This is actually well written. It seems that fanfic is a lot harder to write than original horror for some reason. I don't really play around with fan fiction too much myself, but in that note this is a nicely written horror tale.
Maria, raised in the Mafia and educated by the gangs of New York, is hunting the man who killed her Akalina, and she will kill anyone who gets in her way.
This is the second novel in Frank P Ryan's acclaimed fantasy series, The Three Powers. The first in the series, The Snowmelt River, is a top ten epic fantasy bestseller on amazon.