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With raised hands
In Thanks...
To so much more, Than big blue sky.
To you are friendly hands waving
And loose skirts flowing
And frilly shirt...
Enthusiastic
Explanations
Calling to the wilderness
I shall dance with thee
Twisting turning
As I pass between the trees
Smiling flowers
Try to refrain
From even slightest
Giggle
Yet sway with me
To music in my head
As Birds make snow
Of tiny little
Flower petals
And Bees fly by
Chasing Summer
Leave me then
I will not cry
For cooling is the Autumn
Of brilliant colors
Rusting then what's
Left of green
Crumbling
Upon my breast
Heartfelt
Heart pounding
When dancing
Twirling swirling
Brings me to
Winter's gleam
Shining eyes
Of crispest morn'
Once more dance
I do adore
Reviewed by chris stienstra
9/14/2007
Standing "O".....
I waltzed through this as I read along. I loved this one soooooo early in the morning.
Best wishes
Chris
Reviewed by D Johnson
9/13/2007
Jen, a wonderful painting of changing seasons. Well done,love.
Peace,
Dan
Reviewed by Felix Perry
9/13/2007
The beauty of this write is spellbinding as you cover the change of the season with such passion and caring. Well done Jen.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
9/13/2007
Wonderful write, Jen; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D