the black hole of Calcutta is a brilliant light relative to the darkness herein -- did romance take the a-train from your Muse? --this is overtly intense Vickie -- your writing is brilliant -- I only wish it was wearing a little smile, "Romantic Poetess" -- may peace,love and joy be always with you --- JMW
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1/7/2009
Dark? More like a blackout for the mind!
Whoa..where did this one come from Romantic Poetess?
My goodness! Who turned out the light? For a dark poem and I haven't read many, this is very much alive with stuff which desires to cling to my consciousness. The darkness undulates in these lines.Excellent for a dark poem.
Blessings J'nia
If you ever been in Autralia's aborigin's domains, some nights you will hear that kind of music which can call that kind of thoughts where rage and fear mixed with outrage, acceptance with andrepulsion and love with cruel owners of indemnity.
An impervious to argument poem, an extraordinary one.
A dungeons philosophy?
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.