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     Bosnian immigrant (now newly sworn in American citizen) Slobo Trbanek attempts to tell his story for the first time, in his own words. He is learning English.

 

Please forgive me if writing not good.  I learning English; English still difficult for me.  I hope you have patience with me. 

Name Slobo.  Slobo Anton Trbanek.  Born in Bosnia-Hergezovina; lived there until war, war change me, I no longer same person as I once was.  Hurt in war, lost leg, now use crutches for walking, sometimes use wheel chair to get around.  Not easy, no.

I have bad dreams about war; have lots of problems, sometimes go in hospital until I get better.  Now live in America, have live America last few years.  My mother, she come with me, we still together.  She learning English, too, it harder for her. We both take English classes at local school.

I am most happy now:  on July Fourth, my mother and I, we become American citizen.  We pass our test, now we say pledge of Allegience, and take oath, now we citizens.  That mean we can vote for president, be whatever we want to be, even go to school to become smarter, or even get a job.  We have much opportunity here, not like back home in Bosnia, where so many people still try put their lives back together after war wrecked them.

July Fourth we go on picnic, have nice lunch at park.  We then go to downtown part of Nashville, where we listen to music, eat some more, then see fireworks when it get dark.  Fireworks look like big flowers bursting in sky; very pretty to see.  Mother and I, we go "Ahh, ooh!" everytime fireworks burst in sky.  We enjoy fireworks; we see them every year.  Fireworks probably my favorite part about holiday like July Fourth.

Then my mother and I become Americans, that was best part about whole day!  When we become Americans, my mother and I, we cry because we were so happy!

Well, I have to go back to sleep; too early.  I will write in here soon, this is your friend Slobo Anton Trbanek saying good-bye for now!

~Slobo Trbanek, new American. :)

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Reviewed by Bernice Angoh 7/10/2008
What great news, now do what you always wanted to do, the sky is the limit.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 7/10/2008
The nearest I been of your country was Dubrovinik and Czastat in Croatia before the war broke there.
Welcome to America as a new American!

Georg
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 7/7/2008
This is a great write, glad to hear that Slobo and his Mother are now Smerican citizens, thank you for this wonderful upbeat write
God Bless
Michelle~


Reviewed by Cryssa C 7/7/2008
It was with such thoughts that I stepped up to the immigration desk in Miami with each of my children in Haiti...knowing that with the officer's stamp, my children would officially be American Citizens!

Cryssa
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/7/2008
You managed to capture what it must feel like to be a stranger in a strange land and trying to fit in. Well done Karen.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/7/2008
Karen,

An excellent write from a new American, trying to assimilate into his new land - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 7/7/2008
Writing about feelings is your forte. Well done.

Walt

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