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     More about the Bosnian immigrant who is recovering from appendicitis, as recounted by the nurse who's taking care of him.

Jane E. Doe here.  Working until seven this morning, then my relief (Louisiana Sandusky) comes in.  Been here since seven last night; am more'n ready to get back home to my little family!  I'm tired!

I am working on the Medical floor.  Have one patient under my care:  a 20-year-old male named Slobo Trbanik (Trbanek?? Spelling??), who is on our floor, recovering from surgery (appendectomy).  He's doing quite well, I'm happy to say.

Slobo was in the Intensive Care (this was where I first encountered him); now he's in a regular room.  He and his mom, Veruca, are very sweet, gentle people, who are pleasant to be around.

Both Slobo and Veruca came to this country only a few short years ago; they immigrated from Bosnia-Hergezovina, to escape the strife there.  Slobo is a casualty of the five year conflict they had there during the early nineties; he was injured as a result of the war.  He's a paraplegic. He gets around on crutches.

The rest of his family have been wiped out from the conflict.  They were at a mosque (they're Muslim), and a bomb exploded, injuring him, and killing all members of his family but his mother.  Miraculously, even though Slobo was gravely injured, his mother escaped with only minor bumps, cuts, and bruises.

I learned all of this through Maggie Vidravitch, a nurse who is from that area.  She speaks Serbo-Croat, is able to communicate with Slobo and his mom.  She then relates what they say back to me in English; this way, I know what's going on.  Maggie's been an invaluable help in keeping me informed, and this way, I'm not left in the dark.

Slobo and Veruca do not speak English; if they do, it's very little.  Very frustrating to try to communicate with them!

At present, as I write this, Slobo is resting comfortably.  IV site looks good (no redness, tenderness, or swelling), color excellent, very low fever, vital signs stable.  I am most pleased as to how things are going; the relief nurse assigned to his care should have a very easy day.

I just peeked out in the hall at his mother; she's sleeping in the waiting area, sleeping like a baby, snoring delicately.  It's good to see her getting the rest she needs; it's been very hard on her since her son became sick.  She hasn't left his side since he first came in last week.

Now Slobo is due to be released in a day or two; I think I will miss them when they go.  I just wonder what's going to happen to them; I pray nothing but good things for them in the future!

Somehow I don't think this will be the last you'll hear about Slobo or Veruca; they've made quite an impression on my heart!

~Written by Jane E. Doe, R.N., on 4/25/08.

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Mary Patterson 4/27/2008
Hope all will go well for the entire family .......M
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/26/2008
Compassionatly compelling, Karen. Thank you. Amour et paix,

Regis
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 4/26/2008
Slobo has the blessings of people that do care, and in the moments of need is when the good human beings take care of their own.
Slobo and his mother should learn that America is what it promises, to take care of their poor and sick and persecuted.

Georg
Reviewed by Charlie 4/25/2008
Hearts are empty pages too, aren't they? People come, they write a bit on it, they leave... and then our mind, it reaches out with its braille feelers and reads what's there again and again perusing the pages and pages... some inks fade till they can't be read, some never fade. --Charlie
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 4/25/2008
Thank you for sharing these stories in the hospital or where ever they grow forth from. I appreciate your kindness Karen. So many don't have time to share their experience and with your stories, we get a feel of other's life.
Blessings and love,
Susan
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 4/25/2008
A very touching write my friend, you've penned this one from the heart indeed as it can be felt within each line...very well done indeed! I've got to back up and read part one! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 4/25/2008
Great write here Karen, you give us a good peak into the day of a life of nurses
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/25/2008
Nurses have a tough job!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 4/25/2008
These kinds of encounters can be amazingly spiritual... I met a "bagman" in New York when I was there in January who I can recall clearly and remember every word he said to me and everything about him... I usually have a brain like a string bag that recalls very little! It was a "spiritual happening". I am sure we were meant to meet, though our worlds are very different. Likewise Slobo, Veruca and Jane... They have impacted each others' lives in ways that words do not express. Each care for the other and the stories of survival amidst horrific brutality add to the penetration in the heart. Perhaps Louie will tell us more about these two interdependent people, too! :)) Touching and heart-warming as ever, Karen, with a gentle pace and loving style which graces your pen when you flow with the rhythm of a "stable night" that brings relief of sickness to body and mind. We are rooting for this guy! And I long to put a pillow under the head of his Mom in the waiting room, too, and to cover her with a blanket! Love Kate xx
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh 4/25/2008
God bless Nurses and all care takers and God bless Bosnia!!!
Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz 4/25/2008
I work in a hospital not as a nurse and it is very difficult to help when there is a language and cultural barrier. God Bless nurses and families like slobos'.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 4/25/2008
God Bless Slobo and his family, and you, for taking care of Earth's ill and injured ones.
Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat 4/25/2008
It's just a sad commentary on how the world around us is destroying itself and the people in it. Fantastic write.
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 4/25/2008
With empathy, I can just imagine myself in a foreign country where I understood no one and they didn't understand me--especially when you are ill and in the hospital. An interesting story...
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 4/25/2008
Karen,

A terrible toll war exacts - not only physically, but mentally, as well - powerfully conveyed in these lines - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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