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     A little boy is missing his father, who is currently serving in a faraway country.

Image of American flag (C) 2010, by Karla Dorman.

I miss my daddy.

I wish he could come home.

My daddy is in a country called Iraq.  He is there because he wants to help keep America safe from bad people who want to hurt her and her people.  He went away last year when I was six.  I'm now seven, and I am the man of the house.

It is hard because there are many things that daddy does that I can't do, like pay the bills, go to work, or fix things.  I am still a little kid.  Instead, mommy does the big stuff.  I just go to school and try to behave myself and take care of my family.

Besides me, there's my mommy, and my little brothers Tad and Toby.  They're four and two.  I don't know if they miss daddy like I do, but I am sure they wonder where he is sometimes.  Boy, I know I miss my daddy; my daddy is lots of fun!

Before he went to Iraq, daddy would play with us boys.  He'd play football, toss us in the air, and play tickle-games to make us laugh.  Now mommy does that, and it's not the same.

Sometimes, I watch the news on tv and see the bad things going on in Iraq.  I worry that daddy will get killed or hurt.  The other day I saw a story on the news about a man who lost his legs by a bomb.  He's now in a hospital learning how to walk on fake legs and crutches.  I don't want that to happen to my daddy; I don' t know what I would do if that would happen to him!!  I'd probably cry my eyes out!

Usually, though, when the news is on, mommy tells me to play or mind my brothers.  I don't mind doing that.  I'd rather play with Tad and Toby or play some games than to watch tv.  There's lots of bad things on tv that kids don't even need to see!

On Sundays, we go to church.  At church, I go to Sunday school; that's where we learn about God and Jesus.  While there, I pray to God to help keep my daddy safe.  He  must be listening because sometimes daddy writes to us or sends us pictures on the computer, and that always makes me happy. 

Well, I gotta go.  Mommy is calling.  I will write in here again; until then, this is Timmy saying bye!  Keep praying for my daddy!  He can really use all the prayers he can get!  Thanks!

~Timmy O'Rourke, aged seven.  :( 

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Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 6/15/2010
Karen, this touches the heart.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 6/14/2010
Hard when a child is forced to be the adult, well written though, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Paul Berube 6/14/2010
Sad but very well updated, Karen. You bring the characters to life.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/14/2010
H E A R T B R E A K I N G, Karen ... a seven year old boy should not be man of the house. :( Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Margaret Mullings 6/14/2010
This is a heartfelt story Karen, written with excellence!
My prayers are with all the dads and moms who are in Iraq,
and for their families. Thank you so much for sharing and for
always caring about others!


Much Love,
Margaret
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 6/14/2010
Such a brave young man. Prayers for his daddy. Patrick
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/14/2010
Always there will be a child asking why Daddy is not home when duty call comes.

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/14/2010
Another good characterization of a child missing his father...
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