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     Ice Jasmine Esquivar updates us on the status of her younger sister and other happenings in her life.

Hello!  Ice here, Ice Jasmine Esquival, of Trenton, New Jersey!  Thought I'd write in here to let you know what's been up with me.

I am happy to say that Fawn, my younger sister (she's thirteen and a special child), is out of the hospital; she came home over the weekend.  She's very weak, but she's doing a lot better, much to our relief.   It's so good to have her back; we've missed her terribly!

My brother Jesus is trying to find some odd jobs to do, like helping out the neighbors, to pay for the window he busted last week when he put a basketball through it.  He is learning to take responsibility for his actions.

Bronson, my brother with autism, is okay some days, not so okay on others.  He still spazzes out when things don't go the way he wants them to; dealing with his unpredictable behavior is difficult at best.

Nevaeh, my baby sister, is as cute and adorable as ever.  She has mami and daddy wrapped around her chubby little finger; all she has to do is say something cute or look at them with her big, dark eyes or her dimpled grin, and they positively melt!

She's not so bad; it's Bronson who gives me the most headaches.  Jesus can be a pain, too, especially when he gets into one of his belligerent moods.  Or when he picks on me.

He gets mad when people mess up his name.  He says, "It's not JEE-sus; it's Hay-soos!!"  This is when he wishes he had a different first name.  I don't blame him.  We can tell when he's had a bad day by how he acts.  If people don't make fun of him, he's all sweet; if they've been giving him a hard time about his name, he turns mean as a snake.

I sometimes get picked on about my name, too; I mean, whoever heard of a kid named 'Ice'??  I don't know of any other Ices runnin' around; I sometimes feel like a freak because my first name is so unusual!

The weather is trying to warm up; it just hasn't really made up its mind yet.  The calendar says it's spring; it feels more like January some days.  We've had some snow flurries the past few days (that or rain); maybe by next week the temperature will finally break out of the forties.  Oh, I hope so; I am so sick of cold weather/snow/rain, I could just spit nails!

I had a good time on Easter break, but Easter isn't until this Sunday (or maybe it's the Sunday after; I can't remember)!  Anyway, Easter hasn't happened  yet, so why did we have Easter break early??  It doesn't make any sense whatsoever!

Well, gang, I have to run along.  Have to get ready to go to school, then go to my friend Juana's house; we're having a study date tonight.  (Have a killer test on Friday in History; want to make sure we know what we need to know, so we don't flunk out!)  Until later, this is Ice signing off; I'll write in here soon!  Take care and God bless!

~Love, your friend in New Jersey, Ice Jasmine.  :)

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Reviewed by Georg Mateos 3/26/2009
Ice and Jersey, what a combination! I am with brother PeeWee here, you must watch for our lil'brother Jersey Devil Ed, he's trouble!

Edvard(k) the softest Elder

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 3/25/2009
Karen you always write an engaging story, thsi is no exception, I do not know how you keep up
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle 3/25/2009
I love all of your characers in your stories Karen. I don't know- I kind of like the name ice.Greta story.

With Love,
Cindy
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 3/25/2009
I think Ice Jasmine is a lovely name maybe someday she will like it better, there is always something with young people...great update
peace and love, Carole~
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/25/2009
I like the name, Ice - sounds very cool! I also like the name Hay-soos.

PS Since you live in Jersey, watch out for that old Jersey Devil!!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 3/25/2009
Good update but have to agree with her, what were her parents thinkng to hand out names like that, did they not look ahead at what the consequences of such names would be in a child's development. I mean parents do take on a grave responsibility in naming their children and Ice of course for a girl although it sounds pretty as she grows she will be called Frigid, chilli dog etc and Jesus, I won't even go there for although in Latin countries such as Mexico it may be common I would think in the USA as in Canada he would be teased by his peers unmercifully and as you describe so well...it will cause him personality disorders and behavorial problems as well. Thought provoking write Karen.
Hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Linda Zebsokey 3/25/2009
Wonderful. It's good to hear that Fawn is finally out of the hospital.

Love,
Linda
Reviewed by Paul Berube 3/25/2009
Thanks for the update Karen. Yes, Karla's right; all children are special. Well written my friend. God bless.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 3/25/2009
I agree with Karla's statement but I have also thought over the years that some folks need that special NEED to see and know why they are placed in this world. Thank you Karen for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose
Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello 3/25/2009
Hi Karen Lynn,

I enjoyed this very much! Jesus is a common name in my country, and so is Maria Juana, and when said in a hurry it becomes "marijuana" (hashish). Great write Karen!

Cynthia
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/25/2009
Karen,

An excellent write ... ALL children are special, some just have special needs. :) Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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