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Emily's Loss
by Debra Purdy Kong
Wednesday, September 10, 2008

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     This flash fiction piece is based on a true incident that happened years ago, on a Toronto street in daylight. I didn't think readers would believe me if I wrote it that way. The story first appeared in flashquake in March 2002.

(190 Words)

 
Emily picked up her dog’s poop, then placed the baggie in a larger paper bag.
 
“Good girl, Tasha. One quick stop at the store, and then we can go home.”
 
Shivering in the winter night, she and her Afghan hurried up to the 7-Eleven. Near the store’s entrance, Emily wound Tasha’s leash around the bicycle rack as rap music pounded from an approaching car.
 
Headlights shone on Emily and Tasha. Emily put the bag down and glanced at two young-looking guys in a Honda Civic. The passenger raised a beer bottle to his lips. Neither of them stepped out of the car.
 
Inside, Emily paid for milk and bread, just as Tasha began to bark frantically. Emily froze. Her dog didn’t behave this way unless she felt threatened, and strangers who came too close threatened Tasha. Oh, God . . .
 
Emily darted out of the store, relieved to see Tasha sitting quietly, her eyes focused on the Honda peeling out of the lot.
 
“It’s okay, girl.” Emily stroked Tasha’s long silky coat.
 
She untied the leash and bent down to retrieve the paper bag, but the bag was gone.
 THE END

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Reviewed by Guy Belleranti 9/16/2008
Hi Debra. Good story. I love flash fiction, and loved the ending to this story of yours.

Guy Belleranti
Reviewed by William Potter 9/11/2008
A well told story...and only 190 words!

How's that bag treating you boys? Hilarious!

take care,

William

Reviewed by L C Evans 9/11/2008
Debra,
I loved this! It reminds me of an incident years ago when I was hauling a horse home from a show in an open stock trailer. A guy on a motorcycle was tailgating the trailer, practically touching the bumper and making my horse very nervous. Finally nature had its way and my mare let fly. I can't say I felt bad when the rude tailgater got a faceful of something unpleasant. Needless to say, he backed off--way off.
Linda

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