Hubert grabbed as she teetered on the jetty. "Suicide is so selfish. Get away from there, silly bitch."
"Make me," hissed Adela.
He grabbed. She dodged. They struggled.
Splash.
She sobbed; "He died to save me!"
She thought; How else could I get him that close to the edge?
It is close to Halloween 2003 and this is a good story for that, did she plot murder by accident? Chiller! Jackie <> <
Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield
3/26/2003
I agree! Nobody seems as interested in the stories. I wish they were also. But this story is super! I really like the way you said so much with so few words. Great job!
- J -
Reviewed by Birdie Houston
3/16/2003
I enjoyed your 50 word story even though short it had a picture I loved it !!! Longing to read more
Wow! This one is profound and a bit chilling! Great job!
By the way, not only is 'other poems' clicked on but even more seldom is 'stories'. Wish more people would read our stories.
Great job!
Debbie :)
A humorous look at the world and life through my eyes.
Follow the author and his wife, as they travel the world …. several times over.
Laugh at their funny stories, self-inflicted crazy events, strange observations, wacky zoo facts and snippets
Thirteen Sick Tasteless Classics, Part II is adult literature featuring adult language and situations that satirizes thirteen famous novellas and short stories. It is Jay Dubya's sixteenth ebook.
