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Full Buildings Empty
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Saturday, February 17, 2024
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Day after day, month after month, the same ego only gets larger as his wealth gets smaller. Is it possible that the man of fraudulent habit, that one man proven to be a violent sociopath man-child has the influential power to make corrupt thinking and behavior “a badge of honor” to be worn for everyone to see. (posted as a flash fiction story as the poetic value is negligible and cries for a different approach.)

 

Full Buildings Empty

 

Some call it urban hell.

Others defend their high-rise edifices as safety.

Still more will say successful people make full the buildings,

But know not how empty that amounts to.

 

Empty of humanness

Striving to disguise their franticness

With accoutrements of peace and tranquility—

At least the way society has 

Coerced and brainwashed us to believe.

 

To picture the windows of glass and steel enclosures as safety

Is to believe the doorman only lets

 “decent” people into the building.

 

But…

 

Perhaps both visitors and residents,

Regardless of faith or non-belief,

Need to remind themselves of a biblical quote

That even the secular humanists understand

And give respect to:

“For what shall it profit a man,

If he shall gain the whole world, and lose his own soul?”

 

The more mindful urbanites

Will behave with integrity and kindness.

The metaphysicists may think the soul is one’s inner voice.

Still others,

Many who gain acceptance into the circle of luxuriant economic status,

Fill many a building with emptiness,

And of course,

The typical response to questions of ethical behavior usually causes

 

 

A condescending jocular and pompous harrumph of denial:

 

“Nonsense.  “What are you talking about?”

 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 18, 2024
To rise high above the filthy streets is probably the aim of every business grad who lands in the Big Apple. They are fodder for Trump and the likes of him. Trading the appearance of wealth and status to empty, money grubbing people of little stature at all.

It's beyond me why people of the country, the salt of the earth, still cling to him like he is going to save the United States from something that doesn't need to be saved. We don't need to save privilege, greed and racism as hallmarks of the Great American experience. Isolationism in a time of multinational businesses and an Internet of naked exposure, is a death rattle to what it means to be an American..

Perfect biblical quote!

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 18, 2024
That you quoted Mark 8:36 (KJV) surprised me. This very same verse is proffered also in Matthew 16:26 (KJV) but is written as such: "For what is a man profited if he shall gain the whole world, and lose his own soul? or what shall a man give in exchange for his soul?" Not only are we slogging through the worst administration in American history, but we are also seeing (and experiencing firsthand) an incredibly divided America, along with the mind-numbing manifestations of lawlessness and apostasy increasing exponentially, not only in America, but around the world. You're not alone in your feelings about this man. But remember: the battle is not yours. Find peace. Thank you for sharing. r