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Two Candy Wrappers
by Robert Kasch
Sunday, July 19, 2015

Rated "PG13" by the Author.

       
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     Two Drabbles or 'Candy Wrappers. 100 words each.

04/01

 
The diviner of truth held his palms skyward and studied the faces of the tribe. All made eye contact and did not blink for fear of being thought the liar.Tears flowed from some as they held their gaze. The diviner looked angry and dropped his arms to his sides, Then a fearful and frightened expression replaced the one of anger. He began to cry and then looked up for signs of mercy. There were none. The diviner was the liar.The tribe stooped and picked up rocks and charred wood to kill the deceiver.The diviner screamed and wept.
04/02
 
A damp place smelling of mold and straw. Mice moved about freely running over my arms, hands and face. I could not move or even blink my eyes. Voices below me whispered my name and laughed. Where was I? Why could I not move or speak? God help me. A barn loft? Smaller things tickle my tongue. The bodies belonging to the voices are climbing up toward me. Still laughing. I can see two men pushing onto the lofts oaken planks. He’s dead alright. The smell. Should have planted him sooner. More laughter as I’m lifted. Stiff and helpless.Dead.

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 7/20/2015
Both of these seem to be tragedies with unknown aspects as a result of the paucity of words. Something like that kind of thing. Just leaves me wondering if they could be written better. Dead men don't talk, but it's interesting what might be on their mind.

Often, I'm in my bed like that with little things like spiders, fruit flies, and occasional itches, that I can't deal with. But, I'm perfectly alive. I just can't deal with these little irritations that I can't scratch because I'm paralyzed and can't move to address them. It's a bit like your corpse, only my brain is still working hard, imagining all these things need attention as though my body were dead.

Ron
Reviewed by Eva Pasco 7/20/2015
Through an economy of words, you've managed to write two descriptive stories with impact and feeling.

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