This is actually well written. It seems that fanfic is a lot harder to write than original horror for some reason. I don't really play around with fan fiction too much myself, but in that note this is a nicely written horror tale.
The Commander and the Chief take on the rogue Deep State: the Gunfight at the UK Corral, missing Redcoats in the Nevada Triangle, and nuclear blackmail!
What if you were named as heir to a Will that you knew nothing about and members of your family were being kidnapped and tortured for information they didn't have? What if you went to the police only to find out the Russian Mafia and your own govern