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     Jenna and Michael are temporarily seperated after a fight, and Jenna is depressed.
Saturday, June 4, 2005, Alaska Time, Anchorage, Alaska~

Dear Louie~

I am sure you are probably wondering what has been happening to me or if I am even ALIVE. Well, I AM alive, but I am NOT doing very well at the moment.

Michael and I have separated; he has gone back to Louisiana for the time being, and I don't know if he is ever coming back. We got into a major fight right after he got back from Louisiana, and it seems that ever since, I have been in tears. Now I have nobody, and I am so worried something will happen to me! I can't even care for myself; I am stuck in this goddamn room, and I am about to lose it!! What if I fall? Who is going to help me up? What if I need to use the toilet?? What is going to happen, and who is going to help me now? I can't do it by myself with just one good arm and leg; I am an emotional wreck!!

Michael's mother died; she didn't get any better after her stroke, and so Michael had been there until a month ago; but then he and I got into a fight when I accused him of running out on me, and he got mad and he left. I haven't seen him since; and I miss him so much! He hasn't written, hasn't called, NOTHING! I am so scared something has happened to him!! Can you call him or drop him a line for me? Please? I am scared to, for fear he will only get madder!!

Please write me and let me know what is up with you. I have not gotten much mail lately, and I am so depressed! I will write more later, but right now I have to stop because I am crying to damn hard!! I love and miss you, Louie!!

~With much love, your (sad and depressed) friend in Alaska, Jenna Aurora.

P.S.: Can I come down there and stay with you for a little while?? Please??

 

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Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/5/2005
This is a very powerful emotional story Karen! (I see you in it.)
A superb write. Take care;-)!

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 6/4/2005
This is a powerful write, I can feel for Jenna
God Bless
Michelle!
Reviewed by Dave Harm 6/4/2005
A lot of truth in this write... sadly, to many just don't take care of business at hand... Jenna just call Mike and say "I Love You," that takes care of many problems... excellent write...
Reviewed by Sarah Tagert 6/4/2005
Oh Karen, what a twist. I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment!
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 6/4/2005
Poor Jenna, hope things work out for her....great write Karen!

Peace and love, Carole
Reviewed by Gloria Buono 6/4/2005
Wow, this feels real. You've developed a great character in Jenna with emotion that appears so genuine. Sorry Jenna may feel lonely now but she also knows what the worst thing is than can possibly happen to her and she has accepted it. Arguing is a fact of life and it is always best to let it out. All your character Jenna has to do now is improve her situation. She should send a sympathy card to Louie for the loss of his mother and forget him. Try to meet other companions, and you never know.
My best, Gloria

PS Minor typos - A few of the words "to" need to to "too"

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/4/2005
oh I can relate to the fighting....not funny anymore...but I learned to just stay...too much work to do the unpacking again...lol!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/4/2005
Karen,

O, boy. Poor Jenna! Hopefully things improve--you've hooked me with a twist I didn't see coming. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears*

Now look what you made me do--I care about your characters!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed by George Carroll 6/4/2005
Sometimes what we argue about is not worth what we lose because of it.

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