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     A young boy is concerned about a possible meteor strike which is threatening the Earth.

My first attempt at science fiction! :) Please be kind! LOL

Guess it was bound to happen. Been hearing news reports from world-renowned scientists discussing the possibility sometime in the next 10-20 years.


The mere thought of a meteor striking somewhere on Earth is terrifying. If it struck in the middle of a metropolitan city, the ramifications of such an event would be cataclysmic: significant loss of life/death, disruption of communications devices/power, massive damage to buildings, roads, surrounding suburbs, things too terrible to comprehend.


If it struck just off the coast of our nation, tidal waves would ensue, swamping all in its path and spreading to devastate other nations.


Didn't think about this until last week while flipping through the channels; came across an astrologer warning that a possible meteor would strike sometime next week in the heart of the American Plains states: Texas, Oklahoma, Nebraska, Kansas.Possibly South Dakota.


One week warning.


Evangelists on tv told people to pray, politicians and other notable government officials cursed the meteor, saying it would overshadow their agenda, that it would take attention away from them, take away the needed funds from the war, the war, the war.


Besides, they didn't believe in science.


Talk show hosts were soon talking about the looming catastrophe. Hospitals recorded an increasing number of heart attacks, panic attacks, any number of stress-related events.


Suicides rose dramatically. All over the Net, people discussed the possible meteor strike, making plans to evacuate, all wanting information about it, hoping, praying that it would somehow change course.


At school, which had just started back for us, the thoughts of upcoming homework assignments and tests, the latest boy/girl crushes/breakups, tete a tetes, the latest in fahion/entertainment/movies/music, the upcoming football season were driven from our minds; the only thing people could focus on was that damn  meteor approaching earth.


You could see it, too, in the distance, a huge, glowing fireball that did not seem to be moving. It was terrifying, all woundering if this would be the night that it hit.


*End of Part One*


 

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Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 9/9/2007
A beautiful picture, and a great Part One story. Your story reminds me of a movie I once saw and it was absolutely frightening. You've created that outlook in your story.
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone 9/4/2007
IT's a good start. Just try to relax and let it flow. Don't worry so much about what we will think of it. Find the heart and find the who that it will effect most and focus on them. LadyJ
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/4/2007
Thanks for sharing..great start of "science fiction"!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 9/4/2007
With only a week warning I don't know if I will be able to finish packing and....forget it!
Your effort at sci-fi (the nerds term so we thing they are academic besides bein weird)
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 9/3/2007
It is different for you, but it reads like a Frank Peretti or Tedd Deeker novel, awesome write, I enjoyed
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/3/2007
OH my: different from you, but so dang readable: you pull the reader in and make them feel this young man's tension.

Not knowing who he is just heightens the fear: it could be any one of us in the same situation.

VERY well done! Look forward to the next installment.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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