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Grace in Aging (A Two-part microprosetry story)
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Friday, November 1, 2024
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Sometimes one has to wonder why so many step out of their own shadow only in the end, often missing the reward such a move affords, (Image by Odin AI)

 Part One

 

Backlit

 

To backlight anything

Human or inanimate

Is to risk placing the object in shadow

 

What if…

Seeing life at an elderly age

Is not to create shadows

But to see the light behind the essence

Of yesterday

The past of living

 

What if the idea is

A safe way to appear for now

To know that the baggage of the past

Is there for a purpose

 

What if…

 

The back light of the past

Is brought over the head

Into a straight on illumination

What would we see?

 

Such a moment faces

Every aging man or woman

A consciousness often realized

 Only with their last breath of forgiveness

 

Part Two 

 

Arguably, we create our own reality. Yet, given the most obstinate challenge facing the aged in the mirror every day is rendered with disappointment and often depression, denial takes hold..  There is so much to admire in a face that shows experience with both smile and grimace lines of life still in progress.  (Image by Odin AI)

 

You

So
What do you do
You who rush to be somewhere
Knowing others clamor to jump ahead
To be there waiting to push you back

What do you do
You whose dreams remain tenuous
Without the courage to risk
Whose narrow window of time ticks backward
For fear of the future
Who needs what others wish to prevent
To stand upon your own weathered peak?

 

 

Genealogy is more than generational beginning and end.

Inclement passage need not be feared
For the route only you know
Traverses through your own created clouds
Revealing sunlight you also create
Above the storms no one else can own
Except you

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 18, 2024
I look to future generations, interested in who was this writer of little renown but wanted to pour out his thoughts every day, keeping him younger and fitter than his age (others told him).

In the distant future someone may wish to know who I was while I was here. It's there for them to read in the shadowy trail of my life lived.

Ron

Reviewed by richard cederberg
Reviewed on November 1, 2024
“What if.” Two words that have infinite implications in every facet of human endeavor. I imagine for most, the way one chooses to see the world can more often than not create the world they see. It can be troublesome though (on many levels) trying to explicate your views to others who can only understand from their level of perception. I’ve often wondered if one of our greatest problems is the persistent picture in our heads of how it’s supposed to be. As I’ve learned, in many ways, a person’s mind can be so powerful, they can invent, create, experience, and destroy things with thoughts alone.

Michele and I have this hanging in our home: “God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.” IMO, If everyone could incorporate that wisdom into their lives, I think there’s a good chance that things could be better. Thank you for sharing this. One of the responsibilities of a poet (IMO) is to encourage thought. You’ve done that here. Kudos. I wish the writer well in his contemplation's, and future expressions. Peace…. rlc