition between two strong personalities is obvious, but love doesn't seem to be a strong part of the picture… And they lived happily ever after?
Ron
