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     "Rat Nose" (Mark Ratinauer) can't sleep, so he decides to write in his journal again.

My twin the StormSpinner and myself are going to Crowley, Texas, today, for the Freedom Festival. We are looking forward to a day of fun, food, and fireworks!! :)

Saturday, July 12, 2008, 5:01 a.m., D.S.T.~

Dear Journal~

Rat-Nose here.  Mark, really, but everyone calls me Rat-Nose.  Easier that way, I guess (or else they think I look like a rat; don't really know the reasons why they call me that!).

Can't sleep; decided to write in here.  Just after five in the morning; still dark outside, will start gettin' light within the hour.  It's hot outside:  not even six in the morning, temps hovering near eighty; gonna' be a scorcher today.  Ah, such is summetime here in Texas:  you expect it to be hot.

Today we are going to Crowley, Texas; they are having a huge Freedom Day celebration at the park there.  This is the second year for it; they are saying it's going to be better than last year's.  Don't know why they didn't have it on the Fourth; the Fourth was last week.  They are having live music, a parade (that's at nine, to kick things off), military flyovers, and to cap the evening, a huge fireworks display that may last as long as a half hour.

Speaking of the Fourth, our city had theirs last week; it was good.  I got sunburnt; looked like an overcooked crawfish. LOL Still peeling now; at least I'm not bright red anymore! LOL  Saw an awesome fireworks display, shot off fireworks with some buddies, just had a great time. 

I wish it could be the Fourth of July every day--that, or Christmas! LOL

It is during times like this when I'm in my element:  don't have to worry, think about school, homework.  I can do what I want, when I want, how I want, with nobody to bother me.  Now, if I'm jeopardizing my life in one way, my parental units will get sore at me. :P  That's different. LOL

I have been writing to my three new Internet buddies; they tell me about what's going on with them, and I do the same.  We've been having some interesting convos.  Paul in Australia tells me about koalas and 'roos, and something called Vegemite.  Johnathon and Ronee' tell me about their huge family, their performing, and what it's like living with disability.  It's really cool how we learn about other people.  I am starting to enjoy getting to know new people this way.

We talk at least once a day or every other day; seems that I'm always on the computer, much to my folks' dismay; they're always gripin' about the high cost of electricity. LOL

Seems that is all that's on the news:  the high cost of everything.  And I'm afraid it's not going to get any better.  Things may go even higher, puttin' more people in a bind.  It's crazy how expensive is nowadays--everythin's goin' up and up except for people's paychecks!

The election prospects have also been on the news.  If I were old enough to vote, I'd be pullin' for John McCain.  He may not be the best choice for president, but he's gotta be better than the other guy, Obama bin Laden (or whatever his name is).  Somethin' about Obama scares me; I don't trust that man.  I pray he doesn't get in to the Office, or else we're doomed, in my opinion!

I have been followin' the election news, and from what I hear, it seems that John McCain might be our better hope--although the experts are saying otherwise; they expect our country's problems to get even worse.  Great, just what I did NOT want to know! *sighhhh*

I think I'll vote for Garfield-the-Cat.  Or maybe Odie.  LOL

Well, I guess I'm going to vamanos outta here.  I am sure my parents will be rising within the hour; then we have to get ready for our day in Crowley.  I am lookin' forward to it; it's like we're celebratin' the Fourth of July all over again!  I will write how it went next time; stay tuned for a full report at ten tonight on KRAT radio, courtesy of your rovin' reporter, Rat-Nose!  Take care and God bless!

~Rat-Nose. :D

 

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Reviewed by Jon Willey 7/14/2008
Well Mark, that is what I prefer to all him rather than the abasing, Rat-Nose. Politics! What a revolting subject that has become the last twenty years! The fire works would delight me. Stay safe. JMW
Reviewed by D. Kenneth Ross 7/13/2008
Great Idea here. Journaling is becoming a real event with writers of all levels. The journal entries of Rat-Nose provide a forum for getting all manner of personal issues out of the author's inner voice, and at the same time entertaining the readers. (visa vi: political thoughts as Rat-Nose. He might well be able to touch on issues a direct authors comment might not. Simply by encouraging comments from the opposition.) gonna read more!
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 7/13/2008
Righto kid! you should be called Mark, and when others say otherwise ask them how long as been since they took a look of their disgusting faces in the mirror.
Hoping you have a swell time at the festival!

Georg
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 7/12/2008
Great show of awareness from this young man. He takes (seemingly!) being called RatNose on the chin with equanimity; is aware of his parents' economic concerns and social issues shaping them... and is even interested in politics and government... to be applauded! Us Brits just seem to be led more by what's on the TV and what latest (unneccesary!) gadget we can afford... Many would struggle to name who was actually running for office... let alone who and what the candidates stand for. Journaling is a motivated and disciplined activity and a fine way not to lose the precious atmosphere of each day as it is lived. ENJOY THE DAY!! Kate xx
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 7/12/2008
Hope you and Karla have a wonderful time at the Freedom Festival. It's great how you weave your experienes into your stories. I wish
Rat-nose wasn't called Rat-nose, although your stories express how some kids get stuck with awful nick names that follow them through life. Good story.


















at-nose
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 7/12/2008
Well he has made some wise points and I think I will be like ed and vote for Rufuz, we can't go wrong. He sounds like a good honest, trustworthy friend to Ed. Thank you for sharing Karen.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 7/12/2008
Thank you for sharing this story with us, I love the candid feel of this story
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat 7/12/2008
Karen

Beautiful story and commentary on our society.

Mary
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/12/2008
I think I'll vote for Garfield-the-Cat. Or maybe Odie. LOL

And don't forget, Rufuz!

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