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     Johnny writes a letter of apology to his girlfriend, Rebekkah Cohen.

August 8, 2007, 10:13 a.m., D.S.T.~


Dear Rebekkah Rachel~


This is Johnny.


I am sorry if I have made you think that I no longer  wanted to be your boyfriend, but it seems that Susie is jealous of me somehow. I figured it would be best if I lay low for a while; that way, you can spend more time with Susie, if that is what you want.


I do want to be with you, Rebekkah, I really do! You have been there for me throughout some of the worst times of my life, and you have never given up on me when other people have. You have been a prime example of a true friend, and I feel as though God's blessed me with you. I am indeed a lucky guy! :)


Please don't break up with me. I am more than willing to give our relationship another chance. I want to be honest with you. I don't want to hold anything back!


I wish I knew what to do to help you--let alone, Susie Callaway. I know the two of you talk about me when you IM each other. I am willing to let bygones be bygones, but I hope Susie isn't saying anything that is untrue about me. It seems that she doesn't like anyone other than herself; she sounds like an extremely unhappy person whose only goal in life is to make other people miserable. Sad!


Well, I am going to go now. The other day we went to the circus; we are going to go again tonight. I will write to you again soon, after the circus; will let  you know how it went! Take care and God bless! I love you!


~As always, your boyfriend, Johnny. :D


P.S.: Did you know Ronee' broke her foot? She did! She's now hobbling around on crutches again; she fell into a hole, twisted her ankle. Boy, you should have heard it pop! WOWCH! Made ME hurt! LOL


~Johnn-o. :)

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Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 8/13/2007
Nothing quite like young love...enjoyed this much my friend...
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/11/2007
Awwwwww this is so well done....brought back some memories!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by d. k 8/10/2007
Awwwwwww.....young love eh!! I hope the youngsters can overcome their differences and remain together. What a sweet write. It's great being bad to reading your work!!

Smiles,
Dorothy
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 8/8/2007
Great write I dont think R.R really wanted to break up with Johnny, she just needed some time
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth 8/8/2007
I agree this guy is a keeper. Communication is the key to a good relationship and at least he's has the humility to apologize when I'm not sure it's really his fault.

I do enjoy the reality and humanity you have in your stories, Karla. It's refreshing!
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 8/8/2007
Well I think Rebekkah should be the one sending Johnny flowers...or at least an e-card! Johnny is so honest, his truth is as tall as the circus clown on stilts...thanks for the letter today, Karen Lynn...be well you and Karla...

Love,
Sage
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath 8/8/2007
Awwww I missed Johnny and Rebwkkah's spat did I~well what is important hopefully they are going to be back together.
Enjoyed this refreshing read although thrown aback guess there is a jealous friend abound...great write.
You do these journals so well, so realistic~thank you for sharing them.

Stay well, and blessed!
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/8/2007
Poor Johnie seems in a no win situation but is handling it with a maturity and compassion that is commendable. Good life lesson here you present Karen. Hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar 8/8/2007
Again a lovely journal entry. Just keep 'em coming. Victor
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/8/2007
Dear Johnny,

You better get used to women getting together to talk about ya - it's just what these female critters do! But don't let it get ya down.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 8/8/2007
Whatever happened with "if I blow where you have pain it will go away"
Dear Rebakka should take that little, shy and humble dandelion expression of regretfulness as a flower to put inside the pages of a diary, and be there for the rest or her life!
Georg
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/8/2007
Karen,

Glad things are resolving between Johnny and Rebekkah. Now if only Susie would come around...well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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