I just downloaded this story and read it. What a great writing style you have and although I knew that something was coming, the end made me chuckle. As you well know, I can identify with the embarrassment caused. I haven't had this experience yet but I still have time... *groaning at the thought*
Thanks for sharing your considerable writing skills. I look forward to reading more.
Chanti
Farctured Frazzled Folk Fables and Fairy Farces, Part II satirizes popular children's stories into adult-oriented renditions. FFFF &FF, Part II is also available in Amazon Kindle and Barnes and Noble e-book formats.