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Boardwalk: Coney Island, New York
by Mark M Lichterman
Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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     Feeling the soft pressure of Marsha’s breasts on his back and the cool touch of her bare legs against the back of his bare legs and her warm breath and moist tongue in his ear, even though he knew she was teasing him, even here, even within this mass of people, the feel of her breasts, the brushing of her body, and the touch of her tongue brought about the usual...

 

Coney Island, New York

June 20, 1956

 

“Four, Mitchie, get me four!”

The young man looked over his shoulder, “Four? You want four?” as he with his wife close behind got into line behind a hairy, barefooted man wearing bathing trunks. “I thought you were the guy that wasn’t ever going to eat lobster?”

Even thought it was mid-week, the combination of the weekly Wednesday night firework display, a near ninety degree day and the balmy evening had brought thousands of milling people to Coney Island and the boardwalk was packed, but nowhere as jam-packed as it was before the front of the blue and yellow clapboard structure with the yellow and blue sign that read:

 

                      “NATHAN’S

           COCA-COLA   HOT DOGS  

    LOBSTER ROLLS   SHRIMP ROLLS”

 

“Yeah, that’s right.” Moving even closer, putting both arms around his waist, rubbing her breasts provocatively against his back, whispering  into his ear, “But that was before you made me, mmm,” Nipping  his ear-lobe, breathing her sultry breath in his ear, “eat a, mmm,” Bending her knees outward, into the backs of his knees, causing his knees to buckle forward, flicking the inner ridge of his ear with her tongue, “lobster roll. Mmmm!”

Feeling the soft pressure of Marsha’s breasts on his back and the cool touch of her bare legs against the back of his bare legs and her warm breath and moist tongue in his ear, even though he knew she was teasing him, even here, even within this mass of people, the feel of her breasts, the brushing of her body, and the touch of her tongue brought about the usual, and – really, though, any of the three individually would bring about the very same result and – a part of Mitchell’s body responded.

Leaning to the side, looking down, Marsha saw that she’d gained the response she’d inspired... and expected.  Smiling, taking her arms from about his waist, but pinching his behind in the process...

“Ouch! Jesus, Marcie,” Pretending to pout, but truly loving her every touch, “you got sharp nails!”

“The better to pinch you with, my dear.” Backing away, “I’ll get a bench.”

“No,” moving forward as the line shortened, “I’ll need help.”  But Marsha was gone and Mitchell, and his stretched fly, were alone in the crowd.

... Looking.

Holding two “Coke” bottles by their necks in one hand and a bag with “fries” and eight miniature hamburger buns with grilled lobster salad in the other, looking for Marsha...

The multi-hued light of the setting sun reflecting upon Marsha Lipensky’s face...

My, God...  

Sitting on a bench gazing at the calm ocean, shiny strands of long black hair moving about her head in the slight, summer breeze, Marsha’s long, slender legs stretched forward, the soles of her sandals pressed upon the bottom slat of the wooden balustrade... 

His breath catching,  My God, he thought, she’s so beautiful!

Sensing she was being watched, turning her face in his direction... 

Crossing her eyes, Marsha stuck her tongue out at him.

Four months from her twentieth birthday, Marsha Lipensky, nee Goldman, was tall, 5 foot 7& ½ inches tall, and thin, weighing one hundred, twenty pounds.  Her luxurious black hair, bound close to the scalp accentuated her sharp widow’s peak, giving her a pony tail that hung midway down her back. Marsha has an oval shaped face with a slightly long nose, almond shaped, dark-brown eyes, short lashes and well shaped brows.  Her complexion is clear and dark, and made even darker by a deep tan, producing, if not a stunningly lovely face by ‘movie star’ standards, than certainly a classically beautiful, Semitic appearance.

Marsha wore white, knee-length shorts, a white, short-sleeved cotton blouse and black sandals.

Two months from his twenty-second birthday, Mitchell Lipensky is six feet tall, weighed one hundred, seventy-eight pounds, has straight, dark-brown hair, with, coincidently, a widow’s peak. He has a roundish face, green eyes, long lashes and thick, tending to be scraggly brows.  Mitchell has a well shaped nose, and he, too, is dark completed and also made darker by an early summer tan.

Mitchell wore white shorts, a light-blue T-shirt and, not too clean, white deck shoes.

Heads would turn to look at either Marsha or Mitchell singularly, because individually they were both strikingly good-looking people, but together, they complemented each other.

“Hi, baby!” Sitting on the bench, placing the bag and bottles between them, “J’ya miss me?”

“ ‘Miss you’? Yeah! Did I ever miss you... Where’s the grub?”

A burst of light, then, ‘poom’, the reverberating sound of the first rocket of the night, that was felt in the chest as well as heard.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by m j hollingshead 10/22/2008
well done
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 10/22/2008
To me, there is something very sensual about the promise of a touch, the brushing of skin upon skin, the hint of more. I loved how you allow your reader to totally envision your characters and your scene, and then on top of that, to experience the feelings that they are experiencing. Yep, rockets red glare! Nice! ~Your friend, Elizabeth/#1 Fan

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