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     A little disabled boy finds a special little furry friend.

The boy smiled when the kitten he called "Jingle Bells" had leapt up onto his lap. The kitten turned around once or twice, then settled in on the little boy's lap, instantly dissolving into purrs that caused his entire little body to vibrate.

The boy's smile grew bigger when he could feel the purrs enamating from the contented little kitten.

He wheeled himself back to where he lived, in a rundown tenement housing development in the middle of the city. He wheeled himself to his apartment, where his mother opened the door.

"Why, Packy!" she exclaimed when she saw her son, "Where on God's green earth have you been? I've been worried sick; I was afraid something happened to you!"

"I've been wheeling around the block, Mama", the little boy said. "Look! Lookit the kitty I found! Isn't he cute? I named him 'Jingle Bells', 'counta' the little collar he's got around his neck! He's so friendly!"

"Packy, how many times have I told you? We can't have pets here! If the landlord sees the kitten, we're going to get thrown out of here! We can't afford to get into trouble!"

Packy's small face fell at the news; his bottom lip quivered, and his eyes filled with tears. He didn't want to see the forlorn little kitten thrown out in the snow and cold. He wanted to keep the kitten, keep it in a nice, safe, warm place where he could be safe and happy.

"But Mama, he won't eat much! I can take care of him! I can!" Packy exclaimed. "I can hide him in my closet; the landlord wouldn't even know we had him if I hided him real good!"

"Honey, I know you want to take care of this 'Jingle Bells', but honey, we can't have pets. It's the rules", Packy's mother said, trying to reason with her son. "We are going to have to give him to someone who can give him a good home. We can't. I'm sorry."

"Well, if you decided you didn't want me anymore, would you give me away?" Packy whined, his voice rising, tears falling from his eyes.

"Oh, darling, of course I wouldn't! You're my pride and joy, son, my shining pride and joy!" Packy's mother replied, tears filling her own eyes at her son's desperate answer.

"You sure?" Packy sniffled, wiping his snotty nose with the back of one dirty hand.

"You bet I'm sure! You're my little man, Packy! I love you too much! You can do anything you set your mind to; that includes taking care of little kittens!"

"So, can we keep him? I want to be his friend so much! I really do!" Packy insisted, tears instantly drying up.

Packy's mother sighed. There was no reasoning with that boy, she thought to herself. He's just like his father: stubborn, not easy to convince, no matter how much the facts have been given. She wished in her heart of hearts that she could make him happy by letting him keep little "Jingle Bells", but so far, it looked like "Jingle Bells" would have to go elsewhere, or else they would face the possibility of being evicted.

~End of part Two.~
  

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Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 12/26/2007
loved this story my friend, you've penned a story that we can all relate with...heartwarming and touching indeed...well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi 12/20/2007
A heartwarming story, Karen. Adorable!

God bless,

Sandie.
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce 12/19/2007
Jingle Bells knows that Packy needs company. God has sent Jingle Bells to be his friend!!!

A very moving write, Karen!!!!!

Love and hugs,

Sandie May :o)
Reviewed by Randall Barfield 12/18/2007
Who of us hasn't been through these trials and tribulations with a mom or dad? It seems as if the world is ending when you're the kid and have the pet right there in your arms! Who's gonna be so cruel to take it out of your arms? Cruel rules too! 20 years ago they started those complexes in Florida with prohibitions against kids! Cat yes, but no kid. Krazy world.
Reviewed by d. k 12/14/2007
A heart warming story that opens the eyes to those who have hearts for children, their wishes and of course for the little kitten purring away so innocently. He is oblivious to what his future holds, he's warm in the lap of a loving child. What does this tell us about humanity? Where did we go wrong? Why does it have to be this way. I'm definitely an animal lover and very passionate about children and the less fortunate. When one dictates how a person must live, freedom is stolen from them......oops, best get off me soap box! Well done my friend!

Smiles,
Dorothy
Reviewed by Patricia Burden-Evans 12/14/2007
If this is part II, where is part I? this was good. Are you published? This would be great to read to students!
Reviewed by Angel God is Love 12/14/2007
This is great your an insperation.. Sorry I have not been around as much to read but hope to be on more. Hugs Angela
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/11/2007
I simply don't know how you keep up with it all, Karen. In admiration,

amour et paix,

Regis
Reviewed by Mary Coe 12/10/2007
A fantastic story. Very touching. Thanks for sharing this.
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth 12/9/2007
Absolutely adorable! I'll have to find part I. Wonderfully well done.

Sorry I haven't been writing or commenting on your work. Grad school has kept me busy for the last four months.

Blessings!
Your friend in New Mexico,
Marie
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/7/2007
Ohhhhh this is a wonderful heart touching piece!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 12/6/2007
Oooo... the real traumas and dichotomys of life. Hard lessons to give and receive, Karen, but compassionately delivered. Where there's a will, there's a way... I look forward to reading more of Packy and Jingle B's adventures... Sounds a bit like The Incredible Journey! :)) Love, Kate xx
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 12/6/2007
Little children can shatter our heart when they become sick, but little children can't take care of anything living that's as little as they are, and in need of special care and nurture.
Then again, we can fool them telling that they do take care, we are going to extend our love just a little more.
Georg
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 12/5/2007
An amazing write Karen thanks for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Ann Scarborough 12/5/2007
I agree with Eileen, Karen! This is great and I can't wait for part two. I'm hoping the landlord lets Packy keep Jingle Bells!!!
Love,
annie
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/5/2007
You sure can tell a wondrful holiday tale and make the heart wrench hoping Packy gets to keep the kitten! please let him;-)...I'll be reading to see!

Love,'
Eileen
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 12/5/2007
It is so hard to tell a child that he can't have a pet at this time...maybe at a later date
peace and love, Carole
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone 12/5/2007
A powerful lesson he will have to learn. Good write. Lady J
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/5/2007
Sad story indeed and a difficult quandry...if she lets the boy keep the kitten then she will be condoning him breaking rules plus risking losing the roof over there heads but if she makes him get rid of the kitten then she will break his heart...will be looking to see how you resolve this one dear Karen.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/5/2007
Oh, No, Indeed!
Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner 12/5/2007
oh no Jingle Bells needs to stay, cats don't make too much noise. A very nice story, a boy is happy now and a kitty found a home so lets keep both happy. They need to hide that kitty. Great write.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 12/5/2007
I loved the message here Karen, spred the word. Thank you for sharing. Someone loved me with all my imperfections and we all have them.

Newfie Hugs are coming your way, Rose
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 12/5/2007
*purring* What a sweet, tender write, Karen; the part that got me was,

"...Well, if you decided you didn't want me anymore, would you give me away?..." OhLor, rip my heart out! Powerful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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