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     "Todd and I had been going out for over six months now; I thought I had a prince in him. Instead, all I got was a toad. A big, fat, ugly, warty toad!"

A teenaged girl has broken up with her boyfriend.

Don't I deserve to be happy?

I mean, what exactly is wrong with me?  Am I not good enough to have a "special someone" in my life?

I broke up with Todd.  Last night.  Todd and I had been going out for over six months now; I thought I really had a prince in him.  Instead, all I got was a toad.  A big, fat, ugly, warty toad!!

Guess it was over something stupid.  I don't know, but suddenly, I don't have Todd in my life anymore; he doesn't want to have anything more to do with me.  He called me last night after we'd seen each other earlier in the day and he dropped the bomb on me.  Just like that.

I was stunned. I was beyond stunned:  I was totally mortified.

Maybe it is because of the new girl, Tiffany Cade, that moved into our neighborhood.  She looks like the typical slut:  revealing clothes that emphasize her long, lanky legs, big boobs, and tight butt, acting all sexy around the guys at the pool, thinking that she's all that.  Well, I've seen Todd ogling her right in front of me, and I did not like it at all! 

He's done this more than once.  I guess he thought I was yesterday's news.  Suddenly he didn't seem to be interested in me any longer.  All he wanted to do was talk about Tiffany.  Well, I told him what I thought of Tiffany.  He has since dropped me like a hot potato.

As you can imagine, I am depressed.  I want nothing more to do with guys.  All they do is try to win your heart, and when they finally do, they manage to stomp on it until it's flatter than a flitter, leaving you feeling rejected and useless.

I've had it with boys!  There!  I said it!  Are you listening, Todd Jeunger????

I wish Tiffany Cade had never even moved into my neighborhood.  She's turned Todd Jeunger into a roving, groveling, drooling idiot who suddenly has a boob and butt fetish!!  I hate her guts; in fact, I wish her dead.  She's ruined me, completely turned my life upside down!!  She took away the only thing that mattered to me:  my boyfriend, Todd Jeuger!!

I wish I never even knew about Tiffany Cade!  She's nothing but a slut and a boyfriend stealer!!  

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Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 9/7/2010
Boy the perills of teenage love
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Paul Berube 7/17/2010
Young emotions well put to words, Karen.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/17/2010
You captured a young girls rejection emotions well and this is how they feel but sadly the "other" girl did her a favor for if he could be lured away that easily then she didn't have much to begin with.
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Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 7/17/2010
No, teenage do not try to win your heart, they try to win other anatomy, but the results are frequently the same. Patrick
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/17/2010
Teenage romance -- UGH. Today's boyfriend is tomorrow's breakup ... life confusing enough without the emotional rollercoaster of 'love.' Teens don't know what love is. :( Well penned, Karen.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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