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Mind Games
by Dawn Anderson
Saturday, January 12, 2008

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     The games we play...

“C’mon, taste it!”  He held his fork just inches away from her face.

            “No, thanks,” she replied, wrinkling her nose.

            “C’mon.  Just one little taste.”  He moved the fork even closer.

Glaring at him, she jerked her head back.  “You know I don’t like fish!”

“Yeah, but this is really good.  Just try it.”

“NO, damn it!”  He was really beginning to piss her off, but this was just one of many things in recent months that irritated her about him.

As he pulled the fork back and placed it into his mouth, she noticed a look of sadness come over his face – or was it anger?

Reaching across the table, she placed her hand on his forearm.  “I’m sorry.  It’s just that you drive me crazy with that, you know?”

“It’s okay,” he replied, shrugging his shoulders.

“No, I’m really sorry.  I shouldn’t have snapped at you like that.”

They finished their dinner, chatting pleasantly enough, until it came time for dessert.

“Will there be anything else?” The waiter asked as he cleared their dishes from the table.

“I’ll have a slice of carrot cake,” he replied, glancing up from the menu.

“I’ll just have a cup of coffee, thanks,” she smiled.

Minutes later, the waiter returned with their order.

“This is really good,” he commented, before taking another bite of his cake. “It’s got cream cheese frosting.”

She nodded as she picked up  her cup of coffee.  “It looks good.”

“Try a bite,” he said, thrusting his fork in her face.

“No, really.  I don’t want any,” she replied, raising her hand in protest.

“Just a taste.”  He pushed the fork even closer.

Looking into his eyes, she paused for a moment before taking the piece of cake into her mouth, biting down hard on the fork. As he pulled it from her mouth, it made that annoying sound that always caused him to cringe.

“God!  You know how much I hate it when you do that!”

Still looking into his eyes, she sat up straight in her chair – smiling to herself – not uttering a word…. there was no need.

 
 
 
 

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Reviewed by Ron Karcz 6/29/2009
Well, I won't be offering you any of my "Dirty Little Ronnie's Nearly World Famous Poached Salmon" any time soon. How do you feel about Bananas Foster?

Great job...as usual!
Ron
Reviewed by F William Broome 2/8/2009

Few of us can take, "In Your face," for very long. It is a futile game, played by our 'child' mentality, making us wonder why, when we know the results in advance. You did well on this one. Now, go ahead and eat that cake and fish sandwich! - Bill
Reviewed by Cryssa C 9/5/2008
Uh! How mean! hee, hee, hee...
How often we play mind games...
Cryssa
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 2/25/2008
Great story; you've captured the essence of "those moments" so well!
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 1/12/2008
Yes, Ed! It was meant to be humorous...and thanks!
Reviewed by Ed J. 1/12/2008
I hope this was meant to be humorous. I smiled when I read it, thinking of little things like that in my own relationships. I really enjoyed reading and yes little things become mind games at times. Good job.

Ed
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 1/12/2008
Deeply felt, the games played in the name of love...well done, Dawn.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 1/12/2008
What a wonderful play on mental payback. It also gave the reader, if the reader was paying attention, a lesson in life . . . That lesson being that we all do things to irritate those closest to us without understand why, when we should be analyzing our own selves about what they do to irk us . . . You delved into shrink-inspired mind games here, Dawmn . . .

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