AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Lisa Loucks Christenson, iMary Lynn Plaisance, i RickthePoetWarrior, iEmmanuel Laroche, iDave Tabler, iPamela Wiedenbeck, iLeanne Bright Cloudman, iCheri Clifton, iJohn DeDakis, iRochelle Brandon, i

  Home > Horror > Stories
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry      Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     
Carin Spirit

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Articles
· Poetry
· Stories
· Blog
· 104 Titles
· 683 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Aug, 2007

Carin Spirit, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.


Melissa
by Carin Spirit
Friday, April 23, 2010

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
Recent stories by Carin Spirit
· My Apologies to All
· Brain Flatulence
· Car Wash Blues
· Car Wash Waxing
· Tippi
· Who's a Natural Woman?
           >> View all 7


     This is a true story, it happened not 20 minutes ago...

Three times now, in as many months, I watched the ambulance take her away.

I have been trying to show her the way, for 3 years or more.
 
This time, it is worse than the others, staggering out her door, a dive down 10 hard steps, layed flat out, blood  head to toe.  The husband as drunk as she, telling her to get up, refusing to call for help.  Another neighbor went to call, while I stood trying to keep her awake.

The ambulance seeming to take hours, arrived and loaded her up, faster then I've ever seen before, as they raced down the street.  I watched staring into the sun, the big red truck taking her away.

Memories come flooding in,  almost 18 years ago, that was me, now it seemed as though it were only yesterday. 

I thanked my higher power for my 17 years plus  and asked him to do for one more. 

My Spirit, please keep Melissa safe.

 

 

Want to review or comment on this short story?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson 6/5/2010
Sometimes, we rather walk blind, live in oblivion, but it's because we're afraid to change. We tell ourselves that change is not possible, not for us, and we believe that lie, sinking deeper into misery and pain. But sometimes, it takes a moment like this to realize that we need to change, that we are getting a second chance to change, and I hope and pray that she realizes this. And I hope that she is okay.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 5/13/2010
The pain of watching someone else go down a road we've been down ourselves while trying to prevent them from having to endure the same, can be so strong and makes us feel helpless. Someone has to be ready to receive that help, in my belief. I pray Melissa took your advice and guidance, and that this experience helped her to find her way through. God bless you for trying and caring. ~Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 4/24/2010
So very sad Carin but until she realizes there is a problem and accepts it dear, you can only pray for her and hope she will listen. sad when one is abused and even worst when we abuse ourselves. I will pray for Malissa's safty and courage to change her life while she has the chance.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

The Apostate by Paul Lonardo

Chris has been fostered at the Crowley boot camp since he turned seven. At sixteen, he is finally ready to run away because his foster father is an abusive person who works Chris and the other children to the point of exhaustion. All he has left of h  
Member BookAds

The Apostate by Paul Lonardo

Chris has been fostered at the Crowley boot camp since he turned seven. At sixteen, he is finally ready to run away because his foster father is an abusive person who works Chris and the other children to the point of exhaustion. All he has left of h  
Member BookAds

DESOLATION Island by Terry Vinson

Atop a prison island teaming with super-villains, one evil will dwarf all others. On this island, rescue isn’t an option.  
Member BookAds