Part One
Backlit
To backlight anything
Human or inanimate
Is to risk placing the object in shadow
What if…
Seeing life at an elderly age
Is not to create shadows
But to see the light behind the essence
Of yesterday
The past of living
What if the idea is
A safe way to appear for now
To know that the baggage of the past
Is there for a purpose
What if…
The back light of the past
Is brought over the head
Into a straight on illumination
What would we see?
Such a moment faces
Every aging man or woman
A consciousness often realized
Only with their last breath of forgiveness
Part Two
Arguably, we create our own reality. Yet, given the most obstinate challenge facing the aged in the mirror every day is rendered with disappointment and often depression, denial takes hold.. There is so much to admire in a face that shows experience with both smile and grimace lines of life still in progress. (Image by Odin AI)
You
So
What do you do
You who rush to be somewhere
Knowing others clamor to jump ahead
To be there waiting to push you back
What do you do
You whose dreams remain tenuous
Without the courage to risk
Whose narrow window of time ticks backward
For fear of the future
Who needs what others wish to prevent
To stand upon your own weathered peak?
Genealogy is more than generational beginning and end.
Inclement passage need not be feared
For the route only you know
Traverses through your own created clouds
Revealing sunlight you also create
Above the storms no one else can own
Except you
In the distant future someone may wish to know who I was while I was here. It's there for them to read in the shadowy trail of my life lived.
Ron
Michele and I have this hanging in our home: “God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.” IMO, If everyone could incorporate that wisdom into their lives, I think there’s a good chance that things could be better. Thank you for sharing this. One of the responsibilities of a poet (IMO) is to encourage thought. You’ve done that here. Kudos. I wish the writer well in his contemplation's, and future expressions. Peace…. rlc