Here are a few chapters to wet your whistle! I'll add more later.
Death without Closure
Chapter One
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Reviewed by Elizabeth Anon
7/2/2006
This is the first story I chose to look at ... I'll add you to my tracking list so that I can be updated. I was reading your blog and saw that you were feeling down because people didn't leave comments. Sometimes that's because they have time to read, but not enough time to formulate a review or comment. Sometimes people can't be bothered. Some people might be worried about offending. There are all sorts of reasons. I'll check out one of your other offerings. Take care of yourself *smiles*
Good morning Helen... Please consider rewriting these five "chapters" before, "...wetting our whistle with more." I was all but turned off on this story at your second sentence. Harold
