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     Mark Ratinauer writes in his journal prior to heading off to school.

Friday, May 30, 2008, McKinney, Tx., 6:22 a.m.~

Dear Journal~

Mark here.  The kid they call "Rat-Nose".  Sorry if I haven't written in here since April; been busy, trying to cope with being misplaced from that stupid storm of last month.  We will be moving back to our home within the next several weeks; am bored beyond all get out!

Oh, my aunt and uncle are okay (they'll do in a pinch), but their glib attitude towards Christ has me frustrated.  Still can't talk to them about salvation; they tune me out like a dead radio.  So now I don't even bother; let them do my own thing, and I do mine.

School is fixin' to end within a few weeks (at about the time we move back to our house); can't wait.  School is such a waste of time; I can think of better ways to utilize my time than to be holed up in a stuffy classroom for a million hours a day, hearing the same old tired lessons day in and day out!!

I'd much rather be riding my moped or skateboarding the day away!  I'm a kid; hey, I gotta have my freedom from the prison life they call school!!

I may have a girlfriend:  Teena Marie.  She has designs on me.  She's such a hottie:  built right in just the correct places, long, shiny red hair, huge blue eyes that turn green when she's p'o'ed.  A soft, musical voice when she speaks, a killer voice she uses when she sings.  Martina McBride ain't got nothin' on Teena Marie; she's good!!  (She ought'er try out for "America's Got Talent"! I'm serious; she has a VOICE!!)

Teena and me have been spendin' some time together during and after school.  No hanky panky, but we do study together, eat lunch together, ride the bus together.  Man, I think of her, and my palms, my body breaks out in a king-sized sweat.  I think I am in lovvvvve....

Well, I gotta get dressed; still sittin' here in my underwear.  Not proper school attire; ma would blow a fuse if she saw me still undressed; she hates it when I dilly-dally before school.  So before she or pops blow a gasket on my behalf, I'd best get dressed and out the door, so I don't miss the bus.  Take care, will write in here again!

Man, I can't wait for summer vacation!!

~As ever, your friend, Rat-Nose (Mark Ratinauer). :)

God bless you!

 

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Reviewed by Bernice Angoh 6/2/2008
aaaaw, first love? how very sweet.
Reviewed by Mary Patterson 6/1/2008
Enjoyed the trip into Marks life. Hope he can move back home soon.. Glad he has a friend....M
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 5/31/2008
Again Karen you keep us filled in on the world where others reside. Thank you for your wonderful story.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/30/2008
I'd much rather be riding my moped or skateboarding the day away! I'm a kid; hey, I gotta have my freedom from the prison life they call school!!

Hey, I hear ya, Ratnose. I'm far from bein a kid anymore, but I still gotta have some fun, too!

PS I still sit around in my underwear, too; until my wife yells at me!
Reviewed by Bonnie May 5/30/2008
Once again my friend, wonderful story that pulled me in with humor. Thank yashamedou, job well done. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 5/30/2008
I think that Teena hasn't got a Rat-Nose but an adorable hamster.

Georg
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 5/30/2008
Karen, I really liked this story. It's light and airy, a bit humorous and sounds just like a young fellow who can't wait for school to be out. You did a great job on this one.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/30/2008
The anticipation of summer vacation evident in these lines, along with love to make it even more special - well done, Karen!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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