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Winter wonderland or not
by Sherry L Hoffman
Monday, December 29, 2014

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     This is a story of love at past thirty. It shows love with others as well as with the couple involved.

   Elena stepped off the plane near her new home and gaped.

Nearly Christmas and no snow in sight. She had just arrived from Montana where snow was everywhere and it was twenty below! Here the sun shown brightly on grass! Sand! And pavement, and it was a balmy 72 degrees.

 Her parents were off on a long overdue vacation to Rome. Her father had driven her things here with one of the men who drove their semis. He had told her that they had made it livable and she could then do as she wished with her new home. It had been weird! In mid October they had received a letter saying her dads sister had died and left her the home here in Florida. All she had to do was be moved in by early January and be set in the community. It had taken time to close her law practice and pack so here it was nearly Christmas and she was alone in a strange new astate and it could not be more night and day than this!

   Harvey Wilde had helped her dad store her aunts things in an oversized building between aa garage no a barn. He had dropped her dad at the airport to fly home and had gone to a town with the strange name of Frostproof.

a shuttle took her to the car park where her dad had asked to have a new vehicle delivered there yesterday. It was a pickup with a hydraulic cargo cover. Since it was a metallic blue green, sometimes called teal, she loved it. Soon she was heading west to her new home town of Okeechobee. Lord! Sounded like something out of an old Mayberry movie.

  She wished she could have waited till after Christmas to come but the will said moved in and established  so here she was. She stopped at a smal store for fresh foods and asked for directions to her new place. She had GPS but figured this would help Establish he

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 12/30/2014
Reads like the beginning of a story, rather than a story…

Needs considerable editing before being published. Should have been edited before posting here.

Ron

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