AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Margaret Mullings, iRobert Liu, iGracie McKeever, iShannon MacLeod, iPeter Jessop, iFERIAL Haque, iDean Cambourakis, iAlexander Shaumyan, iGibbs Williams, iAnita Shaw, i

  Home > Sociology > Stories
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry      Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     
Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Sponsor Me!
· Success story
· Stories
· Blog
· 7,121 Titles
· 35,277 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Before 2003

Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.




     A story about a homeless man, as told by one of his friends.

Image (C) 2009, Karla Dorman.

Q-Man is my name.  I live on the streets of downtown Fort Worth; don't got a home to call my own; been livin' this way ever since my wife threw me out.  Cheated one too many times; now look where it got me.  On the streets.  This life ain't worth livin'; I deserve far better than what I got.

I used to be friends with Eek.  Never did know his real name; poor guy was tetched in the head.  He always talkin' out of his head, talkin' to people that wasn't even there; people oftentimes thought he be on drugs he was so out of it at times.  Felt sorry for him; he couldn't have been more'n 22 to 25 at the most:  he was just a baby-faced kid; he might have been in his twenties, but he looked no older'n fifteen at the most.

I firs' met Eek las' Thanksgiving when the shelter we was stayin' at had Thanksgiving dinner for the residents.  It was right nice; the meal was a traditional Thanksigiving Day meal:  turkey, cranberries, sweet potatoes, mashed potatoes, stuffin', choice of pecan, apple, or punkin pie for dessert, and green bean casserole.  It was wonderful to be able to eat real food for once 'stid of scroungin' 'round in the dumpsters for somethin' edible, which is what a good portion of us homeless folk usually done.

Well, anyways, I be eatin', havin' me a fine time, when I saw this kid sittin' all by hisself.  I felt sorry for him, so I sat with him, tried to strike up a conversation with him.  He didn't say more'n five words at the most; if he did, he talked crazy-talk, but he seemed to be a right nice fella.  He said his name was Eek, and he was from the planet Zircon.  (See?  Told ya he was tetched in the head; usually what he say don't make any real sense!)

He seemed to be harmless enough, so he and I became friends.  I found out that Eek loved jelly beans, in any shape, color, or form.  He also loved marshmallows and gummy bears.  He was livin' on the streets because his parents had too many kids and they say he another mouth to feed, so they threw him out the house.  He been on the streets since, tryin' to survive, just as we all was.

I took to Eek like a big brother.  I tried to make sure he eat enough or had fairly decent clothes on his back.  He was a ratty lookin' kid, all skin and bones; hell, if a big breeze done blowed in, he would have blowed away like a kite!  I tried to make sure he got to his doctor appointments; he had seizures and often had convulsions when you least 'spected it.  They'd scare the hell out of you too, each an' every time.

Well, just a few months back, Eek, he got hit by a car while crossin' the street.  Durn fool never looked as he crossed the street; he just barrelled into traffic and hope the cars missed him.  Well, a nice Hummer H2 nailed him but good; he died a few hours later of his injuries. We knowed from seein' him lyin' in the street that he was hurt bad.  An ambulance was called; he was taken to the hospital, but nothing could be done for Eek.  He was as good as gone already by the time they got him to the hospital.

He was only 24 years old, just barely out of childhood/teendom.  Such a waste; he would have lived longer had he not tooken crazy chances!

Well, we miss Eek; he might not have said much (or looked like much), but he was a right nice kid, just the same: never said anythin' bad 'bout anybody; he respected people, and when he wasn't in his own li'l fantasy world, he could make you laugh when you least expected it.

Well, I'm cryin' again as I think of my little buddy, so I'd best go.  I will write in here again soon and maybe perhaps share my story.  I think I have a story to tell, so I will write again.  Take care!

~Q-Man.  

Want to review or comment on this short story?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


Reviewed by Georg Mateos 1/13/2010
Some times one are driven to think that life is a lottery game, some win all the time, some just lose!

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 1/13/2010
So very sad, Karen.
Reviewed by Margaret Mullings 1/13/2010
This is such a sad story Karen, yet you tell it so well
with meaning and with purpose! What a powerful gift you
have. Thanks for sharing and caring! Be encouraged the
Lord will make a way and grant to you His favor!


Much Love,
Margaret
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 1/12/2010
What a shift from homes, no matter how poor or unhappy, or the one that is ill, to the mean streets and a young man that belongs in an institution rather than on the streets. So very well written, as is whatever your subject Karen.
Your friend in southern California; Mark
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 1/12/2010
Sad when a young life is taken, before it really begins, in December a friends twenty five year old Son died, this hits home closer than you know
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 1/12/2010
This one is sad ... a young life, wasted before it even got started. :( Well penned, Karen.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle 1/12/2010
What a sad story. I am so glad your writing a story from the persective of someone who is homeless. Great idea. Ypur creativity is really awesome!
With Love,
Cindy

Popular Sociology Stories
  1. Misadventures in Furnitureland
  2. To The Eccentric Somebodies Nobody Wan
  3. The Reunion
  4. Assumption
  5. Prelude to Lock-up...no crime needed
  6. The Eyes of Christ
  7. Death of Innocence (Revised)
  8. The Reunion (Revised again)

Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

The New Debtors' Prison by Paul Lonardo

While Debtors prisons no longer exist, many people continue to be persecuted for crimes related to poverty or inability to repay money owed to municipalities. This practice remains in an injustice that needs to be rectified.  
Member BookAds

Free Download - The Labor Divide by Sam Vaknin

Modern labour theories and practice. Covers issues like employment, unemployment, migration, brain drain, entrepreneurship, workaholism, and trade unions.  
Member BookAds

Free Download - The Labor Divide by Sam Vaknin

Modern labour theories and practice. Covers issues like employment, unemployment, migration, brain drain, entrepreneurship, workaholism, and trade unions.  
Member BookAds