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Death or Glory. From an Author's Perspective.
by David Burrows
Friday, February 10, 2017

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     A short story, tongue firmly in cheek of course :)

 Hallam ducked beneath the blow, pushed his left foot forward, grunting with the effort and hacked sideways with his sword. Something hard hit his shield and if he hadn’t put his foot forward he would have overbalanced. The fight raged around him. Men and krell dying in their hundreds.

 Hallam screamed a war cry and pushed against the line of enemy, seeking to dislodge a foe and open up their shield wall. Krell pressed hard against his shield, hoping to achieve the same aim. “Hold the line,” he commanded, sensing a slight movement to his left. A line that went backwards was already defeated. A spear glanced off one of his greaves and he stamped down hard trying to snap the shaft. Warm blood flecked his face, causing him to blink. The copper stench in his nostrils nearly made him gag. “Push,” he yelled, trying to get his line forward.


The author pushed back the keyboard and leaned back. Time for a cuppa. He went to the kitchen and turned on the kettle, reaching in to the cupboard for a teabag. Humming softly, he filled the cup and stirred clockwise before settling on a couple of chocolate biscuits as a treat. Sitting in front of the monitor once more, he dunked a biscuit. He shivered and glanced at the thermostat.

“What the hell,” he muttered dialing up the warmth. His slippers were new and fur lined, a rare treat and kept his feet beautifully warm. Stig, an orange and brown cat mewed playfully to one side and the author tapped his leg, allowing the cat to jump up and settle on his lap, purring softly. Outside the sky threatened snow, but the author barely glanced that way.

Finishing his tea and smacking his lips the author settled down to create. His eyes focused on the monitor as he muttered, “Now, Hallam, what fresh hell can I create.”

 

 

Hallam groaned, recognising the fearful cry from the darkened sky above, “Grakyn,” he screamed, hoping that the archers to the rear could see in the half-light. The battle was going horribly wrong. He prayed to all the gods for a change in fortune.

 

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Reviewed by Eva Pasco 2/19/2017
I enjoyed your short story which was long on separating a writer's reality from the different world he/she creates.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 2/11/2017
In a story this short, it's hard to know what Krell and Grakyn are except the latter are probably flying. It's hard to imagine battles like this, man to man, and what they must have been really like with all that pain and gore. But with strange creatures? Makes the fiction even harder to write.

I think I get the irony… Warming the place up so it will be cozy. Making a nice hot cup of tea. Able to ignore the coming snow outside. And, a warm kitten purring on your lap. Just the kind of mood to write about the world going terribly wrong!

Methinks you scream too much. Perhaps you could yell a little… Or yelp, shriek… Whatever. ;-)

Ron

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