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     Treasure Ortiz finally gets some free time to write in her journal.

March 11, 2008, Ponca City, Oklahoma, 10:10 a.m., D.S.T.~

Dear Journal~

Remember me?  If not, I'm Treasure Ortiz.  I'm eight years old; live in Oklahoma, in Ponca City, with my family.  I am the youngest of five kids.  I have two sisters, two brothers.  Most of the time we get along; sometimes we fight, much to mami and papi's dismay.

I also have a dog, "Taco", who makes me laugh.  He is so funny!  He's a licker; he's always licking me with that long, pink tongue of his! 

I am in the second grade.  I am a very good speller and reader; I'm one of the best spellers/readers in my class.  My teacher, Ms. Reuters, is very proud of me; so are my parents.  I am very smart!

I like to do many things, including playing dressup or pretend, watching "Princess" Disney movies on the DVD (I also love "Pocahontas"), singing mariachi music with the family (we have our own band, La Familia Ortiz; in the band, I sing lead, and I play the maracas; it's fun!), play games or write stories on the computer, and read, read, read!!  Seems I always have my nose in a book!

People soon forget I'm handicapped when they see me because I have such an open, happy personality.  I don't let my disability (cerebral palsy that requires me to walk with braces and crutches) get to me.  I'd rather have people treat me like any other kid, and not keep pointing out my funny way of walking or my crutches; that really makes me uncomfortable.

In mi familia, I'm the only one who was born handicapped.  It makes me sad because I can't run around like mi hermanos y hermanas; however, they include me in their games, and it isn't long before they  have me laughing. 

Mami tells me the reason why I am like this is because I was born too soon.  I was supposed to have been born in July; I was born in April, April 14, in fact; so my birthday is coming up.  I will be nine years old.  I'm turning into a big girl.

I'm looking forward to it (me cumpleano) because mami promised me that I could have a pinata party.  I have been to lots of pinata parties in the past, and they're always a lot of fun, especially if you're the one who gets all the treasures inside the pinata once it's busted open.

I like hitting the pinata 'cause I have my own built in pinata-whacker: my crutches! :)  Only problem is, sometimes I will get so excited, so carried away, I end up busting someone in the head with my crutch instead of hitting the pinata! LOL

Good thing I've never cracked anyone's head open with my crutch! LOL

Well, I'm gonna get back to class; was bored, so I wrote in my journal.  I will write in here again soon; take care and God bless!

~Love, tu amiga, Treasure Ortiz, aged 8 3/4. :)

 

 

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Reviewed by Treasure ortiz 3/7/2011
I dont know if you look at this site any more but my name is Treasure Ortiz. I saw your story and it touched my heart so deeply, I hope you are feeling ok and everything is good.
Reviewed by Cryssa C 3/17/2008
You have a true gift for capturing the essence of each character's personality with your words. Well done!
This "treasure" made me laugh...esp. the ending. :~)
Cryssa
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 3/12/2008
Hey Treasure, I wish I could have a clown of a dog to make me laugh.
And thinking of it, when I lived in California we had a few piñatas, buil by our Mexican neighbours, whacked but good.
Haven't you see yet "Forrest Gump"? he was a child with you dishability and see where he went! ! !
Keep on reading them books...

Georg
Reviewed by Mary Coe 3/11/2008
Such a beautiful and up lifting story. Enjoyed the read. The little girl is very pretty.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/11/2008
Karen, what a delightful personality Treasure has! I bet she is fun to be with!;-)I enjoyed this story!

Love,
eileen
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 3/11/2008
She is a cute little girl, thank you for sharing Treasures story with us
God Bless
Michelle!
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 3/11/2008
What a delightful, spunky young lady...once again great writing Karen
love, Carole~
Reviewed by Michael Guy 3/11/2008
I guess this is a "Real" story you are writing for Treasure as a journal. That's a good idea to give her a voice or is it really her words? So there you go, so real I'm not sure. Good idea.
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 3/11/2008
To read about a child who has a full, active, and fulfilling life despite her disability is inspirational for anyone. If she can take each day and make it worthwhile, then surely, we who are well and healthy, can do the same. Well done, Karen. By the way, I loved the "voice" of your story.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/11/2008
Karen,

Love this one. Treasure's personality shines - only thing, she's the youngest of five, has two sisters, three brothers? My math skills bite, but wouldn't that make six? LOL Still, enjoyed this story, very much! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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