That's a whirlwind of a story! And some complex psychology to go with it! Well told. Kept me rushing through it faster and faster like the world must have felt like for those guys as the story went on.
well done, my friend!! truly exceptional in its content; it had me hooked from beginning to end!! i normally don't read stuff like hunting season, but i was curious, so i decided to check it out. i sure was glad i did. super write!! love, karla's twin, karen lynn. ((GOD BLESS YOU, and GOD BLESS ALL FIREFIGHTERS!!!!)
wow! I'm still dazed. I don't normally read this kind of stuff. I'd give 10+ for your technic of the different points of view. Another 10 for the horror it evoked in me. I hate violence of any kind, so the story line gets maybe 5. But your imagination is wonderful almost gothic. In all , a very strong , unexpected theme. You 've got yourself a brand new fan.
Reviewed by Liby Pereira
3/13/2002
wow! I'm still dazed. I don't normally read this kind of stuff. I'd give 10+ for your technic of the different points of view. Another 10 for the horror it evoked in me. I hate violence of any kind, so the story line gets maybe 5. But your imagination is wonderful almost gothic. In all , a very strong , unexpected theme. You 've got yourself a brand new fan.
Well, I've read this story three times just to let the horror sink in as deeply as it could. I found the use of three points of view to reveal the story intriguing. Because you put me,the reader, so close to the three men, I wanted to know more about them--maybe their physical descriptions--and why Colleen meant so much to all of them, not just her brother. A compelling read with complexity that involved me in a genre I don't usually choose to read.
Reviewed by Mark Haeuser
1/13/2002
Holy Jesus! I may be twisted but damn I loved this story!
You have a future buddy.
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