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Sunday Morning Swim
by Dawn Anderson
Friday, August 27, 2010

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     What Susan Sonnen calls a "postcard story."

I watch as a black ant walks along the side of the pool while I dangle my legs in the water. I wonder if he is truly foolish enough to actually go over the edge – sure enough, seconds later, he does. (Forgive me for using the word “he”… it is just how I think of the ant). He drifts out some distance, (at least for an insect of such small stature), and then tries to swim back toward the pool wall in an effort to save himself. I turn my head briefly to watch a starling fly overhead and when I look back, the ant is gone. Did he find his way out of the pool – or go under? I think the latter –I looked away only briefly, so it seems unlikely that he could have escaped so quickly – and I try to imagine what would make him take such a chance – was he suffering from extreme thirst? (There has been a shortage of rain in Spain). Did he feel like a swim? Perhaps it was the quest for a little excitement? Curiosity, or plain old stupidity? I am not an ant, so I cannot begin to understand what he was thinking. But  then, I wonder if he died in a panic… or peacefully because he took such a wonderful risk. After all, how many ants can say that they died taking an early morning swim in a picture postcard fishing village in Spain?

 

 

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Reviewed by Amor Sabor 11/4/2010
You have given a personality to the little ant. Odd thing is though...sometimes I just scoop the little guy out of a similar situation and send him on his way...but if I find them in my kitchen I spray the heck out of them. I am such a contradiction.
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 9/7/2010
Indeed!
Reviewed by Cryssa C 8/31/2010
Your story made me smile... :~) I must admit it also made me think of the conversation I had with my 8 year old son this afternoon when he explained to me that he didn't like following rules so he doesn't. (This was after I asked him why he was walking down the middle of the street near our home... His reply... "There were lots of grasshoppers on the sidewalk!") Maybe the poor ant, like my son, felt there were too many grasshoppers on the sidewalk and felt that it was worth the risk of drowning to have room to walk alone. (Or maybe he just doesn't like following rules either... hee, hee...)

Cryssa :~)
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 8/30/2010
You have me feeling sorry for the poor little guy:) Cute story.
Sheila
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 8/28/2010
What detailed and yet epic subjects!!!
To risk or to play it safe...
How does a tiny creature's life and death fit in the great scheme of things...

(I always worry and wonder about the little bug creatures and their untimely deaths too!)

Yes, this is a picture perfect postcard!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by D Johnson 8/28/2010
Dawn, nice little story, well done!

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen 8/27/2010
I wish I was there with you two! :D Thank you for sharing this beautiful moment.
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 8/27/2010
An interesting story, Dawn, and some strong observations. We'll never know will we. That's the way it is in life sometimes. We look away for a moment and then the image, thought, feeling, or what have you, is all gone.
Reviewed by L Hippler 8/27/2010
That is true sensetivity -- and a beautiful thing to see.
Reviewed by John Domino 8/27/2010
My wife and I have compassion for all of God's creatures. I must admit it is hard to love a horse fly that is biting you. I for one hope the ant made it. The ant never seems to be unemployed. Hey, that is another point of view for a poetic song.

Blessings,

John
Reviewed by George Carroll 8/27/2010
Great inventive story that shows how we can have compassion and wonder of God's smallest creatures and of their seemingly demise.

George

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