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     A young man recounts the terrifying night that changed his life forever.

It's been only two months since this happened.  I don't think I'll ever forget what happened to me that unforgettable night.

It had been threatening to rain just about all day.  Sure enough, early in the afternoon, on February 5, 2008, our area was placed under a tornado watch. 

This means conditions are right for tornadic development. 

I didn't really think too much about it:  I was too busy with school.  Storms don't scare me.  As far as tornadoes are concerned, this is Tennessee, not Texas or Oklahoma, where tornadoes are more apt to happen.

At 2:45 p.m., I got home from school.  Did my homework and chores, then headed out for the den, where I horsed around with my little brothers.

Mom threatened to bop our heads together because we were making so much noise.  We came up and had pizza for dinner. 

Yummo!!  No dishes to wash!!  No leftovers! Our family made sure of that! LOL

It rained off and on through the evening.  Nothing to get too worried about.  Just your general "garden-variety" showers, with a little thunder and lightning to make it interesting. 

Went to bed by nine.  Just started to get to sleep, when I heard mom's voice calling in the night.  She was telling us to get to the basement, as there were tornadoes heading this way.  Lightning was lighting up the sky to the west in frequent, vivid flashes, and you could hear the continual growl of thunder.  It sounded like these storms really meant business.

I got Trevor and Ethan up, herded them to the basement.  By now, I was shaking scared:  there is something about tornadoes that make a person turn into a quivering mess of fear.  I was growing terrified. 

I'd seen a tornado once before, when our family was in Oklahoma; I never dreamed I'd see one here in Tennessee.  Oh, I know Tennessee could get tornadoes, but they were rather rare (or so I thought).  I didn't think we'd get one in real life; now it looked like we were going to be faced with that possiblity.

About fifteen minutes later, we could hear the wind screaming outside.  It sounded like the tornado was right on top of us.  It was beyond scary.  Suddenly the power died, and I thought we were going to be toasted by the tornado.

That was the last thing I remembered before everything went black.

~End of part one.~

 

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Reviewed by Bernice Angoh 5/6/2008
Oh, what suspense!!!!! When's the next part coming? What happened in the black of night?
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 5/6/2008
It's not only for the submariners the cry of "dive! dive! dive!" if you have a cellar...please do.

Georg
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 5/6/2008
In seconds...your world is turned literally upside down. Well done, Karen!
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 5/5/2008
great story Karen, reminds me of the man that jumped in the bathtub to survive a tornado, and the baby they found lying in a field after a tornado had struck, hugs
Reviewed by Tiana ~ 5/5/2008
Hi karen! Thought I'd check out the stories section and I'm glad I did! I really enjoyed your story and look forward to the next part. Its like watching a spooky movie! You had me at the edge of my seat hoping that the tornado wouldn't head that way! Luckily, we don't have tornado's in Hawaii. We did have one a couple of years back but it was a tiny one in someone's back yard. We had funnel clouds last year and that was scary enough. But we do have water spouts off shore ... Will be back for more! hugs :)
Reviewed by Ingeborg von Finsterwalde 5/5/2008

A Tornado has to be one of the scariest experiences to live through. One minute everything is fine and the next all hell brakes loose. Done very well Karen.

Ingeborg
Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat 5/5/2008
I've never been in a tornado, husband has, don't think I'd want to. He says it's like a train coming, doesn't sound like fun!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/5/2008
Oh, YIPE - and I thought William Bonilla's poem was scary - HOLYSMOKES! Compelling, first person account of terror, multiplied a thousand fold - thanks a lot, Karen. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *B-GAWK!!!!!!!!!*
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 5/5/2008
OH my goodness. You had to end the story just when I have to know what happened. The suspense and anxiety of this story is tremendous. Excellent write. I felt like I was right there. Liz
Reviewed by William Bonilla 5/5/2008
outstanding write Karen
we here in my part of the south
get our share of tornado warning
some don't take it too seriously
thank God I haven't experienced one yet
but been through some hair rasing warings
thanks for this great piece, as always you are the best
at what you do "Stories of Factual situations"
Love & peace be with you

William

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