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     Johnny is upset at the news in which his girlfriend in California has shared; he tries to lend her a supportive ear, but inside, his own heart is breaking.

Weds., October 11, 2006, 10:08 a.m., D.S.T., Nashville, Tennessee (written during study hall)~


Dear Rebekkah Rachel~


I am so stunned I don't know what to say  or think!  How positively awful! When mommy and Ronee' told me about what had happened to  your little sister, Daniella, it was as though someone took their fist and punched me, hard, right in the stomach. I haven't been able to sleep good ever since, and my appetite has been a wreck.


Poor mommy has been worried sick over me, but I guess she understands what I am going through. After all, you are my friend, and when my friends are hurting, I hurt along right with them, and I feel their pain.


Do you know who took her, or why? Why would people do such a horrible thing? I bet you guys must be going crazy; I only hope that Daniella is found safe and unharmed. That is my biggest prayer right now, Rebekkah, and I pray that  the miracle in which you seek comes to pass!


Mommy told Pastor Bilkey at our church about what happened to Daniella, and people have been holding 24-hour-long prayer vigils. Now other churches have joined in praying for Daniella, and even mommy's adoption community has been praying. Don't you worry: you, your family, and especially Daniella, are being covered in prayer!


Well, I guess this is it for now. I am in study hall, and it is about to end. I just wanted to write and let you know that you are never far away from my thoughts or prayers! God bless you, nad remember this: never give up hope! God will make a way!


I love you!


~Your boyfriend, Johnny. :( >tears!<

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Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 10/12/2006
This is a heartbreaking wtite, but very well done, you capture the emotions well
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia 10/12/2006
Karen,

I love the way you display the genuine intensity of a child's love and pain, and faith.

Blessings&Love, Rhonda
Reviewed by H. Lena Jones 10/11/2006
Ah Johnny, I'm sad too. Poor Daniella, she must be feeling really scared and missing you, too. We mustn't stop praying, right?

Another touching write, Karen!

God Bless
Love, Lena
Reviewed by Aberjhani 10/11/2006
For me, the admirable feat in this write is how the intense drama communicates as sincere Love. Enjoyed it tremendously,
Aberjhani
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/11/2006
Another most compassionate write Karen!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Peter Paton 10/11/2006
Karen

I totally agree with Johnny's assertion and faith filled words..
God will make a way...where there is no way..
Guaranteed...;-)

Love
Peter
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/11/2006
Still the passion and the pain continue as we wait to see how the conclusion to these letters and correspondence works itself out.

Fee
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 10/11/2006
Karen,

The broken cries of a child, powerfully conveyed in a poignant pen; Rebekkah and her family should heed Johnny's advice and lean on God. An excellent write.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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